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Now that I'm done with all my obligations, I shall wri- oh look, a distraction!

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An interesting start. But I couldn't help wondering, where's Twilight? You didn't really explain that one.

Kinky.

Never enough futa.

Spike is with Rarity and Ember is a futa? Sorry, not my thing.

Hm.......
**Thumbs Up**

8001263 Pretty sure that i did. She's at the summit organizing it.


8001313 To each his own.:eeyup: I only hope you weren't one of the downvoters because of that.

8001342 I don't downvote stories just because I don't like 'em.:ajbemused:

:rainbowlaugh:The futa sort of blew it...:pinkiesick:

Not a fan of futa but Spike X Rarity?

*favs*

and here I was hoping for a Spike&Ember fic... but I guess as long as he's included, I can't complain (that much)

I can definitely see that you refined what you had before. I though it was good the first time, just needed a little polish, and now it does. Looking forward to chapter 2. :twilightsmile:

Boars have tusks. Rams have curled horns.

8001489 Who says it won't be? I think Ember will join in soon.

8001587 Well, that's not how it seems to be going so far; she's been gawking over Rarity FAR FAR MORE then Spike (like the fact that she NEVER EVEN HINTED ABOUT HIM in the shower) , which is what I'm complaining about

8001497 Yes, but Ember's are tusk-like whereas Ram horns curl up like Princess Leia's hair buns


8001723 Oh don't worry, Spike's a part of this too.:raritywink: If you'll recall, Ember did like Spike's appearance, but her dick wanted Rarity, hence the shower scene.

8001370 Nah, it really blows in the next chapter *rimshot*:rainbowlaugh:

8001748 yeah, and after those 5 paragraphs, you practically never even mention her attraction to him again... unless you include the description "his strong hands" at the very end of the chapter...

and for the record, I'm only complaining because, again, I was expecting a Spike&Ember&NoOneElse fic (especially one where she's a futa) , but also because I'm not a fan of les clop

8001759 I understand. To each his own. All I ask is that you wait for the next chapter. :pinkiesad2: But despite your complaints with this, I do hope you enjoyed the rest of it.

8001748 Okay, I just wanted to check because of the cover art. Kinda went :rainbowhuh:

Ember sure does have sexy thighs in the cover art!

Ah, it's finally here! Glad I could be of help. Oh and it's marked "Incomplete?" I am really looking forward to seeing more.

8002369 Yeah, you gotta savor this kind of stuff:raritywink:

Oh man at the end was going "OOH NO NONONONONONONOOO!:pinkiegasp: :rainbowlaugh:

Yes that was quite good. I look forward to more!

Very nice story I like it , not a fan of futa though.

8002803 Not a lot of people are, which is why I stayed away from writing it, but it was brought up that there was absolutely no futa Ember fics so I figured 'why not be the first?'

Bragging rights achieved!:trollestia::moustache::eeyup:

The 'Hardest' Part of Being the Dragon Lord

Giggity.

8002387 From what I've read from Chapter 2, believe me, you will not be disappointed. :twilightblush:

Sees fetish tags:

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I hope this is going where I think it's going.

Guys. You're not into futa, that's fine. You don't need to leave a comment about it like it's a problem the author has to fix. It won't change the story that you don't like intersexed characters. Either read and judge the story based on the writing, or don't vote and leave to go read another story. If we're reading erotica I assume we're most of us adults, let's act like it?

There's a part about the concept of this story that I am vehemently against but I'm still going to read it to completion because I choose to. If I found that I couldn't, I'd just go read another story. All of us can do that.

8001749 At least it gets a "rim shot".:rainbowwild: especially. . . :moustache: Do I have a say in this? :raritystarry: NO!

:facehoof: Spike your so hosed!

:derpytongue2: Every being wants Spikes foals! and yes you guys have No say in anything!

We need more futa Ember now! This was awesome!

8006324 Futaquestria group needs you to create more futa ember fics!

8006355 Me especially? I mean, I could try...:raritywink:

8006387 go for it. I just made the first one. You give it a shot. There's already a lot of fics with other characters as futa so why not give Ember some love?

Saw the title and was not disappointed to learn it was exactly the pun I thought it was

Can't say I'm really a fan of futa but this was a pretty good read. So hard to find good anthro clop stories.

Spike chuckled. “Well they are a great treasure, that’s for sure. I guess that’s why it’s called a ‘chest’.” He was unaffected by the withering glares directed at him by the Rarity and Ember.

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8008581 Well played indeed. When music actually wrote this and showed it to me, I had a feeling that there would be a bit of a poor pun in play, because that's Spike's personality--a bit brash, playful, and at times does not get tact or timing (or that he doesn't give a buck what anypony thinks about it, due to him being and becoming a proud dragon). You can't have a good Spike appearance unless there's that bite of his humor in play.

And from him, Dragon Warlock, and myself, we inspire and hope that this gives all of you to get the ol' noggins going on how to play with it. We would love to see what everyone comes up with. Remember, it takes just one to actually take pen to paper (or from mind to Word) and see what shows up.

Once again thanks for viewing this initial futa Ember story,and looking forward to see what all of you could come up with!:pinkiehappy:

Damn. I finished reading this, but now I want it to be a full story that follows Ember, and this just being part of it.

Glad I could help you out with this story. Cool to see the original story idea had also made it as an extra chapter.

You know i always wanted to see emer pair with either rarity or Twilight, so this is great i must say!

Tfw you expected nice rarity x spike x ember fic but it's futa ember x rarity:facehoof:

*downvotes*

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