I like to do Sunset Shimmer stories, and that's about it right now.
A short SunLight one shot.
Shortly after the Freindship Games, Twilight Sparkle began to develop a crush on Sunset Shimmer, but has always been too afraid to admit it. One day however, she finally decides to ask Sunset out on a date.
My first attempt at a romance/ship fic, so don't expect this to be anything above average.
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This was a really good story! I liked it, it was really cute, especially at the end there. Just a few typos that could be fixed though.
7445617 Glad you liked it.
Unfortunately I've always had a problem with typos, I can never catch them until the story/chapter is already up.
Bad story? Far from it my friend, it's actually very cute and simple, two things that I love in one-shot shipfics. Yet there is a lot of typos in your story, you should fix that sometime.
7445929 Thanks. I do try my best to catch all my typos.
Honestly I'm not really sure it's all that good, it is my first ship-fic after all.
I enjoyed it, alot. Be interesting to see a sequel. As Aqua said, it could use some fixing up with the typos and grammar. Good work though otherwise
7445964 Thanks. Glad you liked it.
I'm not really sure if I'll be making a sequel, but you never know.
I really liked it. It short, sweet and well done.
Great Job, Plus i think it's perfect it be Sunset and Sci Twi in this story, Everyone seems to think she like Princess twilight, but while Sci Twi does have the ability to be as great as Princess Twilight, it in her own way.
The two are very different from each other and i think Sunset sees that, she was also seemly worried due to how Poplular Sci Twi is she may of already been asked out or gotten someone.
Fearing she lost her chance.
Heh very nice chapter i give it a thumbs up!
7446544 Glad you liked it.
Fun fact, my preferred SunLight ship is with Princess Twilight, but I have grown to like human Twilight/Sunset just as much recently.
Is too short for my taste, but is Sci-Twi x Sunset, so.. Instant fav x'D
7446729 Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Sci-Twi X Sunset = Heart pounding = Favorite =
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Glad you liked it. 
7445630 me either, my stories are full of them
7448538 Lol. Glad to know I'm not the only one.
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Good story, I enjoyed it a lot.
It does have quite a few spelling and grammar errors though...
7493113 Glad you liked it.
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This is the first SunLight fic I read. :)
I'll just add that when you write a word where friend appears (friendship), you tend to put e before i. Which gives freindship.
It's just an observation. Really liking the story. ^_^
7497568 Thanks. Glad you liked it.
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Sunset and Sci Twi. My favourite.
This is adorable. Nice work well done
Aw. How cute.
Great job! I never really liked Sunlight but this one wasn’t that bad. It was nice!
Only one way to find out of you just try to twilight. Sometimes the answer is different than you expect it to be.
She wasn't and that is just wrong to think that.
Way to go rainbow, pinkie and everyone else who laughed at her, look what you've caused to happen. Thx a lot.
Seems like sunset has a crush on twilight as well?