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What about this other endings ?
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/574/transformations/thread/169790/inanimate-transformation-story-request#comment/4282221
Damn, that's dark.
Think I would have preferred a choice between endings for this fic. (A good and a bad end, basically.) But still, really good for a horror one-shot.
I've always wanted a fic of that comic since it came out and now that it is it's better than i have hoped
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Thanks very much! Very pleased to hear that. I wonder if all the downvotes are coming from Applejack fans. (Hey guys, I love AJ too! I'm just working with the source I was given
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I am considering an alternate good ending (a few were suggested in the thread), but I haven't planned anything yet.
5877356 - I'm glad it's to your liking :)
Oh boy....
wow that was cool *.* wanna see what happends from now on o.0
This was really good :D I loooove me some dark TF scenes, particularly the mental change you had occur :V
I find it hilarious that I've written something that ended up in the similar list xD
There's just something about ponies becoming edibles that twists my interest in all the right ways. I'd love to see more from you on the subject in the future :D
5877658 - thanks very much! I'll have to read your story. Also I see you're the author of "The Adventures of Sweetie_Belle.jpg", which I found hilarious.
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That one will always remain a constant favorite of mine. I appreciate the like. :V
And now to go promote this to my friends who ALSO love TF scenes :D Expect a few more visitors in a while.
5877733 - Thanks, I appreciate that muchly!
Some dark stuff
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This was dark but not overly so good job.
Wait Did Fluttershy kill Applejack by baking her into a Pumpkin Pie?
I'm still wondering what actually made the pumpkin lose Applejack's consciousness. She seemed to start fading before she was in the oven, so it can't be from being cooked. It seemed to start when the Fluttershy reached the carving of Applejack's face, but why? Applejack mentions feeling dizzy as more was cut off, but why was her spirit solely inside the pumpkin's hard shell? I mean, I'm pretty sure most of a pumpkin is the innards, yet she doesn't lose consciousness until the shell is split. And why would having most of a body cut off mean she dies? Shouldn't she remain inside one small piece? I mean, a pumpkin's technically dead the moment it's vines are chopped...
You did a great job describing how Applejack felt after she became a pumpkin, any chance of you doing similar stories to this but with the other mane 6 ,like Rarity to marshmallow or Twilight into an orange etc..
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Depending on how meaningful death is in this context: yes, she did.
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AJ isn't Cell.
It's a bit more metaphysical than physical, but basically being chopped up into dozens of pieces totally screwed up her mind and her sense of self. By the time she was sitting in the oven, she didn't really have a viable consciousness any more.
5880734 - thanks! I wasn't planning on doing so, no: this story was made much easier because I had great source material to work with.
I'm not saying I won't (because I do enjoy inanimate TFs) , but I'd have to come up with a good plan first.
5880991 (insert Star Wars Darth Vader NOOOOOOO here)
now i hate vore , but seeing a fic made of this made me wonder just now how good an applejackolantern pumpkin pie would taste :l ....
5892723 - depends on the cook, too. Fluttershy usually makes food for her animals, and chances are none of them are too picky about how it tastes.
I don't know why I keep doing this to myself. I see a tf story, I see the dark tag, I know perfectly well what that means… and I read it anyway. It's almost as if I like to make myself suffer.
It was fantastically, written, though.
Now, it may seem on the surface that AJ's death is the most disturbing aspect of this story, but there's something much worse: Imagine what it will do to Fluttershy when she finds out (she will eventually, even if Discord panics and tries to lie about it) that not only is her friend dead, but that she killed her, and not only did she kill her, but she ate her. Fluttershy would never recover from such an emotional blow; Discord has effectively ended her life as well.
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Thanks very much! Yeah, it is pretty horrifying to contemplate. I don't know why I keep making Fluttershy suffer like this.
Oh well there is nothing that can be done about it, so might as well invite the rest of the mane six to enjoy the pie. Save a slice for Apple Bloom too as well.
Great story, I love it when transformed characters start thinking like the thing they transformed into, something that's very rarely done right in fiction-writing, sadly.
I also like that you're covering both mind-control- and Inanimate-TF-fics, I really enjoy those kinds of stories.
Looking forward to whatever you come up with next
5968643 - thanks very much! Next on my list is Fluttershy's Brew 2, which is sort of complete but not quite finalized yet.
Considering applejack was a pumpkin I think that Fluttershy didn't so much kill her, more like she unknowingly dissipated her consciousness.
I didn't think a comic like that would be expanded so well. Nice job on describing her conscious state.
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Excuse me while I go use the restroom *leaves*
Well'p, that was terrifying.
You ought to consider retagging this. Non-con, Fetish, Death and maybe Horror while you're at it.
Oooh. I've read the comic, now I'm interested in seeing where you take it.
Loved it!
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Thank you!