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Pozzo


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Trixie has waited patiently for her revenge, and now she has it. She has succesfully traded Twilight Sparkle’s brain with her own, assuming the latter’s life. Twilight has been trapped in a jar, helpless and alone. Can she escape? What is Trixie planning? Will her friends learn the truth? Contains multiple endings, going from the worst to the best. Contains anthro ponies and weird humour.

This was a request from Airship-King who also helped edit the story and generally brainstorm it (Haha! Obvious puns)

Coverart is a drawing by Airship King on which this story is based. Colouring is by Nomsar, who kindly let me use his version as the cover.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 32 )

Can I just say again how awesome of you it was to write this?

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You’re very welcome!

HA! "SEES TWILIGHT AND TRIXIE KISSING." GAYYYYYYY.

“Yeah, that was just a bluff.” Said Spike, laughing nervously. “I… uh, didn’t really think this out, did I? I’m sure someone will come look for us… eventually…”

well...... SHIT.

oh hombre XD buenos finales ahora que sera lo que pase xD
esperando el siguiente capitulo y si habrá mas mas de 20 finales

This is what you call a good ending? Try again.

XD.oh have I got some freaking HILARIOUS ideas for you with this story if you wanna hear me out.:rainbowlaugh:

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There are gooderer endings on the way

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All of the planned endings are finished at this stage (I’m posting one every day) but feel free to share your thoughts anyway, appreciate your enthusiasm for the story!

aaaaand that's your tenth like!! Well... SHIT she needs a body. Time to practice MEDICINE?!!!

This ending actually Worse than last one. Try again.

Man this is a great story so far, but I got to ask, at anytime shouldn't Brain Twilight have fallen asleep, this way she would have been able to get in touch with Princess Luna who could have come and rescue her?

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like the author wrote. The water twilight was in prevented dreams. Etc.

Why does Twilight look like Beerus from Dragon Ball Super?

Now all Twilight needs is a bath in healing potion so she's sure she is fully herself again.

all i have to say about this... BUCK YOU TRIXIE.
AND I HATE THIS STORY. down vote.

es raro pero uno final no esperado o_O .siguiente mundo que pasaría si las cosas fueran diferente xD

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No. All she need is blue brain meat and barbeque sauce. :pinkiegasp:

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Conveniently, she has two helpings of blue brain meat right in her hands!

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If you're still interested in sharing, I'd like to hear your ideas!

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ALL HAIL SPIKE THE BRAVE AND GLORIOUS

I love Twilight, and I hate Trixie (in this story), so why do I love the weird and the two worst endings so much? :applejackconfused:

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Well, as your own (super good) story proves, sometimes it's fun to see bad things happens to characters you like :P

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True, especially if it's bad things that deep down they actually like :twilightsheepish:

... Which isn't a very PC thing to say. Remember, kids: Don't rape :rainbowderp:

So are both Trixies just plain dead from brain splatter, or are the mane 6 gonna put them back together?

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The latter! Also thanks for the fave!

I know this story is over a year old, but it was just brought to my attention, and while I doubt you want to edit it at this point, I noticed one repeated error.

If a quote is immediately followed by attribution, that attribution (unless it's a proper name) should be lowercase, and if the quote would end in a period, that period becomes a comma. (Other end punctuation doesn't change.)

Examples:
Wrong: "Words." She said.
Right: "Words," she said.
Also right: "Words!" she exclaimed.

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This is something I've come to realize because I'm a big dummy, yes.

Hope you enjoyed the story!

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