Zephyrus Scary
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Interesting...
Definitely never tried out transformations in my vore before, and I can't say I'm a big fan of the end result being digestion but this...was really nice.
Considering what I'm used to seeing from you, this was... underwhelming, to be quite honest.
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Underwhelming compared to my other work in what way?
Before you say anything about seriousness, I'll just say that my usual shtick is deep character analysis wrapped up in a deadly situation which forces said analyzed character(s) to perform various immoral acts while trying to do good.
This, however, is just a fap rag. A rag with hints of my signature character analysis perhaps, but again, what more did you expect from a story that has a fetish checklist in the description?
Nice story I wonder, if the Griffin hadn't gotten the bath what would the poison joke have done to her, maybe turn her into a chicken or at least half one?
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Nah, I just found the overall writing to be... Bleh. It felt dead, confusing at parts (Mostly the griffoness bit) and just... Lack luster I guess? Very light on details.
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But didn't Pan Sizzle just flippin' die?
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Anyways, Zephyrus Scary, you replied to GlueStick that your...
And now that I think about it, that's exactly how you write. I mean, who else would've had Celestia nearly murder someone in cold blood in their stories? Not anyone I know.
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Guh... One of you is one thing, but... seriously? Is that "ambiguous ending" tag only visible to me? In case it isn't, and you're just confused, Pan's fate is basically free for you to imagine; I only had him be wrong about the griffon's actions to help this point along, but just because he's wrong about why, doesn't necessarily mean he's dead--she might have realized who he was some other way (perhaps his taste?) and wanted to panic him a bit because of her playfulness, which I setup in the first scene--this being in opposition to the implications of the previously mentioned "Pan's incorrect analysis" scene by setting up a possible alternative interpretation. I tried to balance those two scenes so neither seems more likely than the other; I guess I failed on that front.
Also:
I'm not sure if you mean that in a good way or bad...
Was good! Not a big fan of the ambiguous ending (digestion makes me feel all fuzzy inside!) but I can understand why you did it.
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You like digestion? Well, then, I would suggest you watch me, because more vore stories are coming, and some of them are going to include explicit digestion!
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...Sir or Madam, you have my attention.
This was fantastic. I kinda want to see what would have happened if he didn't land in the poison joke and went back there the next day.