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Today's the Day! She has the dress, the time, the place, the mare. What could go wrong?

Who knows? Something horrible probably.

Written for contest 2 for Characters That Need More Stories Starring everyone's favorite secretary.

And now with 100% more proofreading courtesy of Cyanhyde

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 13 )

That's a fascinating prequel. Thank you. :heart:

Grace entered her room with a skip and a hop and then nearly fell on her face as she tripped over a discarded pizza box.

You're ruining my head canon. :trixieshiftleft:

Thoughts before going in:

Character is this: derpicdn.net/img/download/2014/1/12/522081__safe_solo_monochrome_sketch_artist-colon-carnifex_rarity+takes+manehattan_spoiler-colon-s04e08_phone_janine+manewitz_grace+manewitz.jpeg

Story will be this: upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/8/8f/Chaos.png

Now, let's do THIS!


*see it's a prequel for another story*

.... Eh, I'll still read it! So, overall thoughts in this story: Short, yet sweet.

That was a sweet story. I don't usually see Grace depicted like this, but you managed to pull it off fantastically. I felt invested in her character and I smiled, laughed, or felt for her throughout the story. I also liked how you connected it with another story of yours. That was a nice touch. I would have liked to see a little more interaction between Grace and Ink-Stain, such as a little more information on how their date went, but their relationship is still well-defined as it is. Anyway, great job, and best of luck in the contest. :twilightsmile:

I didn't even realize it was a prequel, but when I did I was pleasantly surprised :twilightsmile: Feel bad for Grace, though

It's Coco Pommel. And Suri Polomare.

5354104 Knew something was wrong. I'll fix that.

Nice story! It's nice that you entered it into the Characters that Need More Stories Contest!

I've reviewed your story and decided on a vote.

Grace might get another chance at love, but I loved this. :heart:

Hmmm, this is kind of sad, but then this is written by TheWraithWriter.

Do I smell a menage come the threequel? Hmmmm?

Nice story! Only saw one major mistake, but nothing other than that took from the story.

Comment posted by Dr Zoidberg deleted Aug 14th, 2015

5615348 you expected a teen rated story to be a clop fic?

Very nicely done. I really like how well you characterized Grace. n_n

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