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I enjoyed this; there's not enough SweetiexSpikeXRarity.

Thank to FlimFlamBros. Magnum will always be a conspiracy buff with serious issue with saving time.

The Hiatus is because I can't start on the next part until I do the 2nd story in the series... this is technically the third.

This is the 3rd and still need to write the 2nd? What about finishing the first? And I'd still a story about all the debauchery that went on between Twilight, Celestia and Luna during that weekend. So Spike's 'herd' is just Rarity and Rainbow Dash at this point based on the character tags or are there more? Plus Spike is basically gonna be adding Sweetie Belle, Applebloom and Scootaloo to his herd as well? Definitely looking forward to more of this in the future,the 2nd story and you eventually finishing the first one.

2609413 Weekend will be finished this month. And the reason this beat the second one was that about 2000 words in I realized the potential, connected all the dots, and went, "Fuck, I'm writing another part of Weekend."

As for the hoard/herd, it isn't just those two, but they play the main roles in this story. We'll see probably the whole mane 6 at some point, but they won't have hugh important parts. Tags are for main character after all :raritywink:

2604721 That was amazing.
What mare WOULDN'T want to have sex with Spike?
Can you imagine, if Spike was in court because of a crime?
(Scenario)

Prosecutor John Law: "Spike, did you BANG my witnesses and the mares of the jury to secure a innocent verdict?!"
Spike: " Uhh...I did no such thing."
Mare: "WE LOVE YOU SPIKE!"
Spike: " Shut up, baby! I know it."

Max

Haha, the picture i showed yesterday at that blog post xD

2609464 Actually, it's the one before that. It was in submission with this one; I could not believe it came up :facehoof:

Very nicely done, one of the better ones I've read recently.

:moustache:

Loved it, as I do with all of your stories:moustache:.
Though I found one little Slip up

besides jumping out the window, runing like hell

*Cough*Running*Cough*

2609509 14k and you only found 1 slip up. Good to know all that time going back and forth with my proofreader was a waste :trollestia: Seriously though, thanks for pointing it out.

Glad you enjoyed it.

Is it wrong for me to think that Spike could pleasure all nine mares at once?

2609573 That would take a very large bed and some crazy positioning... Even I have to think nine might be a bit much... That tail of his would need to come into play in a few ways that's for sure.

I shall put it on my read later list till Weekend is finished!

I liked the reference to Beauty and her Spike by the FlimFlamBros.

… when we can stop him from complaining travel time and the government.”

I like to think Magnum would be too busy covering his head in tin foil to care that his daughters are in a polygamist relationship with the same guy.

I imagine how it plays out if Magnum is the same from B&HS.

Years of detective work in Haywaii had taken its toll on Magnum's mental well being and as a result he had become a conspiracy theorist to the point where it was almost at The Question levels of paranoia.

Currently he was applying his fifth layer of tin foil to his head when he heard three strategic knocks at the door.

"What's the password?"

"Winnypeg Grizzlies."

With the uttering of Magnum's favorite hockey team, he opened the door to reveal his pseudo son-in-law...pseudo because even through the drake hadn't asked the question yet, it was gonna happen eventually.

"come in, come in."

Spike wasn't all that surprised by Magnum's behavior or the fact that was presently dressed as a giant Hershey's Kiss after years of knowing Rarity and Sweetie Belle.

"Um, I don--" The dragon was about to say something very important, when white earth pony interrupted him.

"Spike, my boy you have to check this out, it's solid proof that the government has been using Fluoride to make us visible to spy Satellite and thus steal travel time away from the masses.... I knew it, I..." Magnum looked at Spike's uncovered head with fear.

"Quick, put this on!" The stallion started to wrap foil around Spike's head. "Now about those spy satellites."

"But, sir..."

"You see I can't let them know, I know, you know?"

Spike had had enough. "I'm dating both of your daughters!!!"

Magnum blinked a few times as he let the information sink in. "So this has nothing to do with Spy satellites, fluoride, travel time, aglets, the magic bullet or sea ponies?"

"No...huh, wait your not bothered by any of this?"

"Nah, I was a flower child, good times, good times..." Magnum mind reminisced on the days of LSD and uncut fetlocks.

"Ookay."

"Now about that travel time hoax." With that Magnum and Spike spent the day bonding over theories on the government and why gems grow like plants.
:pinkiecrazy::twilightoops:

2609766 I saw that big thing and thought we made a bunch of errors, stopped my heart for a second, lol.

Respect for The Question reference, but I don't think Magnum is that far gone... aside from the fact he probably could fit a tinfoil hat under his straw one. Still, smart enough to hide it if that is the case.

Hold it right there for a minute there. You haven't even put out the last chapter of Weekend Maid for Spike and there's already a sequel? Don't get me wrong, I love the idea and all of what I'm seeing, but generally rule of thumb is that when you write a sequel, the prequel be completed first, which is not the case for Weekend yet.

Comment posted by NTSTS deleted Oct 18th, 2013

2609912 ... details, logic, reasonableness! I'm Path_of_Cloud I need no such things!

:facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof: You're still right, but never surrender!

2609953 Well at least try to concentrate on finishing Weekend. It's time for it to be updated.

2609928 I'm a little confused, mate. You don't like anthro? Do you mean something else? Again, confused, because I really can't see a moderator commenting on a story just to say that they don't like anthro... As such, I'm assuming there's something I'm missing here.

2609965 I am. I said that Friday that I was working on Monday now :rainbowkiss:

i kind of stopped understanding what was happening after the breakfast part.

2610047 Understood then. Can't wait to see the grand finale.

2609413

wait whats this now about a Twilunestia?

2610051 They went out for the day before having a night on the town... after that there was sex... I'm not quite sure what lost you. I'm happy to help explain if it's like one thing pr maybe a few that derailed you, but the flow is pretty solid in my opinion.

2610198 There is a direct mention to the three of them sleeping with each other in Weekend, and a number of the readers are attempting to get me to write it. In complete honesty though, I'm not sure how well I'd do on a pure lesbian scene.

And its already on haitus!

2609953 i was wondering the exact same thing...Hurry and finish the old one i wont read this one till you do :ajsleepy: :raritycry:

The upvotes went from fifty-eight to sixty-two when I clicked it. I knew it - my opinion means more than everyone else's. :moustache: Also, coincidentally, this came on when I started reading this. I demand more.

2610277

Ah. Well consider this my vote of confidence. You can certainly write a scene.

...There are never enough Twilunestia's in any case...

2610278 The cost of being ahead of it's time.

2610291 Yeah... that seems fair.

2610366 Truer words, man, truer words.

2610431 :eeyup:

So wait...Is Punishment apart of Weekend or is there still an update to Weekend because some of this is confusing

2610539 Punishment is completely it's own thing. There's this Weekend, A Dragon's Hoard which hasn't been released yet, and Conquests here.

2610366 Is that an actual thing 'cause I haven't seen Twilunestia at all.

2610548 Oh! Because the mares plural thing had me thinking of Flutters and Twilight, seeing how they're the only two mentioned outside of Spike and His Six Lovely Ladies

YAY! I'm an influence! And I love this story! Sweetie x Rarity x Spike for the win!

Can't wait for the soon to be Scootaloo x Spike x Rainbow Dash! And the Apple Bloom x Spike x Applejack?

Now you have to finish up Weekend! :raritystarry:

2610198 Read A Weekend Maid For Spike. Thats practically the whole reason Twilight is spending the weekend in Canterlot with Celestia and Luna. It mentions Twilight learning a spell that let you magically add a cock so i'm guessing there'd be lots of DP and spitroasting going on as well as alot of other debauchery.

Nice choice of titles! I was wondering which you'd go with.

2609509
Son-of-a-! :flutterrage: I thought I caught all of those! I even remember proofreading this particular sentence for being in the wrong tense. PoC! What have we created?! Monsters are we! Monsters!

2610619

Son Of an angry Fluttershy, oh my how kinky.
Fluttershy: "Mama's so mad, Time for some kinky punishments"

2610550 Yeah. There's some good clop that way.

2610559 Nice to see you were paying attention to the details.

2610560 That seems a little predictable... and where's the fun in that.

2610619 Psh, that what the parents group said too.

2610694 I'm gonna take that as a positive.

2610550

Its rare for sure. You can most of them in this group Twilunestia. and some more in the partially folder of this group. Some More Twilunestia

Arby #45 · May 21st, 2013 · · 1 ·

NIGGA WHAT ARE YOU DOING YOU AREN'T EVEN FINISHED YOUR FIRST STORY WHAT IS THIS WHY WOULD YOU DO SUCH A THING WHY IS EVERYBODY UPSTAGING ME I HATE YOU ALL I'M SICK OF THIS SHIPPING SHIT OMG I AM SO DONE

pretty bitchin otherwise

dude their must be more and please from the way the titel looks you must get all the CMC and dude how did Spike get more lovers since the weeken maid I don't rember you making a secueal:duck: so what are you gonna do about it:trollestia:

You know......this is......weird.....like SUPER weird.

Also is it me or is there too much incest in these stories?

I said it before and I will say it again. It's about time he got the white mare sister's!:moustache::heart::raritywink::unsuresweetie:
Great job!

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