Trixie just met the class president, Twilight-senpai, and now she's got this strange feeling in the pit of her stomach. Is it love? Is it a crush? Is it the expired soba bread she ate for breakfast? Well, according to the nurse, it's something rather common: Senpai Fever. Just one problem... it only has one known cure.
Trixie has to get Twilight-senpai to notice her.
Yeah, I'm gonna blame Pav for this one.
Oh christ, this is a thing now
fuck
god damn it
fuck this site
Also good story <3
Took you long enough.
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Wuv u para.
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...I know that feel
...and now I'm part of it
(╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻
bless you, you beautiful bastard
may your flocks increase
Paaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaav!
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I was part of it the moment I--
oh god what have i done
Wooooooooooooooow.
Jesus Christ.
I feel like I was just repeatedly rapid-fire Falcon Punched by the Mike Tyson of anime cliches.
And yet, it hurts so good.
Very clever story! Have a fave and like!
*looks up from book, smoking a pipe and wearing a monocle and smoking jacket* Good heavens, lad! Why do you sully my good name? *blows bubbles out of pipe*
It's a very good kind of pain, this.
Before reading
Well the image and description got me interested enough to think about it before deciding not to read it, but then that WataMote chapter title sucked me right in.
After reading
Oh good Lord, that was hilarious. Kicked all of the anime cliches in all of the right places, and even threw in some original jokes in there. Oh, and . . .
. . . I totally attempted this when I was younger. I was Not Important-san in this scenario, pretty much word for word.
Good stuff
This was extremely silly and cliched.
Very good.
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Shut up baka, or I won't forgive you.
I must confess, I was slightly surprised to see you use "idiot" and not "baka...!"
That was hilarious - I've been exposed (largely though reading far too much Naruto and/or Nanoha fanction over the years before pony) to be able to get the tropes, even with my limited anime exposure.
Nicely done.
This was glorious in its ridiculousness. And I have to love how a pony named Not Important was the deuteragonist. Well done!
Glorious.
Oh gods... Pav...
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This had me grinning the whole time. I loved the Anime cliches, it wasn't overdone, but just the right amount to be silly and not be obnoxious.
Awwww Poor Not-so-important-san!
If senpai fever worsens and doesn't break, the afflicted pony morphs into a tentacle monster. Then it becomes a completely different kind of anime.
4624682 Not if I can help it! alexmagnet-san, make sure your next story is all about Spike-kun.
That was... quite frankly one of the most anime-cliche-filled stories I've ever read.
I love it.
Choose me or, your fire...
Sweet Faust and Gygax! That was glorious!
Damnit Alex
Trixie x Not Important-san otp
Notice me sempi
(I'm sorry)
Senpai San Desu Kun! Sequel, onegai kenpachi ryoko-chan!
Oh quit being a bitch, Not Important-san, Trixie was noticing you the entire damn story
Notice me Senpai-sama-san-chan-kawaii desu sugoi omii-chaa!
and here we have another story where the comments are funnier than the story!
said story was still pretty good, though
This hit all the clichés and just kept going.
And I wouldn't have it any other way.
poor not-important-san I guess she lived up to her name