Rainbow Dash finds a new shop in town that sells all sorts of rare items. All the shopkeeper asks in return is that you sell of something of yours in return. Soon it becomes Ponyville's biggest new talking point, as ponies weigh up exactly what they'd consider loosing in return for fulfilling their hearts desires.
A silly, largely SFW story that deals with modularity, aka detachable body parts. Full on cartoon logic for most of it. May include NSFW chapters as side stories that are basically "non canon"
Chapters (9)
This should get the dark tag as well.
Oh my, Pinkie really isn't a very good salespony, is she?
This story was bizarre enough that I had to occasionally check in on it.
Now I find myself tracking it just so I don't have to search for it.
Though I am curious as to how many more chapters you plan on making for this story?
8071318 At least another three by my count. Between three and five.
Won't deny that, along with most of my stuff, this story is bizarre and probably incomprehensible to most people. But hope it's entertaining in at least a "wtf am I looking at" kind of way.
8071427 Can't wait to see what happens next.
You've definitely accomplished that.
Right now I'm trying to decide if I'm going to add this to my favorites or not. I'm starting to lean a bit towards yes, because it is just THAT bizarre, but I'll wait until at least the next chapter to decide.
The big question i have regarding this story is this: Is Clearheart evil, or is she just really weird?
I'm curious if AJ's chapter will be the last one, or if it will continue after that.
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At least one extra chapter after it, maybe more.
I'm also not ruling out doing a non-canon lewd chapter or two
8115607 All right.
I wonder just what Clearheart has, if anything, that AJ would want desperately enough to change her mind... or if she even DOES have anything.
Given what she's had, the answer is likely she does, but what, I have no idea...
But that'll be answered when her chapter DOES come out, so I can be patient.
She still needs to return the top of Rainbow's head...
8153990 Clearheart's a busy pony these days, it's no wonder a little detail like that's slipped her mind. I'm sure she'll get round to it sooner or later...
I really want to know what Clearheart said to defuse AJ's anger.
Now that all of the mane 6 and the CMC have traded, how much is left of this fic?
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One, maybe two chapters at most
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Yeah, about what i was expecting
Congratulations, you have written the wierdest story i have ever found on this site, and it's actually really well written and compelling on top of the blatant strangeness. I honestly have no idea whats going to happen, but I am eagerly waiting to find out.
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Cheers, that's very kind of you to say!
I have to say. This is extremely odd, extremely good, and reminds me of an old school horror novel. It's wellwritten and o can't wait to see more.
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Thank you, that's very nice to hear! I think that's interesting that you compare it to an old horror novel. I'd consider the stuff in this (and most of my stuff really) to silly and weird to be called horror, but I guess you could call a lot of my stuff body horror as well.
I'm kind of sad that it's over now, but this was really good! The part with the Crusaders was especially adorable. Applejack, Rarity, and Rainbow Dash had better keep an eye on those brains!
I don't know why, but I was honestly half expecting this fic to end with everything getting returned to normal somehow.
Though I guess in the world of this fic, this IS normal now.
I'm curious if we'll ever see Clearheart again, even if just in a random one-shot unrelated.
The ending also kind of makes me curious if there's ever going to be a sequel.
My immediate thought is "no", since it's probably just an epilogue scene, but I wouldn't be opposed to reading one if you ever were to make one
As for this story as a whole, while I probably won't add it to my favorites (simply because I was only tracking it because it had a "so bizarre I had to read" quality), I have to admit that it WAS a fun ride.
Now I'm curious as to what's next for you in general.
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They're just as much trouble when they're just brains as they were when they had bodies. If not more so
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I'm glad you got something out of the story. It is undeniably weird and bizarre, but hey, that's what I do :P Don't think they'll be a proper sequel, or anything really, but you never know!
As for what's next: Planning more for Wonderquads next. Got various ideas for various stories, both old and new. I'll see what I feel like!
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I look forward to it
This was a Fun Story. Weird is always fun in my books. I especially loved the parts with Lyra and Bon Bon. Heck all the background ponies in this could probably have their own spin off stories they were so fun and unique.
Here's hoping for a sequel (maybe?).
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Thanks! Not sure I'd do a full on sequel, but I could be tempted to add bonus chapters or something, as promised in the description
And now that I've fully read the last chapter (last time I just skimmed so I could make that comment), I'll admit that I was fully expecting a twist ending to the story and that Clearheart DID have some kind of evil plan.
What that plan would have been, though, I have no idea.
Although, now I DO kind of want to see an alternate ending to the story where Clearheart DOES turn out to be evil.
Whether said evil plan would completely succeed or not would be up to you should you actually do that.
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She is enthusiastic
Uhhh lemme have that unicorn 🅱oneless
Ill gladly trade my brain for Dashies
Pinkie pie you are insane
Why did the CMC not return to their bodies after they were found, why are they still brains?