It turns out the Elements are linked in mysterious ways. The rest of the mane six all find out that they're virtually immortal through practical demonstrations.
The others will silly. This one just felt...odd. I don't know how to describe it. I didn't care for it. I know for certain I'd be a little weirder out if my friends asked me to eat them(literally).
This is weirdly entertaining, but I've always been a fan of this... Gore humour? It certainly is a thing, and always very Beetlejuice-ey in it's silliness. Point is, this is very well-done! Especially loving the cooking stuff. If I had two recommendations, it would be to do a couple more editing passes, as you're missing a lot of punctuation all over the place. And, heh, more clop! The end of the first story was really hot, and this is shaping up to be even better considering just how much Spike is getting into Pony meat, and the mane six is getting into being his meat. Hitting all the right buttons, so keep on going!
On a side note, have you ever read a fic on his site called "The many deaths of Rainbow Dash"? This feels very similar, but that one was almost completely sexless, and had a weird unnecessary antagonist.
8292749 Thanks for the kind words, appreciate it! Always great to hear from a fan of this crazy genre that I write in.
I will admit my editing skills are extremely bad-one of these days I'll sit down and fix it all. And don't worry, when I get round to another chapter (whenever that is, got more story ideas than I know what to do with atm) then I'll ramp up the lewdness.
And yes, The Many Deaths of Rainbow Dash is an excellent story. I didn't base anything in this directly off of it but not surprised to see a connection being drawn.
8293443 Oh man, heh, there's a story I haven't thought of in a long long time, but I guess it would fit too, huh? Man, part of me wants to go back to that because I had some right silly stuff planned for it, but that was one of the first fics I ever wrote on the site, and man does it show.
8574724 I'm more interested in exploring new ideas than revisiting old ones at this point. But not ruling it out. I do like this set up. Thanks for asking!
And yes, future chapter would probably involve mix-matching parts at some stage.
After the first story I was half expecting Spike to have some fun with Dash's Gash.
The others will silly. This one just felt...odd. I don't know how to describe it. I didn't care for it. I know for certain I'd be a little weirder out if my friends asked me to eat them(literally).
This story gets more bizarre with every chapter.
Don't stop.
Burger dash
8136996 Speedster's Slit?
This is weirdly entertaining, but I've always been a fan of this... Gore humour? It certainly is a thing, and always very Beetlejuice-ey in it's silliness. Point is, this is very well-done! Especially loving the cooking stuff. If I had two recommendations, it would be to do a couple more editing passes, as you're missing a lot of punctuation all over the place. And, heh, more clop! The end of the first story was really hot, and this is shaping up to be even better considering just how much Spike is getting into Pony meat, and the mane six is getting into being his meat. Hitting all the right buttons, so keep on going!
On a side note, have you ever read a fic on his site called "The many deaths of Rainbow Dash"? This feels very similar, but that one was almost completely sexless, and had a weird unnecessary antagonist.
8292749
Thanks for the kind words, appreciate it! Always great to hear from a fan of this crazy genre that I write in.
I will admit my editing skills are extremely bad-one of these days I'll sit down and fix it all. And don't worry, when I get round to another chapter (whenever that is, got more story ideas than I know what to do with atm) then I'll ramp up the lewdness.
And yes, The Many Deaths of Rainbow Dash is an excellent story. I didn't base anything in this directly off of it but not surprised to see a connection being drawn.
Also: Love your Surgeon Simulator story!
8293443
Oh man, heh, there's a story I haven't thought of in a long long time, but I guess it would fit too, huh? Man, part of me wants to go back to that because I had some right silly stuff planned for it, but that was one of the first fics I ever wrote on the site, and man does it show.
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Haha, well I'd love to see them at some point!
...oh
Shouldn't Dash still have her butthole, and thus not look completely bare back there? It seems like it was only her pussy that was taken.
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This is one of those detais that I was planning on making a joke about in the story and then forgot about. Woops!
Will you ever get around to finishing this odd little story??
Have you ever thought about having them mix 'n match their bodies??
8574724
I'm more interested in exploring new ideas than revisiting old ones at this point. But not ruling it out. I do like this set up. Thanks for asking!
And yes, future chapter would probably involve mix-matching parts at some stage.