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A few days ago my best friend Diamond Tiara had asked me on a date while we were walking home. I had frozen for a moment out of surprise, but managed to stutter yes. She turned towards the street, so I couldn’t see her face, but she told me that she’d pick me up at three o’clock on Saturday. It was Saturday now, at two fifty-five, and I’ve been rushing around my house for hours trying to make myself as pretty as possible. Because, no matter what this date is like, I’ve loved her for ag-
-Silver Spoon

This is a Romance Request Writing as requested by Diamond Sparkle

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

So romantic. Thank you for taking all that time and trouble to write it for me. :heart:

5332753 It was no problem.:twilightsmile: But... it was supposed to come out two/three weeks ago:facehoof:

5332767 You had rl and rl needs to come first.

I paced by the door.

Narration

She’ll come… right?

That can be taken out of context, and I'm fine with it, and I'm not fine with it

Diamond wouldn’t prank me like that

Assuming she won't, what are you two going to do anyways? You're just foals, it's not like she's going to ask marriage or something.

my braided hair

As always

my best friend Diamond Tiara had asked me on a date

Oh no, it's the desc. all over again!
Also, TEN SECONDS OF THE SAME THING THAT I SAW BEFORE READING THIS?! Is this normal beetween you Americans?

Ding-dong!

Bapa-pong!

“Are you okay?”

Probably, she just trip off, and it's not like you didn't grab her or anything.

had caught me

Oh...

“Yay!”

Discount Fluttershy

terrible acting, terrible story, and terrible makeup

Sounds like Equestria Girls!
Haters inbound.

that’s that

That-Ex-Machina
Also, I know that it wasn't a grammar issue

My friend

Friendzone already?

Tiara, once again, was the leader

I know who is the passive now

“Um, excuse me Silver Spoon,” I turned around quickly. Mr. Cake was in front of me, holding the rootbeer float. “This isn’t enough bits.”

YEAH, HELLO!

only hab two

Only had two, only have two, solo haber dos, JUST DECIDE GOD DAMMIT'!

“That’s alright,” he said, “One bit won’t make too much of a difference.”

Another reason why we must make that portal.

pony with a pink and purple mane.

I had a hard time thinking of who this pony was. When it finally come to mind, it was like "IT'S YOUR FAVORITE CMC, COME ON!"

I really liked this fic, don't get my wrong, but it's plagued of sins. You really need to improve some areas, like the use of pharagraphs and commas, but overall, I really enjoyed it. Weirdly enough though, I've never read any other... Silver Tiara(?) fic on this site, don't know if it is a odd ship or I'm just not searching hard enough. Anyway, try to improve, time will come with the rest.

Yeah, I didn't liked EG nor RR, what'cha gonna' do?

5333996 I found your twin!! Here!

I would respond to the specific comments you made, but I'm too lazy:rainbowwild:

“Well, that was a disappointment.” Tiara and I sat in the movie theater, staring at the screen. The movie had been a combination of terrible acting, terrible story, and terrible makeup. The credits were playing, and we saw what looked like a long list of fake names.

“Yeah, yeah it was,” I replied. “How does something have such a good trailer when the real thing sucks that much?”

Well, Diamond, it depends on the marketing budget, as well as who they hired as a director. Sometimes, the director really makes a difference...

Here, lemme go on IMDB real quick, I'll check and see who directed that movie you went and...

5525219 OHMYGOD IM DYING HERE!!!!!!!:rainbowlaugh:

"How does something have such a good trailer when the real thing sucks that much?”

1998 Godzilla anyone?

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