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Reassembling Rainbow Dash should be straightforward, but Applejack and Fluttershy are missing bits.
8004871 This may well be a plot point! And well, Applejack's bits are still technically there on the field. You just might need to patiently scrape it all up
They seem to be having fun
I enjoy this very much, with the sexual tension between spike and twi mixed with comedy makes a good read
8019288 Thank you, glad you're enjoying it!
Rarity situation really remind me of this comic... http://mangafox.me/manga/franken_fran/v08/c060/1.html
The funniest part is fluttershy would do this and would probably smile while it happens.
And Fluttershy just realized she's caused the next doom of Ponyville.
Also, I imagine Rainbow will be pissed when she finds out she's missing certain pieces...
Problem: I can't get to the previous story using the link given in the synopsis. Do you know why that is?
Oh shit new update, coolio
8094501 Thanks for bringing this to my attention, should work now!
After the first story I was half expecting Spike to have some fun with Dash's Gash.
The others will silly. This one just felt...odd. I don't know how to describe it. I didn't care for it. I know for certain I'd be a little weirder out if my friends asked me to eat them(literally).
This story gets more bizarre with every chapter.
Don't stop.
Burger dash
8136996 Speedster's Slit?
This is weirdly entertaining, but I've always been a fan of this... Gore humour? It certainly is a thing, and always very Beetlejuice-ey in it's silliness. Point is, this is very well-done! Especially loving the cooking stuff. If I had two recommendations, it would be to do a couple more editing passes, as you're missing a lot of punctuation all over the place. And, heh, more clop! The end of the first story was really hot, and this is shaping up to be even better considering just how much Spike is getting into Pony meat, and the mane six is getting into being his meat. Hitting all the right buttons, so keep on going!
On a side note, have you ever read a fic on his site called "The many deaths of Rainbow Dash"? This feels very similar, but that one was almost completely sexless, and had a weird unnecessary antagonist.
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Thanks for the kind words, appreciate it! Always great to hear from a fan of this crazy genre that I write in.
I will admit my editing skills are extremely bad-one of these days I'll sit down and fix it all. And don't worry, when I get round to another chapter (whenever that is, got more story ideas than I know what to do with atm) then I'll ramp up the lewdness.
And yes, The Many Deaths of Rainbow Dash is an excellent story. I didn't base anything in this directly off of it but not surprised to see a connection being drawn.
Also: Love your Surgeon Simulator story!
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Oh man, heh, there's a story I haven't thought of in a long long time, but I guess it would fit too, huh? Man, part of me wants to go back to that because I had some right silly stuff planned for it, but that was one of the first fics I ever wrote on the site, and man does it show.
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Haha, well I'd love to see them at some point!
...oh
Shouldn't Dash still have her butthole, and thus not look completely bare back there? It seems like it was only her pussy that was taken.
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This is one of those detais that I was planning on making a joke about in the story and then forgot about. Woops!
Will you ever get around to finishing this odd little story??
Have you ever thought about having them mix 'n match their bodies??
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I'm more interested in exploring new ideas than revisiting old ones at this point. But not ruling it out. I do like this set up. Thanks for asking!
And yes, future chapter would probably involve mix-matching parts at some stage.
yay this story is back “fun with immortality” stories are rare but enjoyable.
"unwanted reactions"
He's into that...extra kinky shit.
This story is unusual, hilarious, and unique. I can't wait for more. Maybe Celestia and Luna can be brought in on the fun. . . . Fun thought, invite Cadance and shining armor to the castle. Shining doesn't know about the benefits of immortality and everyone plays a disturbing and potentially funny prank on him.
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Thanks, that's very nice of you say! And that's not a bad idea actually...
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OMG Yes!!! Pretty please
Cant wait till Pozzo gets in the writing spirit againt o find out what happens at the end