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(Joke) Alt. Title: You Don't Know Jumpin' Jack Flash!: Lady (Looks Like A Dude)
Sounds fun and it seems it's a rarijack story i'am keeping track of this
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HAHA!!! ^^
2014392
indeed it is a rarijack story!! one of my favorite ships lol.
Good concept, however, DO NOT PUT IN THE MIDDLE! Welcome, hope to read it later.
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"Do not put in the middle."
Do not put what in the middle?
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Zhe story, as Consuela would say:
No no no no middle story, no middle.
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ohhhhhhhhhhhh haha!!! XD
very cute story, i really like to see more
2107204
thank you! and you definitely will!
I really like this story.
Can't understand why somepony would dislike it
But well different opinions I guess..
Pls continue I want to know what happens next
im not sure why either. it seems its either a hit and miss for everyone who comes around. i have a few guesses though
1. they dont like anthro
2. they dont like applejack dressing as a dude maybe
3. maybe they just dont think i write well.
but, i am really happy you enjoyed it! and i am going to continue and finish this story. Then, make it into a comic on my DA page! woo hoo!
2455076 it's a great story personally I hope you continue this rarijack is so awsome
dont worry, i will.
I think this story is great... I don't understand the down votes....my only suggestion would be to start new paragraphs when a character speaks and also watch your past and present tenses. Example: Rainbow Dash falls to the ground laughing and then she cheers...it should be...RAinbow Dash fell to the ground laughing and then she cheered....to keep with the rest of the tense of the story! Cheers!
Another great chapter...have a like and a fave!
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hey! thanks for the feedback! and ill try to watch my past and present tenses. its just hard when i have no one to proof read it when ive proof read it a hundred times over... so i kinda struggle when catching onto those things. But thank you so much, ill be more aware of that now. you're awesome! XD
2017698 And it's soooooo good!
Keep up the good work, can't wait to see Rarity all over her smexy cowpony!
NExt Chap! YAY!! Didn't read it yet, but I love to see people sticking to their good work and not dropping it for whtevurthafuq the reason is
And by the way, I found it, I just had to put back that lil' mark that allows me to read "adult stuff"... heheheee...
I'm thinking 'bout doing some fanart on this story, may I?
THANK YOU!
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wow really!? ^^ sure go right ahead and make some fan art i would love to see it! if you don't already follow me, here is my DA art page
http://ninjajackle.deviantart.com/
check it out, hope to see the fan art soon! ^^
Great chapter I am sooooooooooooo happy that you are continuing this
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of course! :3 ill be adding another chapter soon as well!
I have a feeling they're going to be caught XD
I absolutely love this so far!!!!
another awesome chapter!
This is so good! Can't wait till the next chapter comes!!!!
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Working on it! im glad you like it~!
Rarijack is best ship lol...:) thanx for finishing the story!
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Indeed! Youre welcome! Ill be making a comic for this entire story, hope to see you liking that too!
mmm...Anthro tag needed.
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theres one? I should go put that then
that was pretty adorable good job with this fic!
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Thanks! I hope you look forward to the comic!
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definitely
That was amazing. May I ask were are you posting your comic of this?
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It will be on deviant art and Inkbunny.
here is a link to my DA page.
http://ninjajackle.deviantart.com/
warning, contains mature art.
Um... not a big deal or anything, but... I'm getting from the comments and the context of the story that it's complete, but it's labeled as "incomplete." Did I miss something, or was it just never marked as "complete?"
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I keep forgetting sorry its complete
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No prob dude I'd probably do the same thing
Great story. I just have one question. are you planning a sequel? Just wondering.
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is it good enough for one?
might as well. since there wasnt much... apple-rare romance between the two.
MOAR ROMANCE AND LUST I SAY!!
Why and how did you sit this story in middle font?