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Just a guy who likes writing and reading some pony fanfiction.

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Sweetie Belle struggles to get closer to her sister while Rarity is struggling to make a better life for her and her sister after a family crisis.

WARNING: This story contains diapers, diaper usage, ageplay, and more.

Co-authored with Smitty91.

Additional tags: death, fetish, slice of life, drama, alternate universe, and tragedy.

Covert art by Daniel-SG.

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 31 )

I like how the story is going so far though I’ve gotta ask, is this a remake or reupload?
I swear I’ve read this somewhere before... if you need proof of me reading something similar or me possibly having future visions...

Please don’t look, other potential readers!!!!
Spoiler: Sweetie Bell and Rarity’s mom and dad die and Sweetie Belle ends up living with Rarity.

I can’t remember everything from what I may or may not have read so I will not only not add more to the spoiler to avoid giving wrong information but to also avoid giving too much away to those who ignored my warning and looked at the spoiler anyways...

9074467 To answer your question, it's both. I am co-writing this story with the original author.

May I ask who is the original author? Also I really think I did read that story before too, what was it about before again?

Not bad so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.

9074772
Oh that’s so neat!
Like I said, I can’t remember much so it’ll be nice to see where this goes without knowing exactly what’s gojng to happen.

Awesome! Glad someone is able to continue Smity's work after his unfortunate termination from the site. I look forward to more. :yay:

9075586 Though I think things are a bit sudden. Considering Rarity just broke a promise to be at Sweetie Belle's soccer game, I'd imagine Hondo and Cookie would be a little more heistant to make her a standby guardian. And I'm not sure that is something you could just sign off on, it would warrant months of inspection.

Ooh, shall we see if this is interesting? Yes. (haven't read yet)

Hm, interesting. But it seems like some of the details for Diamond Tiara could've been cut. I know in some of the revised drafts going on under Smity, Diamond was going to play a bigger role and have family issues. That doesn't quite seem to be the case here. :applejackunsure:

Swell chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next:ajsmug:.

“Yes, it is, Sweetie Belle. It’s right across the hall from mine. I hope you like it. It’s the second-biggest room in the house. I save it for special guests, and you are pretty special, Sweetie Belle.” Sweetie blushed again. “Well, I’ll give you some time to get settled. If you have any questions, I’ll be right across the hall. Oh, and one more thing; for the next three months, welcome home.” She leaned down and kissed Sweetie’s cheek. Sweetie blushed bright crimson and grinned sheepishly.

:rainbowkiss::heart:!

“I ordered a pizza.”

Pizza? Now that's not something I'd think I'd hear Rarity say...:unsuresweetie:.

“I'll get it,” Rarity offered. She walked out of the room and to the front door. Opening it, she saw a couple of the Princess' royal guards standing on her doorstep. “Good afternoon, gentlemen. What can I do for you today?”

Oh no...:rainbowderp:.

“I'm afraid we have some terrible news, ma'am.”

No no no no no...:applecry:.

Rarity sighed in relief and turned back to the guards. “Now you can tell me. Is it about my parents?” She prayed to Celestia that it wasn't.

Please please no...:fluttercry:.

“They're . . .” The guard swallowed hard. “They're . . . dead, ma'am.”

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO:raritydespair:!!!

9088189 Well, please give me your thoughts once you have.

9088342 Oh, no, given that he and I are collaborating on this together,
they're there, but they will come up later on in the story, just not right now.

9088497 I'm sorry. :applecry:

9089229 *passes box of tissues*

9089229 *passes box of tissues*

9089376 You're welcome. :pinkiesmile:

Her rational side said, “Go ahead and go ahead with the funeral. It's for the best. It's important that Sweetie Belle get the chance to say goodbye to Mother and Father. She deserves at least that much.”

Yes, yes she does:ajsleepy:.

Her emotional side said, “But I don't want to put her through any more emotional distress than she's already been through. She's only a child. Children shouldn't be worried about having to lay their parents to rest, especially a filly at her age. She should be laughing and running around and having fun with her friends, not trying to cope with the death of her parents. No, it's best if I just put it off until she's older, that way she'll be able to cope with it better.”

And you think that that's the better option:ajbemused:? The only thing that will accomplish is Sweetie Belle getting even more upset, only it'll also because you kept this from her:twilightangry2:!

“You really think being older makes one more capable of dealing with the death of a family member?” her rational side asked. “If anything, having her go through it right now would help with the coping process. After all, she's not stupid. She's been knwon to be quite intelligent for a filly her agem I'm sure she'd be able to find a good way to deal with the boss of her parents. Apple Bloom has been through this same thing. Surely she would be able to help Sweetie Belle out."

They're the Cutie Mark Crusaders for a reason Rarity...Apple Bloom will definitely be able to help Sweetie Bell at a time like this:twilightsmile:.

“Exactly my point,” her rational side said. “If you truly loved your little sister, you would let her say goodbye to Mother and Father and help her through the coping process. That's what you're here for, isn't it?”

Yes, it is:eeyup:.

“But I don't want to upset her any more than she already is. I just couldn't live with myself knowing that I had brought the great weight of saying goodbye to Mother and Father for the final time onto her. Making her have to go through the ordeal of saying goodbye to her parents would completely destroy her whole world. Does not making her go through that mean that I love her too? After all, I would be saving her from a lot of heartache and pain by doing so.”

No, it'll only cause her even more pain later on:twilightangry2:! Better to deal with it sooner rather than later Rarity, stop trying to delude yourself:flutterrage:!

“Depriving her of the chance to say goodbye to Mother and Father would only hurt her more. Yes, letting her go through with it will hurt, but not as much as it will if you deprive ehr of the chance to say goodbye to her parents and go through the grieving process. So, are you going to help your sister through the grieving process?"

Choose wisely Rarity:trixieshiftleft:.

Uh oh. Here it comes. Sweetie gulped. “Rarity, I swear it’s never happened before! I’m so sorry!” Rarity shushed her.

Aww Sweetie...:fluttershysad:.

“I know you don’t like the idea, but you have to understand that we have to do something, and I think that’s the best way to protect the bed. It’s okay, Sweetie Belle. You’ll only wear them until you get over this problem. It’s not a bad thing, Sweetie Belle. You’re not a baby or anything!”

It won't be forever Sweetie:pinkiesad2:.

Sweetie leaped on Rarity’s lap and gave her a big hug. “Of course it is, Rarity!” Sweetie was crying pretty hard while Rarity rubbed her back with her hooves, but Sweetie was smiling.

:rainbowkiss:!

Sweetie woke up to the same sensation she’d woken up to the night before. She realized quickly that she had once again wet the bed, but there was something else: She had been sleeping with her hoof in her mouth! She pulled it out and tried to figure out what to do about the bed. Two nights in a row? Surely Rarity would get upset this time. Once could have been an accident, but not twice. While she was trying to figure out what to do, Rarity walked in. Sweetie had to admit, she had very good timing.

Too good...:facehoof:.

Sweetie started to stammer out an explanation, but couldn’t get beyond, “I . . . but . . . I . . . this . . . I . . .” She felt so ashamed.

Once again, poor Sweetie...:pinkiesad2:.

She loved the way she looked in the mirror. The best part was she could see little bits of white fur on her inner thighs, just below her diaper. She got on all four of her hooves again to see how she looked from behind. Her curly two-toned tail stuck out of the hole in her diaper and she couldn't help but chuckle at how she looked. It was then that she decided that she liked wearing diapers, and acting like a baby. She didn’t know how she reached this decision, but she did. She started imagining herself in babyish positions. She felt good doing it. And as soon as Rarity came back in, she was going to tell her, and she hoped Rarity wouldn't think she was crazy.

I bet she looked so adorable in those positions:rainbowkiss::heart:!

A good, bittersweet, yet adorable chapter:twilightsmile:. Can't wait to see what happens next:scootangel:!

9092456 Thanks for the comment! :twilightsmile:

And you think that that's the better option:ajbemused:? The only thing that will accomplish is Sweetie Belle getting even more upset, only it'll also because you kept this from her:twilightangry2:!

The original had Rarity outright lying to Sweetie Belle about the fact that her parents were dead (this was due to the fact that Sweetie Belle originally was not present when Rarity was told by the Royal Guard that her parents were dead), to the point where Rarity refused to let her go to the funeral, once again lying to Sweetie Belle, saying that she needed to go to Canterlot for a fashion-related reason in order to cover it up, and making Sweetie stay at Sweet Apple Acres during her stay in Canterlot. This created a rift between the sisters, to the point where Sweetie Belle was pissed at Rarity (and rightfully so) and refused to speak to her. In this rewritten version, this was changed for obvious reasons.

9092612
I see, what you’ve made a great improvement this far:scootangel:!

9092612 I'm glad you didn't include that, I absolutely detested that in the original version. It's one thing to not tell a child right away that their parents are dead, it's another thing entirely to cover up the truth and not give them a chance to say goodbye.

“You’ve just been through a very traumatic experience and you want to escape from all your cares and worries for a little while. That could have been partly to blame for your bed-wetting. If what you want is to be babied, then what kind of sister would I be to keep that from you? It’s such a simple, innocent request, too. So don’t be scared, Sweetie Belle. If diapers are what will make you happy right now, then that’s what you will get.”

Awww, Rarity~:rainbowkiss:!

EEEEEEE, those moments Sweetie Belle spent with Rarity was SO ADORABLE:rainbowkiss::heart:!!!

She remembered her mom cooking dinner in the kitchen.

And it didn't burn down?

9110597 :rainbowlaugh: No. Apparently good cooking doesn't run in their family. It seems Rarity is the only one who's good at cooking.

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