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This was very well-written (and it got me off, but those don't always correlate). My single upvote can't do much to counteract the votes that I assume came from a bunch of anti-cloppers, but I give it anyway.
This is a pretty nice idea.
Not my cup of tea, despite being in the neighborhood of my personal all time favorites, but a cool idea done well regardless. a clopfic with characters stuffed with actual character grade characterization is always a nice thing, and rarely seen for porn stuff.
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Thank you!
Yes, I was watching those initial downvotes with mounting dread, but I seem to be on the up-swing now at least.
I was a little disappointed initially, I wasn't expecting such an immediate negative reaction.
For a clopfic, this is the least objectionable story I've written yet!
I loved this. Honestly thought it was going to a dark place at points, but im so glad it didnt. Doesn't hurt that the ending had me chuckling. Congratulations, you can have a trifecta of goodness.
6456351 It's probably because of the latex transformation. People think it's a weird fetish and for some reason people like to downvote weird fetishes. I don't know WHY people like to do this, but there it is.
Seriously, what's with all the downvotes on this? This is a fun, well-written, kinky little story!
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Thanks much, I'm glad you enjoyed! I didn't want to make this one too dark. I liked the idea of it just being an accident that could happen to anypony.
Glad you liked the ending... I was having trouble thinking about where to stop, because it's not really meant to be a sad story, and I didn't want to bum everyone with a downer ending.
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I must be weird, I think latex transformation is rather normal! It is a shame that people do that. But I've got a good number of upvotes since then, so I'm happy.
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Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed.
6457787 We can be weird together :) being weird is fun! And very pleasurable~
I think people are downvoting because they see the 'nonconsensual sex' and then downvote. Trust me, that happens. One of my stories has 578likes and 180dislikes more or less because it's a clopfic that revolves around the non-consensual aspect of being taken advantage of.
6458139 I guess I can understand that. It's a shame if it's true. I could imagine that if it keeps happening, it'll discourage people from being open and honest about the content of their stories, and then anyone who DOES want to avoid such things is going to be going in blind.
6457794 - it can be!
I really think Soarin should have been a part of that last scene, or at least an epilogue were he's bending over backwards to make amends.
I mean, fine, I don't see what else he could have done with that being the safe reversal for the spell, but it seems a bit horribly cold for him to not even leave a note with: 'I'm so sorry, please call if you want to talk.'
Or something at least.
Other then that, I must admit I was pleasantly surprised. Was nice seeing a story with this premise were the transformed actually gets to walk away without being stuck forever and ever.
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I did originally plan for Soarin to arrive at the last minute before Rarity leaves and try to talk it out with her, but it didn't quite come together. I know it's a bit unsatisfying to leave his part in the matter unresolved.
I'm glad you think so! Admittedly, my dark side does enjoy that kind of bad ending, but I liked the idea of this just being a weird unfortunate accident.
Plus, Rainbow wanted the suit back.
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Fair enough. Sometimes things just doesn't work like that.
I don't mind the occasional dark ending played for horror, but its just so common in one-shot transformation stories that its a rather boring cliche by now.
Feels a bit weird to call a (mostly) happy ending a nicely original surprise, but have to admit its how I felt.
Say, speaking of Soarin... would that suit work on males? Turnabout might just be a fair enough bit of sequel material in that case.
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I considered this too! (I think about things way too hard.
). The suit would work on Soarin, but it would still require a stallion to cum in him to change back. Given the skewed gender balance of the Wonderbolts, that might be a tricky proposition. 
This demands a sequel!!
......with threesomes. Yes.
I could see more to this story or this being the beginning of a series. Maybe one with Rarity unable to get the idea of that happening again to her so she fines another kind of suit. You could always flip this and show one of Dash's times with Soarin or maybe Both Dash and Rarity turned and Soaring has both. Hell you could even go dark with this and have one of those trapped suits where they have to be fully inflated sex dolls for a period of times and they get passed around a bit. Maybe flip this where Soarin is turned into something else like a dildo for Dash who does a while training set with Soarin while it is Soarin's day off to explain why he's not there. Course to the whole Rarity being changed again, you could always do a Spike and Rarity one. The more that I think about it, it would be kind of cool for you to do that Rarity and Spike one but with a multiple ending. Like a good, bad, trapped, and dark endings. Never know, it could be fun.
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Those are some nice ideas! I especially like the one with Soarin having fun with both Rarity and Rainbow transformed into sex-dolls. Maybe they find the sensation of being his latex fucktoys addicting after a while. Maybe one or both of the suits malfunction and trap them for a time. Or permanently, if they're unlucky.
Another version of this idea is for one of Rainbow's rivals to lay out a suit as a trap, much like Rarity thought in this story. Somepony like Wind Rider, waiting for Rainbow to put it one so he can make her disappear forever. Rainbow or Rarity believe it's one of the regular suits when it's actually one that can't be removed. Either Soarin then finds them, or Wind Rider/another rival takes her away and sells them.
6469548 I'm glad you like my ideas. But why not do both? A multiverse story where it's the same set up but each chapter is a different take to the events? One where they get obsessed with the idea of being Soarin's sextoy, the one with Dash turning Lightning Dust into one to selling. Another one would be the Wind Rider doing it, either sells (which could use as a save from a dark end kind of story) or a give to a biggest stallion fan kind of thing to get his way. Hell, maybe this could expand to other ponies. Maybe Spitfire finds the suit one time at a time when Soarin and Dash are away and a guard or janitor takes her home for himself. So many possibilities.
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I'm glad you all liked it.
Those are some fun ideas, I love the Lightning Dust idea. 
Although I don't have any sequels planned, I did want to leave it open at least as far as Rarity is concerned. As Rainbow says, it does feel really good when you're in that position. I had imagined that Rarity might end up feeling wistful about her brief experience and eventually make herself a latex replica of the suit, as a private guilty pleasure. Eventually, Rainbow Dash would figure out what's up, and offer her a chance to wear it again.
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Well i'll admit read it more for the rubber tranfomration part but still at least it was well straight sex this time unlike thousand of same gender sex fics in this fandom. not really on to tlak about quility though
Paragraph 5: "...decked out head to hoof..." Not a whole lot of toes thereabouts, I'd wager XD
I know Rarity was rewarded the Element of Generosity, but I still thought she'd been so angry after this. Not just like "Oh, I am angry, but see you later rainbow.", more on the lines of a blinding rage. That's just my opinion though.
Safe.
This ...
Well, I will say this: The characters are well-done, the whole premise (a TF sex suit to use a technicality to get around a rule) fits, the whole idea of Rainbow not thinking twice about something she'd gotten used to, or even Rarity being curious about a costume -- all of that is reasonable.
That such a suit would have no safety mechanism? No emergency release? No timeout? ... Sadly, I can see that. Sounds like whoever made this did it as a one-off -- if there was anything produced in numbers that had this effect, at some point it would have become known just because of the potential for disastrous side effects.
And, don't forget that Rarity now has a little more direct, intimate knowledge of how pegasi wings behave, and can make her clothing just a little bit better as a result.
That ending was pretty funny, you got me giggling at that