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Heavenly Quill

hello all i'm just your average brony trying to make cool stories for people to enjoy. i hope my stories are nice and entertaining


Heavenly Quill is the new student At Crystal Prep Academy, a place where success means crushing anyone in your way. Quill is nervous to be going to a school like this but, could the friendship and possible love of a certain green haired rocker girl give him the confidence he needs, or is it all just a lie ?

Cover art by darkhatdesign

And thanks so much to Azure_Shadow for letting me join the Pome universe, and thanks to KillerRobotQuote for editing my story!

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 70 )

New guy + New Perspective = CANT F****IN WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!

Straight: He better stay the hell away from Jess.

Great job so far man, can't wait to see the rest!!

For the love of God all you have to do is get to the end without rushing it and you beat out like almost every single Prep School story on the freakin' site.


Treble: Well lads, we have another member of our- oh wait his going to crystal prep... Lets kill him.

Anyway good story! Brings a new perspective to the PomE world :pinkiehappy:

Oh boy, if Quill finds out he's being used...I can't even decide what will happen.

Warhawk: For fuck's sake Treble, were not going to kill him.

6521410 Treble: Yes we are! Shia La-beef said so!

Comment posted by Ghostrider159 deleted Oct 13th, 2015

6521410 if Shia La-beef said so then we are fucking doing!!!:flutterrage:

6522049 Quill: Can we stop talking about killing me! i'm new here!

Warhawk: Sorry dude, I tried.

great chapter. and instead chopping off just one of the hyrda's heads (killing quill), i say we go right for the source and kill cinch

6522585 KO when is the next chapter coming please.

Indigo held up her phone and showed Quill a photo of a tall, black-haired boy standing beside a girl about a head shorter than him with brightly colored rainbow hair. Both were in what looked like Wonderbolt track uniforms. The boy wore a third place ribbon, and the girl had a second place ribbon.

And then there's Ace and Blitz..... I'll just assume Night came in 6th Place.

6586123 Night actually came in 4th, indigo just wanted a picture of the ones who looked the most pissed off

I like Quill even more now.

6586183 really? i was expecting hate on him for hurting rainbow ( cog please don;t kill me!)

6586233 hey your just lucky he ran into Zero because if ran in to Rivet or Artemis Quill would be dead. But no i don't hate Quill to me he's actually really cool.

Excellent Chapter, oh and by the way.

Zero: If you try to hurt another one of my friends we are going to throw down on the spot, DO YOU HEAR ME!

Treble: Okay I'm here! Wheres the frigging Shadowbolt?!
*Everyone sees Treble holding a katana*

Treble: What? Don't I get involve in this?

Well I was expecting Treble to pop out for no reason again, I guess that can wait. Anyway good chapter! F*cking Sour Sweet :rainbowlaugh:

6587274 *throws a bucket of water* I'm a reader not a fighter

6587302 Quill: Fun fact, katana usage follows the same rules as knives in the u.s.a. soo...bye bye *the police take treble away*

6587332 Treble: Don't worry dude, this is Equestria Girls, nothing makes sense!

funny chapter good job on it.:pinkiesmile:

When I saw that "Gem to Brighten the Darkness" was no longer being updated I was just :fluttercry:, but now that this story exists I'm just :pinkiehappy:

6589598 for now Gem to brighten the darkness is on break while i develop this story. and glad to hear you like it!

WHAT!?!?!?! HE HURT RAINBOW!?!?!? :twilightangry2:

6608394 Quill: Oh come on why does everyone wanna kill me!?

Elec: (Speaks in a demonic voice) BECAUSE YOU HURT RAINBOW!!

6608403 KO please say that the next chapter is coming soon to see the two love birds going out for each other. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::rainbowdetermined2:

6681170 i've started work so the chapters are going to take awhile to make. i;m really sorry

6681172 KO that's fine hope you get around to it.

6681172 KO please say the new chapter is coming soon. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

6769910 i am writing it now. but i don;t know when it'll be finished

6769913 KO awesome can't wait to see what happens next. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

Not to been rude and all but when is chapter 3 coming out?

6995672 i;m not sure, work has been keeping me really busy lately

7278909 thank you but no. im honored that you asked though

Well I'm glad you're getting some friends here. Most people aren't that friendly. Try meeting up with me sometime, Quill.
Anyway, great chapter, and I'm glad to see the next chapter came by. I've been waiting a while.

Well it's about damn time!!! :flutterrage:

Lol, jk. Great chapter dude, it had a lot of laughs, and I loved that but at the end with Quill's mom, that's probably how it'd go if Swift brought a girl home with him. :rainbowlaugh:

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