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SFC Ponycron

I love to read and write fiction and fanfiction. I'm 34 years old, married, and a gamer....I think that's it, other than Vinyl Scratch is best background pony. :P

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Considering how many <3 I had for Bechdel's Law, I shall be expecting great things.

However, I shall save it for tomorrow.

Heheheh, this was great! :twilightsmile:

I like how you merged my plotlines with the canon in this episode, and all the innuendo going on between the three mares who are "in the know." I guess the Gala really is the perfect venue for this, given that it gathers all of the main six and the Wonderbolts into one location. The role you gave to poor, ignorant Rainbow Dash - who will probably flip her lid if she ever puts two and two together - was a pretty clever and plausible way to give some insight into Soarin's side of the break-up. I'm definitely looking forward to the rest, now. Hope it'll be the Best Night Ever! (Also, I wouldn't worry too much about retconning and such. Feel free to follow your own ideas, even if they deviate from future chapters of BL.)

(Oh, and the prescient line by Pinkie Pie totally made my day. Genius. :pinkiehappy:)

Great read so far! Looking forward to seeing more so keep up the good work!:twilightsmile:

I have all these FEELS! :rainbowkiss:

Way to spoil all the drama RD. How can we have conflict if you clear all the air right out the gate :twilightsmile::raritywink::ajsmug:


Now, if I deviate from BL, it wouldn't be a proper follow-up, would it? Besides, I wanted to write this as true-to-fic as possible. I want to see if I can write a follow-up and do a great fic justice.


There might be a little bit of conflict or two, but a generous helping of awkwardness mixed in with another generous helping of hilarity is the flavor of the day with this fic.


DIS IS GON BE GOOD. :pinkiecrazy:

Moar! We must have MOAR!

FINALLY!!! Now to read it. :rainbowkiss:

EDIT: Soarin's secret crush revealed! :trollestia: But how will she react when she see's him face first in AJ's pie?


Well I thought it was funny.

Find out in the next hopefully-released-much-sooner chapter!

Glad to see this updated, even if it's short. Really great descriptions of the flight maneuvers.

I'm mashing the LIKE button as hard as I can but it's not working no more. :fluttercry:

This is turning out to be so cute! It's interesting to see things from Soarin's perspective.

Have fun at the con!

You realize that it's your turn to update now. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Okay... I REALLY want to see where this goes. The way their relationship ended in Bechdel's Law sucked, and I was really glad to see this. That And I want to see Rainbow's reaction when Twilight and Soarin walk by... (:rainbowhuh:)

All in all though? Good story so far!:twilightsmile:

I wouldn't mind seeing another chapter of this sometime in the near future.


I really should get back on this thing. I mean it, I really should. I'll have to get off of Tumblr at some point to actually do some writing.


Indeed, though it did give me a little spurring: Here. I'm not sure if you found this story randomly or through the link I just posted, but I thought you might enjoy this regardless.

I have indeed read that story before, and I have to say it was quite good.


Thank you. I appreciate it. My writing has fallen simply into those prompts (routine has kinda killed my inspiration, so 60MP has been my only little source of inspirational 'spanner in the works'). Even a weeks' vacation didn't help me out of my writing rut. I should probably look through all my old stuff and see if I can gain any sort of inspiration. I fully intend to post my crack-ship fic (my submission for the last 60MP prompt), and I might do that Thursday. Right now, the prompt is all that matters, and I tend to get a severe case of Tunnel Vision when there's something of a time limit involved.

Please Continue this story.... its realy interesting

Re-read Bechdel's Law, and that lead me to reread this. I really wanna see how this turns out...

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