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All Twilight wanted was to spend an afternoon with her friends in what she had dubbed "a friendship retreat." She certainly wasn't wxpecting for her and her friends to be diapered and treated like babies. But, maybe it won't be all bad. Who knows? Maybe she and her friends can still bond and become closer despite the circumstances.
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Nice alternative to their events from All Bottled Up. The girls acting like foals were super cute, even if everything was totally unintentional. Clever to see Applebloom and the other girls stuck in the same situation. Of course Spoiled Rich would do something like this. But then who needs her anyway.
Also:
I applaud you.
8173181 Thanks!
Not bad, but I feel like it would probably be a legal nightmare for Love Tap to give the mane six the tea with the potion in it, until AFTER they signed the disclaimer. And I can imagine Twilight at least would read the whole thing all the way through. Plus, I don't see how Filthy Rich would make the same assumption about the place that Twilight did.
8173422 Well, the potion regressed them to foals, so there's hardly a call for legal action. It did take Twilight and the others over thirty minutes to read the entire contract. And what assumtpion did Filthy make that was the same as Twilight's?
8173471 Are you telling me he knew the spa was a regression spa, and yet signed the fillies up for it anyway?
8173515 Like Twilight, he accidentally checked "infant regression" instead of "Incan puzzle." The girls certainly seemed to enjoy themselves nonetheless.
8173670 And he wouldn't be, I don't know, the least bit "peeved" about any of it?
8173702 Why would he? The girls had fun. That's all that matters.
8173745 He doesn't know what went on there, and none of them are going to tell him? I could imagine that even if they liked it, that would be a hard leap of logic.
8173880 Judging from the diapers, pacifiers, and baby bottles, I'm pretty sure he can conclude that they were diapered and treated as if they were babies. They wouldn't need to tell him.
8173937 And he's okay with all of that? He's not even a little upset?
8173947 Again, why should he be? He took the girls to the spa to have fun. They did. What's the problem?
8173947 Again, why should he be? He took the girls to the spa to have fun. They did. What's the problem?
8173960 It just feels weird that Filthy Rich wouldn't be the tiniest bit mad that, even if he unintentionally gave his permission, somepony regressed his daughter behind his back.
8173983 She enjoyed it, so there's no reason for him to be upset. The others aren't upset. He even apologized and the girls just dismissed it, saying that they had a good time and would love to do it again soon. Hence, the diaper party at Tiara's place at the end and Filthy being all for it.
8174001 I'm not saying that's bad, but that feels kind of needlessly tacked on, at least for a story like this.
8174019 Well, they did say they wanted to do this again soon. No time like the present. How does it feel tacked on?
8174031 It just feels like you put that there because you couldn't continue "A Mother's Touch" by Smity91, which would've included a similar diaper party.
8174037 I actually included it because I thought it'd be cute and funny that the CMC ended up in the same situation as their sisters. I might even write this as a side story.
Definitely enjoyed this story. Good build up to the actual event, though for the length of this piece, I think it would have been nice to include a little more action in each scene. While it doesn't feel like you blew through the important scenes, it's the little details that really make a story pop. Nevertheless, I liked this story, added it to my favorites, and I'm looking forward to what other kinds of diaper fics you can come up with in the future.
8174506 I agree. There really doesn't seem to be a whole lot of bonding, does there? Maybe in the scene where they're all playing together, I could include some more stuff. Or maybe have them have a food fight or fight over Love Tap's attention or take care of each other like Mommy does.
8174538 Perhaps. Since this is a fetish story, maybe put more emphasis on the DL side of ABDL than on the AB side. I couldn't really tell if they were foal sized or adult sized in this story, but that may be because I skipped a line or two while reading.
8174559 I probably could have made that a bit clearer. How would you suggest I focus more on the DL side than the AB side? Maybe have Rainbow Dash come to terms with the fact that she loves wearing diapers and using them? I feel like Rarity would be in the same boat. I should have had her doing one of her famous freak-outs like Rainbow Dash was doing. The others would probably take it in stride, no big deal, especially Pinkie, Fluttershy, and Twilight.
I have to say my apologies as i stopped reading in the middle. What turned me off is the Generic Gimmick. "Overlooking". Normally i'd overlook this one.. But after making sure... ... i can't read further. Twilight Described 2 or more major things that should be understandable... But to be something overlooking a brochure that is supposed to describe what is going to happen? I don't see that happening... I won't Down vote this story but I lost immersion when that excuse was played. Sorry
8180528 To me, it came off as an honest mistake on Twilight's part.
8180655 It could be. But i'm not saying i'm mad or such... I'm just saying to overlook something as a Big mistake from "Puzzle Solving" to "Foal activities" and so on.. that just seems too much of a mistake to overlook. I'm not being a jerk and trust me i'm being honest... I just feel like maybe if there was a different approach then it could be different.
8180660 Any suggestions?
8180793 hmm.... If i were to tweak the story a bit. I'd put perhaps as twilight talks about the puzzle solving and bonding experiences she wouldnt notice that it would all be themed. Perhaps the puzzles she saw on the pamphlet are pictures of say a shape box what the foals play and a abacus which foals mes with cause they dont know much so maybe the retreat isnt just a giant daycare place but what if it was a puzzle solving quest through the river of youth aka the part where the gang are dressed as foals and must solve the experiences to avoid another day if even one fails.
But thats just me. Its your story this is just my opinion
I'm trying to wrap my head around the fact that two Ponies had somehow accidentally wrote "Infancy Regression" instead of "Inca Puzzle" and at the same time.
I do like the interactions between the group but it seemed to lack the "bonding aspect" of it.
Also, I'd disagree on focusing more on the DL side; these types of stories don't work too well with hard DL aspects. I'd say little hints are okay but not full-on focus.
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I could see this being a common mistake. Perhaps both parties were distracted, stressed, or sleep deprived when they checked their boxes.
I noticed that too, but couldn't think of anything to fix it. You and The Abyss seem to have differing matters of opinion.
"Hard DL aspects?" What do you mean by that?
Do you mean as in sexual content?
8189717,
By "hard DL content", I mean sexual content involving diapers.
8192545 I figured.
Aww how cute
8249445 Thanks. I'm honestly kind of shocked that no one else thought of this idea.
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You're welcome friend
8249569 Awwwww . . .
I really enjoyed this, although I did wish for Dashie to get more into it. Especially considering A Delicate Relationship, though I do understand that this was AU.
You did an amazing job as always! Bravo! 👏👏👏
9289754 Thank you!
lovely story
11058691 Thank you!
11058747
you're welcome
Interesting turn of events, fun read, keep it up.