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DimTye


A fetish author who enjoys all sorts of kinky stuff; PM me if you'd like to commission a story!

Comments ( 22 )

Very nice.

It was ok. But you referred to the having hooves and hands, and in parts made it sound as if they were human and other parts they were ponies so it was confusing on that aspect but otherwise hot.

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These are anthro characters, so they have hands at the end of their arms and hooves at the end of their legs.

One of the few times I've actually enjoyed a BDSM Fic. Very well done, loved the emphasis on trust.

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Ahhhhh makes sense now.. :facehoof:

needs a sequel

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What would you like to see if I were to write another chapter?

5520123 to be honest i would like to see how rarity properly trains rainbow dash into bdsm after the "introductory course" and see how rarity will treat her new toy and maybe get a little possesive, maybe see if she makes her wear anything to the wonderbolt event besides her clothes

Absolutely outstanding. Can't wait to read more.

... Stupid sexy Rarity.

For reasons I won't fully disclose, I found Rarity to be rather sexy in this story -- almost on par with Rainbow Dash.

Well written! :heart:

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Well, now I'm curious for those non-disclosed reasons XD I promise I'm discrete - would you mind sharing your thoughts in a PM?

This is how BDSM is supposed to be. Trust is a large part and without it, it just becomes non consensual.

5877248 i agree with you here. BDSM is all about trust, and love with discipline. without that there's just abuse, which isn't what it's about at all.

Very well done. You captured the essence of BDSM very nicely and with my favorite paring nonetheless! I would love to see this expanded upon.

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I have a working knowledge of BDSM protocols and behaviors, and I drew on them while writing this piece. I agree with all three of you; too often BDSM is shown as borderline non-consensual sex, but that's really not it by a long shot. It's so much more complex and meaningful, and I really wanted to show some of that in this story. I'm glad you all enjoy it, and I'm glad my knowledge paid off :)

That was fucking incredible.

Well I'll be damned

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Mm? Did you enjoy the story, then?

6381385 I did indeed. What can I say? I'm a slut for Raridash written decently

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Glad you did! I love interesting dichotomies in intimate relationships; Dash being so brash and brazen to the outside world, but submitting in the bedroom, was a really fun idea to explore.

I'm not one for bdsm, but damn. This is well written.

I enjoyed every moment in this one. :heart:

Just like a few other RariDash clopfics I've read, I came across this one while searching for random words.

And it was certainly an interesting read, though since I'm not into this stuff, I won't fave it.

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