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Something, something, something, dark side. Something, something, something, complete.

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Sunset Shimmer looked at the note again, though she could barely read it. "Midnight, CHS football field, be there, alone." No clue who'd sent it. No idea why. Total mystery why she'd even shown up.

But she was the curious type.

Romance between Sunset Shimmer and Lemon Zest.

Proofread by Infinity Shade.

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Comments ( 34 )

Romance between Sunset Shimmer and no spoilers.

Best ship 11/10.

I totally fell for it.

Comment posted by Inazuma deleted Dec 25th, 2015

6765127 No spoilers plz.

6765410 Oh sorry. My bad.

Certainly a novel pairing. Not sure if I ship it, but novel.

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"Not related to My Little Pony". The new version includes a lot more references to Lemon Zest's activities in Friendship Games, especially skating.

Wow, nice ship, I think it could really sail XD
Very good dynamic between the two, but that last part with sunset was very too soon I think.

Good job though

The groups this is in kinda spoil the spoiler,:derpytongue2: but great story anyways!

I honestly think most of everyone works as a potential partner for Sunset, only if, of course, they're female, cuz gay sunset for life

Not who I was expecting, I do however approve of this ship.

Now all we need is a sequel.

I want a story like this for every Shadowbolt.

Actually, scratch that, I want at least four stories like this for every Shadowbolt.

I read this to see who you shipped Sunset with, and I'll be honest, I'm not happy I did. Not that I oppose the ship, but because you're being childish about "no spoilers".

Not really sure how I feel about this. I would have liked to know who it was. I was hoping for Twilight

It was fine, it was cute, but to be honest I'll forget I ever read it by tomorrow.

*Gets anonymous note to meet somewhere at midnight*

*Knows that it could be someone waiting to kill her*

*Goes anyway*

Sunset = Fucking savage confirmed.

I'm going to say who is shipped with Sunset!

It's- cjnfjsnfjeo,fnfuor,gnf

*dies of a heart attack*

*becomes a ghost*

I̧̘̟ ҉͕̱̪͚͇͓̺s̬̰̣e̬e͇̼͞ͅ ̙́y̢̜̭͇͈̜̠͇o̪̲̭̪̮̬͚ú ͖̼͓͔̥ͅV̺̞̩͇̠̦́i̫̭̻t̶̤̲͓a̸l̝̙̪͔̕S̻̠p͚̲͢a̟r̪̠̬̩͙̀k̳ ̬͠w̻͚̲̤̖̟͍͘i̯̙̟̩͚͟t͔h̛̝̳ ̟̣̮͚t̨͓̩̲h̡̤̖̰̺a̤t̯̥̹̤ ͞De̝͕̪̫͓̭͇a̼t̨͙͔ḥ̥ ̧͍̗̙̣̪̦̤N̶̦͍o̖̲̺̰̗͝t͍̭e͕͚̼ ̬̯̠b̫̠̦oo̲̜̻͙̜k͍̤ ̤͔̙̖̪͚͠th͓͙̤̗i҉̙̦͕̰͍̟̪n̜̮͓̻̤͍g̣̥̪͜!

When I read the description I imagined Flash Sentry doing this:

Spoiler alert: It's a character we know.

Well, that's a bit of a random pairing. Not one I think I'd ship myself, but one I can get behind reading more of.

Sequel? :pinkiehappy:

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I tend not to write direct sequels because they have a limited audience. If I wrote a sequel to this, only the 700-or-so people who have read this one would be likely to read the next one (and not even all of them). If I write something new, it potentially has an audience of thousands.

7402517 I suppose that makes sense.

7402517
i love it!!
and compliments for the sunset shimmer ship(s)
keep up da gud work

A very well written story, the dialogue is incredibly natural.

I just want to comment that I love all the secrecy and censored comments! That had me rolling already. I don't think it's childish or mean. As much as I wanted to know who it was before reading it, I find the playfulness endearing! :pinkiehappy:

7398648 Also yes. So much yes. This was the first thing I thought of!!! :rainbowlaugh:

Okay, so my old description:

Romance between Sunset Shimmer and no spoilers.

Has now been changed. There's now a Lemon Zest tag, so I might as well just admit it's her now.

Now that I actually got to read this, I need more

Woah, this was so adorable!!

Never seen this ship before but man this was awesome.

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