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if any writers reads this i have a request if you want to do it. it may be dark but I'd like to see a fic of these comics in the POV of Applejack especially we don't see in between comics 2 and 3.
https://derpibooru.org/755908?scope=scpe3a631d430a85c853d5c9132b95b7456cef3c2cda
https://derpibooru.org/755978?scope=scpe3a631d430a85c853d5c9132b95b7456cef3c2cda
https://derpibooru.org/758243?scope=scpe37e84c8595c6ae884337931816fb5a805fa0751b

NOOO!! *starts crying*

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p.s. Can we have at the end we find-out that angel told F.S. that the pumpkin is A.J. and F.S. didn't think that what Discord did was funny so she got him back by taking a other pumpkin and making this pie.
You know what I mean ?

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I'd still like the original story of the comic but, I guess you could

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P.S. I'm not saying this because i dislike Aj. she's my fav pony. i just kind of like unaware inanimate TFs.

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ok, but does you stell want F.S. 2 have killed A.J. ?

p.s. "Click" on the pencil 2 edit your comment.
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4282074 well it was flutters that made the pie.
also if you want you can make 2 ending one good and one bad that way those who want AJ to live and those who like dark endings can both be satisfied including you who would want the good and me who would want to follow the comic.

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K.. what other endings can we have ?

p.s. in that bad ending, can we have F.S. say "this pumpkin pie tests like apples"

4282131 the good ending is the one you suggested with angel telling fluttershy. the bad is the one where aj get turned into a pie.

P.S. yes have Flutters say that

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ok, we have 2 endings, do you have some more ?

p.s. and then F.S. starts tocking like A.J., she eat's some more she starts acting like A.J., when she eat's it all she thinks she is A.J. !

4282183 i think it should just be the 2 endings but maybe we could have a 2nd part of the bad ending where flutters thinks she's aj. though i think we should just stick with the 2

4281904 - cool comic! I might have a try at this.

4282384 K. But can you please put all that whiteoak019 & I said !? Please

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Chapter 1 = fist part of the story
Chapter 2 = the good ending (NicLove's)
Chapter 3 = What ever ending that Vineyl Scratch has in her/his head-caning.
Chapter 4 = the funny ending. The pie changes back into A.J. before that can start eating her, both F.S. & A.J. look at Discord, and then Discord runs away.
Chapter 5 = the weird ending. Soarin beys the pie from F.S. and then.. this ending https://www.google.ca/search?q=my+little+pony+friendship+is+magic+soarin+pie&biw=1038&bih=615&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ei=v80xVfehC8O3yATorYD4CA&ved=0CAYQ_AUoAQ#imgrc=eyKnfEfHuqMgOM%253A%3BjlD2PsIe65lQ6M%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Ffc05.deviantart.net%252Ffs71%252Ff%252F2011%252F230%252F2%252Fa%252Fand_a_word_from_our_sponsors_by_johnjoseco-d472agh.jpg%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fanimal-kid.com%252Fmy-little-pony-soarin-pie.html%3B900%3B900
Chapter 5 = the bad ending (whiteoak019) part 1
Chapter 6 = the bad ending part 2.1 F.S. thinks she is A.J.
Chapter 7 = the bad ending part 2.2 F.S. is pregnant, gives birth to a baby A.J., the baby bets older, and in a week A.J. is back 2 normal.

Got more ideals ?

4281904 - done!

Applejack-o-lantern

That was a fun silly thing to write. :yay:

4282917 - to be honest I was only looking to write whiteoak019's original suggestion based on the comic.

4283307 i just read it it was better than I'd hoped

4282917 i thought you were gonna wrote that one?

4283394 - glad I could satisfy your expectations. :yay:

Other people are asking for a good ending now. I guess I might have to come up with something. :rainbowwild:

4283447 I guess. honestly i thought NicLove was gonna write the one with multiple endings

4283307 Can you make a other Chapter with one of the other endings ? please

4283394 4283469 Do you 2 want me 2 do the other endings ?

4283447 Do the ending that whiteoak019 & I tocked about ?

4284034 well that is what i thought you were talking about
also i realized you haven't made a fic yet on this site so you don't have to if you don't want to

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I want 2 put my story here, but I can't get publish because of my spelling-falltes.
Can you (or Vineyl Scratch) please do the other endings ? please

can you also help me ?
http://niclove.deviantart.com/gallery/50684546/The-life-of-Bent-G

4285379 I'm sorry I'm still new to writing and want to focus on another fic i plan on starting. Plus I feel the people that write the request can write it however they like

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