hey! thanks for the feedback! and ill try to watch my past and present tenses. its just hard when i have no one to proof read it when ive proof read it a hundred times over... so i kinda struggle when catching onto those things. But thank you so much, ill be more aware of that now. you're awesome! XD
I really like this story.
Can't understand why somepony would dislike it
But well different opinions I guess..
Pls continue I want to know what happens next
im not sure why either. it seems its either a hit and miss for everyone who comes around. i have a few guesses though
1. they dont like anthro
2. they dont like applejack dressing as a dude maybe
3. maybe they just dont think i write well.
but, i am really happy you enjoyed it! and i am going to continue and finish this story. Then, make it into a comic on my DA page! woo hoo!
2455076 it's a great story personally I hope you continue this rarijack is so awsome
dont worry, i will.
Another great chapter...have a like and a fave!
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hey! thanks for the feedback! and ill try to watch my past and present tenses. its just hard when i have no one to proof read it when ive proof read it a hundred times over... so i kinda struggle when catching onto those things. But thank you so much, ill be more aware of that now. you're awesome! XD
2017698 And it's soooooo good!
Keep up the good work, can't wait to see Rarity all over her smexy cowpony!
another awesome chapter!