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Pozzo


Weird Story Man

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Love it :rainbowkiss:

While reading this, I did think of an "interesting" sequel involving all three of the CMC, Spoiled Rich, and Diamond Tiara.
I'll PM it to you if you want to read it.

8350819
Glad you liked it, and sure, go ahead!

I wouldn't mind a sequel. i liked the idea

Awesome story, with some interesting kinks well executed. Though for almost the whole first half of it I wasn't sure if Applejack wasn't just playing along.

8350955
And yes, I'd really like to see a sequel to this, too. Maybe Twilight finds out and Rainbow 'convinces' her that the easiest way find out more about it is by testing the spell on herself.

8350974
Thank you very much! And haha, if she HAD been playing along she may have had to come clean when Dash asked her to delimb herself. (Or would she have? Maybe that would have been a good twist ending... )


8350955
Cheers! If I do get round to a sequel it won't be for a little while but it's in my plans.

8351007
ok i can wait

8351007
Well, it was kind of obvious when it worked on Granny Smith.
And yay sequel!

The best way to explain... *Zap* *Zap* Forget everything

Man there are to few fics like this one in this site

8693436
Glad you liked it! I always try to be different, haha.

8694710
And with this Story you hit a nail of mine in the head

“Didn’t sound that way last night!” said Granny. The tranquil morning mood was somewhat ruined by the spray of warm coffee that erupted from Applejack’s lips, leaving both the table and Big Mac soaked in the stuff.

*Makes like AJ* I am so glad I wasn't drinking anything when I read this... Beautiful comedic timing. Beautiful.

8769303

Haha, I'm glad you liked that!

8694710
Will you write more like this

9352812
Thank you very much, that's a lovely comment to leave! And yes, I have a particular take on hypno that I think we need more of, haha.

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