On a cold snowy evening, Sunset Shimmer and Twilight Sparkle snuggle under the covers to stay warm...

...and giddy.

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Pure bantergasmic bliss. Just the way the Sciset should be.

7851878 Do you ever sleep?

Cute little romantic fluff piece. I do have a couple of concerns:

1. Some of the dialogue felt a little out of place--mostly anything related to Sunset "not being used to" being human/the human world. She's been there long enough by the time she meets this Twilight to practically be a native, and as smart as she is, she should know more about the human world than most of the kids at CHS.

2. "Legally blind"? Sci-Twi's glasses aren't THAT thick. Nearsightedness and legal blindness are not even in the same ballpark.

Outside of that, nice little fic.

This was cute and all but I'm still too caught up in how neat that minimalist approach to narration was. I was pleasantly surprised that it can be used for cuteness. This is a good thing.

My god that was some cute stuff, thank you for this

I'm a sucker for SunLight in any form. But especially when it's as cute as this.
Although I do agree with 7851885 about some of the things Sunset's confused about being odd after years in that world.

Fluff incarnate

I like this. I like this a lot.

heartwarming perfection

That was just super adorable, I loved the way they were characterised here it works so well.

Got a little confusing telling who was talking sometimes.

Snug pones <3

Twilight rolls her legally blind eyes.

Oof. For most of this i thought it was princess twilight, not sci twi. Really threw me for a loop.

What the buck did I just read?!:applejackconfused:

7851884 Sleep is for the weak, dude.

Pitter-pattering girl feet

If Skirts hadn't already made it obvious that he has the same fetish as me, this phrase would get me squinting.


I've got to be the only person who immediately thought of Cyberchase when they read this name.

They dive into the mattress with the force of a collapsing star.

What other author is going to give me sentences like this?

“Your boobs are in the way, Twilight!”

This is the fluffiest fluff that ever fluffed.

“This isn't a Jack London short story, Sunset. Heehee... we're not going to freeze to death—”

I must've read the Great Illustrated Classics version of The Call of the Wild a zillion times as a kid. John Thornton was the shit.

“I-I'd say we're past a lot of things right now. Our diamond collection can prove it.”

Why is that the part that made me lose it?

This was sweet. Capital fluff.

This is a good example of how to make every word in a story count. Really great stuff here!

that there is a lemurism if ive ever heard one!

Even though I much prefer Princess Twi, nobody can make me enjoy a ship I don't ship myself like you can, Skirts. Thanks for this.

I'd been reading a bunch of heavy, thought-provoking, even dark stuff today, and then I see an SS&E fic on the feature page and man this was just what I needed.

Glorious saccharine fluff to the rescue! :twilightsmile:

More of thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis. I love it.

Aaaand, then they wake up in the morning covered in sweat. Shower scene maybe?:twilightsmile:


2. "Legally blind"? Sci-Twi's glasses aren't THAT thick. Nearsightedness and legal blindness are not even in the same ballpark.

As someone who is legally blind, and knows several other people who are also legally blind, I can confirm this. Based on what Twilight does in the movies she can see a hell of a lot better than someone who is legally blind.

Exactly what I needed before bed<3 Thank you.

Jack London for 400 points.

This isn't a Jack London short story, Sunset.

What is "To Build a Fire."

Oh, my god, you just killed me. Killed me with fluff.

It took me a while to figure out that it was Sci-Twi with Sunset and not Princess Twilight, yet that's a moot point considering this was quick and to the point complete with all kinds of awkward moments between them.

This was beautiful, sweet and tender. Amazing :heart:

If this story was any fluffier, Sunset and Twilight could've added it to the pile of blankets. 10/10 loved every minute of it!

I read this heartmeltingly adorable story while drinking a steaming mug of herbal tea and with a warm, soft puppy curled up asleep on my lap. This is it. This is my peak. It can only get worse from here.

I'm reading this during the winter holiday season. Five days before Christmas, if anyone wants a more exact time reference. And this is too adorable to not read as a little prologue to a holiday fic starring this ship.

Wait, SSE writes dialogue???? It’s good, real good

Me likes this fic.

Oh my god this is fluffy heaven I am swooning this is too cute! Bless this fic so much I love it so.

“Go! Quick! Sweet Celestia, hurry!”

“Wow, Sunset, do you really use her name in vain on the other sid—?”


“Sweet Archimedes, it's so c-cold!”

like you have any room to talk

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