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I'm a Brony who loves MLP: FIMFiction, sci-fi/fantasy, writing, Martial arts, writing songs and am always looking for the laughter around me. hope I can make you Smile Smile Smile.

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“Oh crap-baskets.”
And then this happened.

Loving this story. After he turns ape u should make him end up nude after he changes back make celestia blush lol

If he does go ape, he will be nude and there will be a lot of blushing. :rainbowlaugh: And I'm glad your enjoying it, that's what I try to do. :pinkiehappy:

An uninspired, poorly written displacement fic. Sorry but there are just so many of these that in order to stand out, you need to be exceptional, and this isn't.

Well that is your opinion and your allowed to have your own. :twilightsmile: I'm writing this for myself as much as I'm for anyone who would like to read it. I'm a fan of History's strongest disciple and I haven't been able to find any fic's for him so I decided to write one myself. :twilightsmile: I thank you for taking to time to comment, but I must also let you know, this fic is still in its infant stage, barely off the ground yet. I have plans that I will put into motion when the time is right, this is just the start of a much bigger universe that I plan to weave. Any way, thank's again for commenting, I hope you have a good day. :pinkiehappy:

So you're some sort of fusion Displaced??

Excuse me while I hold meh ballz in pure mental pain from that vid

He's sub-conciously clinging to the hope that he'll get home.

well that happened i wonder if we will see the gaint gorilla

I plan on a few heart wrenching parts in here. so brace yourself.

well at least i have a warning before i take a feels trip

I know. :twilightsmile: I take comments like that as a sign that's I'm doing things right. :pinkiehappy:

I will give it my all, and try to make it 20% better. :rainbowdetermined2: that line will never get old for me. :rainbowlaugh:

:rainbowlaugh: I think every author that ever existed has said that at least once. :rainbowlaugh:

oh sure every artist that will ever exist is going to say that

Ah, as long as you don't follow the famous 'you have access to all the ssj forms including blue and red and a made up ssj5 form' cliche.

SSG with red hair is a no, :twilightangry2: for the obvious reasons and there aren't five other saiyans in my MLP verse to pull it off :rainbowlaugh:. SSGSS with blue hair is 50/50 at the moment, not sure if I'll do that or not He'll need a form like that to get smacked around by for the grand finally. I'm basing the Super saiyan forms on this video I found on youtube. I liked it a lot and found the theory to make a lot of sense soooo... I'm using it. :twilightsmile:

So your ssj forms will be rainbow based as if you're filled with harmony magic??

Something like that. This isn't the only fic I'm writing. Most of the one's I'm writing tie into one another, They connect and support each other. :twilightsmile: I'm trying to create my own MLP Verse. like my handle implies, I'm quirky... another term for crazy. :rainbowlaugh::pinkiecrazy: The different fics are all part of the same story line and all connect... it's just viewed through different characters eyes and at different times. :twilightsmile: I kinda feel like a mad scientist after explaining this. :rainbowlaugh:

That can be good, just be careful of how strong your Displaced gets since saiyans tends to get stronger as they fight, train, or have near death experiences. And no one likes an unbeatable op saiyan, especially when you plan to cross over with other displaced.

I look forward to see who you'll pick to cross-over with in the near future. ^^

The only question I have is...why is he a Sayin? That's my only question.
Besides that everything is awesome

most displaced get the powers and abilites of not only the character they dress as, but the items they buy from the Merchant. The power pole is a classic early Goku icon. that's why he's half Saiyan. He's like a mix between Kenichi and Goku, but mostly in the physical aspect, hence his Saiyan heratige. :twilightsmile: hoped this helped.

thank you my friend:twilightsmile: makes sense...I just hope the poor guy doesn't lose himself to either of Kenichi's or Goku's memories.

He will He won't :twilightsmile: His life will be a mix of all three He's got his memories straight. :twilightsmile: no he doesn't you can trust me. :derpytongue2: have fun trusting him :pinkiecrazy:

Now, is this going to be a harem kind of story? I must know cause he literally told six women that he can last for hours on end without stopping:rainbowlaugh:

I will not disclose any information.... yet. :raritywink: there will be something for all readers and fans of this fic in the notes in the next chapter. A choice for you all to make., but I will say no more. :rainbowlaugh:

I want it to be a harem if a vote means anything. It'll be hilarious for our hero to be in so many silly situations.

it's possible. :twilightsmile: oh just posted something fun in colab with "Sanguine Dream" you should check it out. it'd give you a good laugh. :rainbowlaugh:

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