A Gift of Control

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RK_Striker_JK_5

RK_Striker_JK_5 #1 · Sep 12th, 2017 · · ·

Damn, this is so good. :D Thanks for doing this for me.

Michael Hudson

Michael Hudson #2 · Sep 12th, 2017 · · ·

8421484 It was my pleasure.

Koekelbag

Koekelbag #3 · Sep 12th, 2017 · · ·

Okay, pretty good, but some things:

“I have, and I’d be happy to be with Trixie

What's the 'I have' response too? Earlier, Twi asked "Sweetie, are you still a virgin? And, if not, would you be willing to fuck Trixie?”, both of which have "I am" as an answer, so... A bit confusing, at least to me... Or I missed a sentence, which is as likely.

Also... Am I right in thinking Trixie was in control the whole time, perhaps controlling Twi from the moment she whispered the spell in her ear?

Michael Hudson

Michael Hudson #4 · Sep 12th, 2017 · · ·

8421982 You are incorrect, but as the spell was Trixie's creation, she knows it well enough to not be affected by it, as well as break it.

As for Sweetie, it should be "I am not", but u treated it as if the question had been whether or not she had sex before.

I won't lie though, while working this I was beginning to great that my depression was taking my ability to work away again, something that has cleared up now, but did affect the quality of this story. Sorry.

Merlin Prime