Sweetie Belle struggles to get closer to her sister while Rarity struggles to make a better life for the both of them after a family crisis hits too close to home.
WARNING: This story contains diapers, diaper usage, ageplay, and more.
Co-authored with Smitty91.
Additional tags: death, fetish, slice of life, drama, alternate universe, and tragedy.
Covert art by Daniel-SG.
I like how the story is going so far though I’ve gotta ask, is this a remake or reupload?
I swear I’ve read this somewhere before... if you need proof of me reading something similar or me possibly having future visions...
Please don’t look, other potential readers!!!!
Spoiler: Sweetie Bell and Rarity’s mom and dad die and Sweetie Belle ends up living with Rarity.
I can’t remember everything from what I may or may not have read so I will not only not add more to the spoiler to avoid giving wrong information but to also avoid giving too much away to those who ignored my warning and looked at the spoiler anyways...
9074467 To answer your question, it's both. I am co-writing this story with the original author.
May I ask who is the original author? Also I really think I did read that story before too, what was it about before again?
9075056 The original author was Smitty91.
Not bad so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.
9074772
Oh that’s so neat!
Like I said, I can’t remember much so it’ll be nice to see where this goes without knowing exactly what’s gojng to happen.
Awesome! Glad someone is able to continue Smity's work after his unfortunate termination from the site. I look forward to more.
9075569 Glad to hear it!
9075586 Though I think things are a bit sudden. Considering Rarity just broke a promise to be at Sweetie Belle's soccer game, I'd imagine Hondo and Cookie would be a little more heistant to make her a standby guardian. And I'm not sure that is something you could just sign off on, it would warrant months of inspection.
Ooh, shall we see if this is interesting? Yes. (haven't read yet)
Hm, interesting. But it seems like some of the details for Diamond Tiara could've been cut. I know in some of the revised drafts going on under Smity, Diamond was going to play a bigger role and have family issues. That doesn't quite seem to be the case here.
Swell chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Pizza? Now that's not something I'd think I'd hear Rarity say....
Oh no....
No no no no no....
Please please no....
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
9088189 Well, please give me your thoughts once you have.
9088342 Oh, no, given that he and I are collaborating on this together,
they're there, but they will come up later on in the story, just not right now.
9088497 I'm sorry.
9088572
No worries.
9089229 *passes box of tissues*
9089229 *passes box of tissues*
9089363
Thank you.
9089376 You're welcome.
9089619
Yes, yes she does.
And you think that that's the better option? The only thing that will accomplish is Sweetie Belle getting even more upset, only it'll also because you kept this from her!
They're the Cutie Mark Crusaders for a reason Rarity...Apple Bloom will definitely be able to help Sweetie Bell at a time like this.
Yes, it is.
No, it'll only cause her even more pain later on! Better to deal with it sooner rather than later Rarity, stop trying to delude yourself!
Choose wisely Rarity.
Aww Sweetie....
It won't be forever Sweetie.
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Too good....
Once again, poor Sweetie....
I bet she looked so adorable in those positions!
A good, bittersweet, yet adorable chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!
9092456 Thanks for the comment!
The original had Rarity outright lying to Sweetie Belle about the fact that her parents were dead (this was due to the fact that Sweetie Belle originally was not present when Rarity was told by the Royal Guard that her parents were dead), to the point where Rarity refused to let her go to the funeral, once again lying to Sweetie Belle, saying that she needed to go to Canterlot for a fashion-related reason in order to cover it up, and making Sweetie stay at Sweet Apple Acres during her stay in Canterlot. This created a rift between the sisters, to the point where Sweetie Belle was pissed at Rarity (and rightfully so) and refused to speak to her. In this rewritten version, this was changed for obvious reasons.
9092612
I see, what you’ve made a great improvement this far!
9092612 I'm glad you didn't include that, I absolutely detested that in the original version. It's one thing to not tell a child right away that their parents are dead, it's another thing entirely to cover up the truth and not give them a chance to say goodbye.
Awww, Rarity~!
EEEEEEE, those moments Sweetie Belle spent with Rarity was SO ADORABLE!!!
9101245 Thanks!
9101251
You're very welcome!
This is so adorable so far!
9101732 Thank you.
And it didn't burn down?
9110597 No. Apparently good cooking doesn't run in their family. It seems Rarity is the only one who's good at cooking.
Very great story so far! Is there any idea when the next chapter would be? It would be a shame if it goes unfinished
9122552 Agreed! Thank you for the comment! Unfortunately, I have been busy with other projects, but I hope to have the next chapter up soon. In the meantime, if you have any ideas for where you think the story should go, feel free to leave me a PM.
ahhh pinkie always full of excitement, well she is the element of laughter and a party planner
poor rarity and sweetie belle
I love this story as it shows how much that rarity loves her sister. I thought she wouldn’t comply with sweetie being diapered due to the fact that it’s an uncouth action. But the sisterly bond between them makes me smile. I really hope that this story will continue at some point, maybe with Sweetie Belle eventually having to tell her friends about her decision to wear diaper’s 24/7. Or to have the rest of the main 6 take care of Sweetie Belle. I’d like to see Fluttershy baby her the most. Great story though, hope it continues or gets a sequel.
11528234 Thanks for the comment, mate!
So rarity is basically babying sweetie belle, after their parent's deaths, that's alright with me, maybe I'll counite my story, for a bit, but I get brain farts, when I'm trying to think what I want to type up for the prologue
it may not be scootaloo related but I did enjoy the story, and I'm trying to not be so demanding nowadays, but I would like to see a story, where Scootaloo gets babied by rainbow dash, or every pony
I loved the story, will there be a sequel? I'd like to see what happens now and if Rarity an AJ get toguether or not, maybe AJ could some kind of a mother for Sweetie.
11789310 Hard to say at the moment,. Thanks for reading and the comment.