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You might want to include a status in your story's description about cross-overs. Depending on if you plan for the main character to meet other displaced not, it will attract certain types of readers who hate cross-overs or love it.

Can't wait to see where this goes

Comment posted by DAMN HAMSTER deleted Jan 13th, 2019

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Any feedback is welcome.

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All of that will be explained later. Honestly I'm just going with don't ask questions now and all will be explained.

Awwww, I wanted to see Shining Fuckwit get the shit beat out of him!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

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I'll get started right away!:pinkiegasp:

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Nah man take your time, A rushed story is a bad story after all :pinkiehappy:

Though can you stick Shining armor and one of his Boy Toy Guards to a tree with Sand in a 69 Postion, you know like how Gara did to Sakura in the Invasion of Konoha?

Seeing how he was summoned via a Coffin I'm guessing he a Edo Tensei?
Awesome~ :rainbowlaugh::raritystarry::rainbowlaugh::raritystarry:

Instead of just standing there like a useless Saiyan Taka kicked the guard into a tree, and to add insult to injury another guard hit the tree on top of him and stuck there by a claw of iron sand. They were light headed for a moment before realizing that the guard on top was up side down(69 position).

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I didn't think you would do what I suggested! I left that as a Idea that I fully Expected not to Happen :pinkiehappy:

If I had to Write the next Arc........Hmm I would go with asking Permission to find Other Chakra Users and maybe setting up Long term plans to get a Hidden Village loyal to Celestia and Luna (NOT Equestria or the Nobles) set up. After that I would see about looking into Rumors or Mercenary contracts to start building up some funds, Hell maybe play on that Comedy Tag and have a Run in with RD that some how ends up in an Awkward situation.

But that's just my mind set, for the NAME for the next Arc? Hmm, Maybe The Harmony Arc?

Okay so far, but you need to work on grammar a little still.

Sweet Luna, you know it's gonna be a ride when the first thing you see is your past Comment quoted at the top of the chapter :rainbowlaugh:

I am Likely gonna regret this next comment buuuut.....The First enemies he is gonna encounter are going to be a Bunch of Pirates on a Land Ship isn't it? I mean you can't name an Arc what you did and NOT leave them out after all :pinkiecrazy:

Edit: Enemies at first I should say, They would mark the first of his New Ninja Core.....Hell just for shits and giggles and to stick with the theme you can call the first of of your Ninja the "Sabaku no koa" or Desert Core! They will be the base for your Villages ANBU Force and will be trained under you only :pinkiehappy:

Oh god I should learn to keep my mouth shut.....Bah fuck it there are no Break on this train! :pinkiecrazy:

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To tell you the truth I haven't seen all that much of one piece. Even so I don't remember half of what I saw. I think I stopped at when Luffy got his but kicked by a guy that uses dehydrating sand or something.:twilightblush:

ALSO LANGUAGE!:pinkiegasp:

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True, but it would still be funny to do it Hell it would also give you a mode of transportation that doesn't relies on Chakra :rainbowlaugh:

But Pinkie! If I do that I can't make people Laugh when i am surprised!

Btw what did you think of the name for the ANBU?

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The name of the ANBU might be something like KADU or something.

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I guess it could work? I mean the ANBU answer only to the Kage.....You know now that I think about it, are Celestia and Luna going to act as the Villages.....Uh I guess it would be Daimyō? or would that be Sponsor? hmm.

D'awww Does little Lulu have a Crush on the big bad Kage :rainbowlaugh:

Yes I had to re-read it to see that thing with Luna :ajbemused:

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I suppose that the royal sisters would act as sponsors. I mean they don't really have many good uses of their time.

Also yes Lulus got a crush. I mean he practically single handedly saved her life from Nightmare Moon. Kind of.:twilightblush:

Sorry I didn't make it clear on Lunas feelings. I've never been good at writing about relationships like that. Though it might as well only be a high school crush right now.:raritywink:

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Hmm, You know if you have the Royal Sisters as a Sponsor you can look though their Guard Core for Chakra users and have the Sisters Reassign them to Him as part of the Ninja Core.

No, no you made it Clear I just didn't spot it the first time around for some reason, So it fine.

You know it would be Hilarious if Luna and Celestia could use Chakra, I just can't get the Image of them sitting behind a Desk being Lectured by him as an Academy Teacher.

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You know it would be Hilarious if Luna and Celestia could use Chakra, I just can't get the Image of them sitting behind a Desk being Lectured by him as an Academy Teacher.

I may just have to use that.:rainbowlaugh:

I cant wait for an update to find out what happens next please update when you can

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I'm already on it. Hope you enjoy it!:pinkiehappy:

Grins So let me guess? Naruto in Pony Form? This is gonna be fun :pinkiecrazy:

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I spent like a whole week just brainstorming the layout of this mini arc

I have so much planned:trollestia:

This seemed to reboot the six as the trinkets began to blow and they lifted into the air.

Began to glow

He hat a white coat and blue mane and had a picture of a shield on his armor.

He had

(Canterlot Castle - Thrown Room)

Throne

The lastest chapter is hacking with 1337 words

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1337 is the number that hackers put as there clan tags in games like call of duty

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I don't play call of duty, or any of those types of games really.

REEEEEEEE!!!! I NEED MORE!!

HAHAHAHA! YES NARUTO LIVES!

Also if you are going to use the names of the Characters, you should probably do them as Last Name>First Name instead of First Name>Last name. In japan Naruto's name would be Uzumaki Namakazi Naruto (Or Namakazi Uzumaki Naruto depending on which last name is Dominant) for Example.

Also as to what Kuulanth was saying, "1337" is the Numerical spelling for "Leet" and is an Old joke.

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Got it.

Also the chapters might start coming out slower for the next few weeks. Mid terms are coming up and then I have to go offline a bit shortly after, so the next chapter I post might be the last for the year.:fluttershysad:

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CAUSE ITS F*CKN AWESOME THATS WHY

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You do you mate, Mid Terms are a Pain. Just glad I didn't have to take mine :pinkiehappy:

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