HA! Okay did not see the Dada/Mama coming at all! and I love the crazy characters in the authors notes you create. this was a fun and interesting chapter. well done.

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Thanks Gnarl. How's Wayward Magic coming along by the way?

Is that filly supposed to be Wuna?

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It's Luna from the earlier chapters

i pet it was pinkie who brought the frying pan

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The only Pan was the one Twilight made with her magic.

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huh you know I would of thought it was pinkie just in case of frying pan emergencies

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*LE GASP* THE DREADED FRYING PAY EVERY MALE/HUSBAND'S WORST NIGHTMARE

Good show

pffff (not going to laugh)
hahahahahahahahahaha

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glad you liked it.

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Thanks.

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the bane of every mans existence.

Well done sir. Very well written.

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It should be it took me this long to write it. It's my first attempt at a clop scene and I wanted to make sure it was as good as I could get it I'm hoping people enjoyed it.

More?

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there will be.

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It was at that moment Kenichi know he fucked up

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in both ways.

Hun, you know he really didn't deserve to get hit with the frying pan. Just saiyan
*cue flying frying pan coming at my head*

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The frying pan ain't coming from me. I'm fond of puns, I'm saiyan. it's good

AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
I was internally and literally screaming from the point where Kenichi was teleported back (with his dick still in Chrysalis and plenty naked) to the end of the chapter....

Otherwise, very good chapter, I eagerly await for more.
https://media1.tenor.com/images/5bedb481a5872240406b1c8b7302e36c/tenor.gif?itemid=5074749

The clop was well done. But the ending with filly Luna... HNNGG-MYHEART

-Snrk- Whenever he gets whacked by Twilight's Magic Frying Pan©, I can't help but see this as his face everytime:
https://78.media.tumblr.com/9131cd1cc84801f72db8c538498cf888/tumblr_nnwlg5z5Aw1rwfctbo2_500.gif

Going out on a limb to say that might be little nightmare moon or nix

Horay for good updates! i wonder how screwed he'll be once he wakes up?

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I didn't see that face when he got whacked with the frying pan but now I can't unsee it.

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you're close but you got the wrong half. it's a filly Princess Luna.

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*Evil cackle* oh, I have plans.

Kinky. Also, smooth.

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it's my fist clop scene so that's high praise. thanks

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The real question is how literally screwed will he be?

Very screwed i'd say.

I learned something today. I am not a fan of clop.

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Welp he's dead AF Requiescat In Pace my friend.
(\ _ /)
(x - x)
(U__U)

aaaaaaaand, he a dead man.

Good job keep it up

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no he just spilt soda on his computer

So you're doing collabs on this with other authors? Because if so, this fic probly isn't for me. A lot of decent Displaced fics end up derailing just to cram obligatory crossovers into them.

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not really a colab. just we agreed both of our stories would take place in the same world and timeline. They don't really match up.

This was amazing and would love to see more, and as a question when do you think you'll put him out for crossovers I'm not planing one or writing a story just asking cause he is a displaced

Are more chapters going to happen soon?

I want to read more and more about this this is too funny

More is needed.

Can you continue this story please

Update

... Well fuck... I was hoping that there would be alot more to this. But great story so far

Found this and it was quite amusing *Sips Tea* Watched and hoping it returns some time in the future

This is hilarious!
Please make it return!

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I am sad to say he is never coming back ;-;