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Pozzo


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Okay, Dash was set up to fail here.

8041687 Yup. It worked out in the end, somehow!

8041727 Well I can always take comfort in the thought that they'd put Rainbow back together later.

Somehow this was even more bizarre than Modular Merchant...
And yet, I kind of would like to see a third one that would be about RD getting revenge for all the stuff that wasn't part of the bet, though she does it in a way that AJ can't help but enjoy it. And it would end with the two of them agreeing not to do anything like this ever again.

Either that, or the two of them deciding to mess with Twilight, since it was her interpreting the rules of the bet literally that caused AJ to become the way she is in this story.

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A third one is planned, though I may work through some other stuff first (spoiler alert, it's going to along the same lines as all my stuff, I am nothing if not single-minded)

8071969 And I can appreciate that. (The single minded part, anyway).
I'll probably end up at least checking out that, as well as the other stuff, when they come out.

I assume that revealing what the plot (or at least the reason for the fetish stuff) of that third one will be is out of the question until it comes out?

8072011 Thanks for the interest!

Plot stuff is still being ironed out, but if there is a third one: don't expect it to just return to the status quo. Expect the opposite. Things are going to get much crazier. We've only just started going down this rabbit hole.

8072072 I've read some pretty weird fetish fics, so I'm pretty sure I can handle it.
Heck, the weirdest one I've read happens to be another AJ and RD fic.

8072072 Now that I've done some thinking about how much crazier things can get, I wouldn't be surprised if the third one ends up with the two of them as two brains sharing one body until Twilight can fix everything.

8073376 Haha, not ruling anything out yet, it's possible!

8073530 If that does end up being how the third one ends, then I've already thought of the perfect way to end it:
RD: *speaking out of their shared mouth* Applejack?
AJ: *instinctually turns their head* Yeah, Rainbow?
RD: *sighs* When we get back to normal, let's Pinkie Promise we'll never do this stuff again.
AJ: *chuckles a bit* Sure thing, Dash.

I'm not sure if the AJ line would help or hurt the ending, but I threw it in as an option.

Well I do hope that Rainbow's brain gets back into her body and fully restored, also it was Twilight's fault that AJ's body went like that to begin with, so she shouldn't be blaming Rainbow, also Rainbow should be changed back by the time the week long of being a maid for AJ is up.

Cute ending to the first chapter.

anyone getting dead man's chest vibes here?
I am talking about Hadras
https://pirates.fandom.com/wiki/Hadras

Whatd be really great is Rainbows head being placed on Applejacks Body

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