A guy goes to Con dressed as his favorite character, Kenichi Shirahama, and gets sent to Equestria with a few small changes... HE HAS A TAIL?! O.o ( Looks to friend) why wasn't I told about the change in the script?
"Damn it, I can't get a lock." I hissed through clenched. Twilight turned to ask a questions when I massive roar blasted the silence away. We all looked forward as a creature charged at us from the path ahead. This thing looked like it could eat the Timberwolves for a snack.
Waking up in a hive, eh? Well, not the most frustrating cliffhanger I've seen at least. Still probably going to be driven up a wall waiting for the next chapter though. One thing in particular this chapter leaves me hoping for is seeing some friction between Celestia and the elements. I'd like to see Celestia struggling with hostility she's unaccustomed seeing from her student only to be saved by Kenichi stepping in saying something along the lines of, "I don't mind. She just did what anyone should do in the same place and fell back on her training, I'm just glad she waited long enough for nonlethal alternatives and that no one got hurt."
8354604 Firstly, that wasn't predicted because of personal preference as much as for the fact that it fit best both with MLP character and with kenichi's training (his masters did teach him to rely on training as if second nature, after all).
Secondly...that little ominous answer of yours might well be a cruelty worthy of Niijima himself. You have my grudging respect.
8360007 *Phew* I tried to pay a lot of attention to details. I still have figure out a name for the little cub. haven't been able to come up with anything other then Rhia.
8360226 they're an amazing read if you like fantasy, magic an Merlin. His Adventures of Kate trilogy is a mix of Sci-fi and Fantasy which he blends together expertly.
8427611 Okay... this is just weird. first they were not there, then they're fine, now they're not fine. I swear the internet is trying to make my head hurt.
Face HUGGER, not face huger. Unless you meant something that makes faces huge?
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it kept saying i spelled it wrong. I fix ti right away. thanks for letting me know.
When you get to the hive bit this came to my mind.
https://m.Also in the beginning i saw a few typos. A misspelled this and ... i can't remember the other one but i did see two. Just a heads up.
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thanks for the input. I'll give this a watch, see what it's like and I hope you enjoyed my tale so far.
I vote luna
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My blog post is the place to vote for the herd mate.
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Np also did you like the song?
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I did. I'm always a fan of Machinema's work.
And Somehow, MLP makes it look less threatening
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Ain't that the truth.
lolz also i noticed that there's alot of spelling mistakes
also needs music for battles :P
Waking up in a hive, eh? Well, not the most frustrating cliffhanger I've seen at least. Still probably going to be driven up a wall waiting for the next chapter though. One thing in particular this chapter leaves me hoping for is seeing some friction between Celestia and the elements. I'd like to see Celestia struggling with hostility she's unaccustomed seeing from her student only to be saved by Kenichi stepping in saying something along the lines of, "I don't mind. She just did what anyone should do in the same place and fell back on her training, I'm just glad she waited long enough for nonlethal alternatives and that no one got hurt."
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That would be the good ending to that..... Not the ending I have planned.
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Firstly, that wasn't predicted because of personal preference as much as for the fact that it fit best both with MLP character and with kenichi's training (his masters did teach him to rely on training as if second nature, after all).
Secondly...that little ominous answer of yours might well be a cruelty worthy of Niijima himself. You have my grudging respect.
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Why thank you. Niijima is by far my favorite character in the entire anime. the only others who come close are Apachi and Takeda.
Edit: This is me while writing
Finally reread this. Doing some good work man. Keep it up.
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I'm glad you enjoy it. what did you think of the fourth chapter? I thought I might have rushed it a bit.
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I liked ti, I love that he’s got a cute manticore kitten to raise. I found the fighting excellent as well.
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*Phew* I tried to pay a lot of attention to details. I still have figure out a name for the little cub. haven't been able to come up with anything other then Rhia.
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I like Rhia
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it's short for Rhiannon, one of my favorite female characters from literature.
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I’m not familiar with the name.
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I'm not surprised. most people I've talked to don't know the author. T.A. Barron, his works included "The lost years of Merlin" epic, "The great Tree of Avalon" trilogy and "Merlins Dragon" just to name his more well known ones. I'm more partial to the epic and his Adventures of kate trilogy.
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Huh. Fascinating.
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they're an amazing read if you like fantasy, magic an Merlin. His Adventures of Kate trilogy is a mix of Sci-fi and Fantasy which he blends together expertly.
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also, did you like the cliff hangers?
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I did.
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More pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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It's coming don't you worry. I'm glad your enjoying it.
And if give us 1 more clif hanger I am going to chuck you off it and then take the kitty in the story just to awwwwwwwwwwwwww it herts
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well I better buy a parachute then cause you'll be doing a lot of throwing in the future.
well at lest you will learn to shy dive
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I don't think Fluttershy will appreciate that.
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Hmm, that map looks familiar...
(looks to the side) Hey Paolini, you ever read "The Lost Years of Merlin"?
(starts sweating profusely) Um, nooooo...
You sure? Because even if it's not identical, that image has some striking similarities to the map of Alagaesia.
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You and I must be thinking of different definitions of the term "diving".
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Maaaaaaybe.
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Okay... this is just weird. first they were not there, then they're fine, now they're not fine. I swear the internet is trying to make my head hurt.
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chapter 3 and 2
Well, that went tits up.
Ooooh, can't wait for best bughorse to appear. :D
I am a adult
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Gohan: No, no you are not.