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Blackbird2


A pony writer and video maker just trying to find an audience

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Weeks after the Fall Formal Incident, Sunset Shimmer finds herself adjusting to her social status in school and the possibility that she might actually have some friends. That is, if she's willing to accept them. Set between first and second movies.

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“Why do you think?!” the orange girl snapped, tossing her hands up in exasperation.

Nah, she's more light amber than orange.

"She means you taught use that holding a grudge ain’t the best thing in the world to do,” Applejack clarified.

I think you mean "taught US".

“Besides she’s not are friend just yet,” Rainbow pointed out.

"Our friend" you mean.

But aside from those few spelling errors, nice story! :twilightsmile:

Also...

this particular version of FiM isn’t well regarded in most of the fandom.

Are you kidding? Ever since Rainbow Rocks came out, the amount of positive opinions on the EQG franchise skyrocketed! Even people who despised the first movie adored it.

'fist' in short description.

6610555 Yeah but I wrote this before Rainbow Rocks back when people were still undecided on the whole EG world.

Going through my backlog of stories I earmarked to read later... expect to see a few more of these pop up on yours:
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:raritywink:

Well, finally got around reading the first one, and for what's worth, it was quite enjoyable. Granted, as far as story goes, it's barely there, and it all feels more like a start than anything else.

Still, I really enjoyed things like the headcanons applied, like the real Sunset Shimmer being a runaway and her mother being a workaholic. Giving me a few plotbunnies of my own too!

And I think that's more or less all I got to say. Some grammar errors here and there (you need a new grammar beta), but no deal breaker.

So, that's that. Onwards to the next story, and see you in the next review!
Yours, "Running away from Work" Alexander, the Godslayer.

PD: Loved the Rarijack hint!

This a nice little one shot. I like the explanation given why the EQG cast would stay friends with Sunset.

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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

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