• Member Since 7th Dec, 2014
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VitalSpark


Something, something, something, dark side. Something, something, something, complete.

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Run
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Sweetie Belle is leaving Ponyville. As Apple Bloom says goodbye to her, she thinks about everything they've been through together. Does she have what it takes to stop Sweetie going?

This story was inspired by the Foalcon group collab prompt Run, and also by the Snow Patrol song of the same name.

Do people think an "E" tag is appropriate for this story? I've tagged it "T" for now.

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Comments ( 14 )

Awwwwww!!! Love

So adorable! I loved the dramatic build, the atmosphere with the rain, and I think the ambiguity about age and species works well.

I think E is a more accurate rating for this, but if you prefer, T won't hurt it.

So good, I love the ending.

That was adorable! :applecry::heart::unsuresweetie:

So adorablee!! Made me cry a little

5875391 I can read it without crying, but I couldn't write it without crying.

Also, I've been humming that Snow Patrol song to myself all day.

THAT WAS ADORABLE. :heart:

This was soooo adorable. It really struck a chord with me, especially since I've been in a similar situation. Except, I didn't get to tell them how I really felt, after all there was no goodbye. :fluttercry: I really enjoyed this. Thank you. :heart:

Daaaaw! :rainbowkiss: So adorable! And so much emotion in such a small space of time. I really like it, you've earned these :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:

Kawaiiiiiii~ :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss: That was an awesomely cute story, Perhaps a tad cliched, but adorable none the less!

Accepting into the Goodfic Bin. Congratulations.

Have a ribbon. And also details, which are here.

i.imgur.com/GizVyc0.png

Daaaaaaawwwww!

An 'E' rating would be perfectly fine, and I think it fits BETTER!

That was adorable! I really felt the emotions... And it's also one of the precious few SweetieBloom fics on this site...
:twilightsmile:

5875425
Which Snow Patrol song?

Not a lot of things can make me cry...

This was one of the few things that did. It was beautiful, well done.

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