Hi, I'm TAW. I write terrible erotic my little pony fan fiction about cartoon horses having sex with each other, or vaguely defined human audience-inserts, for fun. Because... uh. I have no shame?
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More of an uploadgasm, I hadn't previously put my stuff on FimFiction. All of the things in here were requests, which explains the variety.
where is the molestia emoticon when you need it?
Gilda and spitfire was the best lulz
lol twilight has a cutie mark in magic doesn't she?
and yes, rainbow dash does feel this way
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Exactly, I couldn't help but make the implication that somewhere, somebody is really, really good at fucking.
I honestly didn't think I was going to like the Snails x Twilight one. I kind'a despise Snips and Snails as characters, so shipping one with my favorite character just seemed like it'd be a disaster.
It ended up being my favorite story here.
I love the story, but I need to ask this: WHEN WILL WE SEE SPIKE ON MARE ACTION? I want to honest to God see some Spike X Rarity, Spike X Twilight, or Spike X any of the other Mane 6 or Luna and Celestia. Come on let's see some dragon on pony action!
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I request Celestia/Twlight/Luna.
I regret nothing xD
On a (ever so slightly) more serious note I really enjoyed these, and hope to see many more.
I do believe that is the joke, mine good imbecile.
I suggest a Xor X CMC
160739 For the latter, I suggest "Sweet Apple Massacre"
God I just love reading the sex ed. story over and over again.
I love how you "conveniently" left out Snips from this, the unlovable bastard he is.
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Mrs. Cake is Cup, not Carrot. Carrot is Mr. Cake.
MOOOOOAAAAARRRRR!!!
Uh....
How did you post more than 6 characters?
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by... typing them?
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I mean, when I go to enter that many characters, it kicks me saying I can't have more than six.
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well this story predates those rules, for one.
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Clever girl....
NO comments? Seriously? Interesting... Anyway:
Have some mustaches for a nice little collection of stories!
This story is a roller coaster, going from WTF moments, to pretty good clop, to stuff that made me wonder what the fuck I just read, and back again.
And, strangely, I'm okay with that.
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Wouldn't that just be perfect, though?
Wow, Twilight was very dominant in this story.
Sounds like she's in heat, though it's not mentioned in the story.
I appreciate the inclusion of her frantic/ manic attitude for being late. It's very in character for her.
I'm not sure if her demanding/ dominance side is due to the stress and panic she gets clouding her normally reasonable, intelligence, or if it's her being in heat which makes her behave as she does. Or if it's one of those things where the quiet librarian type turns out to be a real kinky dominatrix/ nympho during sex.
But, then again, that's the reader's curiosity, given how this story is told from Anon's perspective, it makes for better writing/ story, if we're not given an omniscient narrator/ 3rd person view of the inner workings of Twilight, so regardless of my incomprehension of Twilight's behavior, because you didn't lay Twilight bare for us, the reader, makes me consider this story well written from that aspect.
In the Twilight X Snail story, the usage of the word person detracts (in my opinion) from the story. Perhaps due to a strong association with humans. The philosophical usage could work, but again, there's a strong connection of person with humans, whether conscious or not. The main objective is for Twilight to help Snails come to an understanding that regardless of how pretty/ beautiful a pony is, most/ all ponies need/ yearn for social interaction of some level, and by actually engaging a pony, he/ she might find commonalities and share interests and likes, or establish a basic understanding of compatibility between the two ponies, and can choose to adjust the relationship to accord with that understanding of their compatibility. (Verbose, I know. Twilight would be proud.) And to have her say it, without the usage of the word person, even if it means making it lengthier and more verbose, would be very in character for Twilight, and not as detracting from the story. (For me, and those who share like opinions regarding this word choice.)
And I was like
What?
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Excuse me for being a nostagia critic but is should've Twilight just give him a stallion tutor like 'Doctor' instead of you know... bow chick a wow wow.