OH MY GOD! THERE! IT IS!

YAAAAAASSSSS!

“Oh crap-baskets.”
And then this happened.

Loving this story. After he turns ape u should make him end up nude after he changes back make celestia blush lol

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If he does go ape, he will be nude and there will be a lot of blushing. And I'm glad your enjoying it, that's what I try to do.

An uninspired, poorly written displacement fic. Sorry but there are just so many of these that in order to stand out, you need to be exceptional, and this isn't.

8291966
Well that is your opinion and your allowed to have your own. I'm writing this for myself as much as I'm for anyone who would like to read it. I'm a fan of History's strongest disciple and I haven't been able to find any fic's for him so I decided to write one myself. I thank you for taking to time to comment, but I must also let you know, this fic is still in its infant stage, barely off the ground yet. I have plans that I will put into motion when the time is right, this is just the start of a much bigger universe that I plan to weave. Any way, thank's again for commenting, I hope you have a good day.

MOOORRRRREEEEE

8292438
oh don't you fret... there will be.

8291966
Oh, have you read mine?

So you're some sort of fusion Displaced??

8291096
Excuse me while I hold meh ballz in pure mental pain from that vid

8294505
yep.

well that happened i wonder if we will see the gaint gorilla

8295007
oh thats sad im sad now

8295032
I plan on a few heart wrenching parts in here. so brace yourself.

8295051
well at least i have a warning before i take a feels trip

8295070
just not the when.

8295082
curse you

8295114
to late.

8295122
i stand by what i said

8295142
I know. I take comments like that as a sign that's I'm doing things right.

8295146
indeed you are good sir keep it up

8295149
I will give it my all, and try to make it 20% better. that line will never get old for me.

8295173
good luck to you

8295219
thank you and to you as well.

8295230
thanks im going to need it

8295274
I think every author that ever existed has said that at least once.

8295282
oh sure every artist that will ever exist is going to say that

8295004
Ah, as long as you don't follow the famous 'you have access to all the ssj forms including blue and red and a made up ssj5 form' cliche.

8295365
SSG with red hair is a no, for the obvious reasons and there aren't five other saiyans in my MLP verse to pull it off . SSGSS with blue hair is 50/50 at the moment, not sure if I'll do that or not He'll need a form like that to get smacked around by for the grand finally. I'm basing the Super saiyan forms on this video I found on youtube. I liked it a lot and found the theory to make a lot of sense soooo... I'm using it.

8295392
So your ssj forms will be rainbow based as if you're filled with harmony magic??

8295398
Something like that. This isn't the only fic I'm writing. Most of the one's I'm writing tie into one another, They connect and support each other. I'm trying to create my own MLP Verse. like my handle implies, I'm quirky... another term for crazy. The different fics are all part of the same story line and all connect... it's just viewed through different characters eyes and at different times. I kinda feel like a mad scientist after explaining this.

8295471
That can be good, just be careful of how strong your Displaced gets since saiyans tends to get stronger as they fight, train, or have near death experiences. And no one likes an unbeatable op saiyan, especially when you plan to cross over with other displaced.

8295517
true.

8296221
I look forward to see who you'll pick to cross-over with in the near future. ^^

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The only question I have is...why is he a Sayin? That's my only question.
Besides that everything is awesome

8297592
most displaced get the powers and abilites of not only the character they dress as, but the items they buy from the Merchant. The power pole is a classic early Goku icon. that's why he's half Saiyan. He's like a mix between Kenichi and Goku, but mostly in the physical aspect, hence his Saiyan heratige. hoped this helped.

8297617
thank you my friend makes sense...I just hope the poor guy doesn't lose himself to either of Kenichi's or Goku's memories.

8297689
He will He won't His life will be a mix of all three He's got his memories straight. no he doesn't you can trust me. have fun trusting him

8297709
haha

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8297718
Now, is this going to be a harem kind of story? I must know cause he literally told six women that he can last for hours on end without stopping

8297723
I will not disclose any information.... yet. there will be something for all readers and fans of this fic in the notes in the next chapter. A choice for you all to make., but I will say no more.

8297727
I want it to be a harem if a vote means anything. It'll be hilarious for our hero to be in so many silly situations.

8297740
it's possible. oh just posted something fun in colab with "Sanguine Dream" you should check it out. it'd give you a good laugh.

8297744
right then

8297744
what is it again?

8297754
sorry I wasn't able to get back to you till now. was at work. here's the link to what I wanted to show you, hope you enjoy.
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/748735/quirkygallade-made-a-thing