This story is a sequel to An Apple Sleep Experiment
It’s been seven years since the great massacre, and ponies are still trying to cope in the aftermath. Twilight Sparkle, Princess of Friendship, and her friends (minus one obvious apple) are preparing for the annual memorial, when an unexpected castle guest threatens to disrupt the peace in Ponyville forever.
This is the OFFICIAL Sequel to my previous story "An Apple Sleep Experiment", both of which have audio/visual adaptations on Youtube! For the sequel, it will be in four parts, linked here:
Part 1:
https://youtu.be/E5RB92VTb-4
Part 2:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ozjdx76WOjs
Chapters (7)
Yo what a way to start off the sequel can't wait to see the audio adaptation tomorrow and the next 3 parts so excited
AHHHHHHHHH YES YES YESSSS I'M SO EXCITED I LOVED THE FIRST ONE SO MUCH I'M SO EXCITED TO SEE THIS AWESOME SEQUAL
Applejack's come back for retribution... and it looks like Twilight's long kept secret will finally come out
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I picked the right time to check this site again!
Interesting! I wasn't expecting a sequel. Looking forward to how this goes. ^^
There's now a sequel.
Let's freakin' go.
Nice.
Huh, makes you wonder how she got that title after what she did to her other “friend” oh this will be good
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Same
The revenge of a friend so long locked in a darken cell where no light may reach her, her one friend that knew what caused this mare to become what she is, only for that to be revealed far too late as her student now dying in her hoofs,
For the applejack they knew died that day seven years ago, and she has come home for one thing
REVENGE!
Considering how the door was reflecting Twilight's spells, it kinda makes me think that the Castle of Friendship itself was aiding Applejack.
Honesty will set you free... From this mortal coil.
TBH I just want to see applejack's revenge on twilight for what she done to her
And it’s all twilight’s fault. What’s funny is that Celestia might’ve shown some leniency to her.
Very spooky. I love this!
I could have only imagined what a sequel to Apple Sleep Experiment would be and this first part FAR exceeded my expectations. Well done.
Twilight finally facing the consequences of her own actions feels so good! Maybe she shouldn't have told AJ who would replace her *wink*
I can't wait to read the next parts and hear the reading of it.
Edit: This reads like an Edgar Allan Poe story. And I may have called the big twist... I'll wait to see if I'm right 😉
When reading this it reminded me of this song imagining Applejack singing this and Twilight sparkle being the one that's going to be suffering
https://youtu.be/buYrBbwyCGE?si=J9JeCCNZN83pk5ww
I fucking loved this! I can't wait for moreni always wanted a sequal to an apple sleep experiment. I cant wait to see everyone reacting to twlights lie.
While i did wacth the audio version instead of reading, i still gotta give props at this amazing start to the sequal and its story its trying to tell so far. My fav scene was with AppleJack just weaving Twilights attacks that shit was badass
at a point, you think they'd stop doing apple sleep experiments. it never seems to end well. who funded this?
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Ummm did you not properly read the chapter or listen to/watch the audio drama?
well, that is one way to kick off the sequel, and I am also hearing Losty read this story as I follow along.
I didn't know that there's 4 parts to this
oh well can't wait for more. And I love how the audio distorts too.
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I doubt it. Who's gonna believe a crazy earth pony who broke into the Castle of Friendship and murdered Starlight Glimmer? The best Applejack can hope for is to kill Twilight before she's killed.
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Valid point. We'll just have to see how the rest of the series goes - or if there will be a surprising twist.
A great start I was engaged throughout it all
This is great so far, Mag! Have a good day/night!
so what is this a sequel to? It doesn't seem to exist
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This is a sequel to "apple sleep experiment" if its not on fimfic then its on YouTube for sure
did you mean "sentry"?
I was so excited when this came out.
Magpiepony is such an amazing writer.
Let's give her thanks for this.
✨✨✨WE NEED IT!!! ✨✨✨
Holy shit!
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I did, thank you!
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No prob 👍
Oh my god, do you know how hard it was to focus on my homework knowing this was out
ohhh crap. It's came back with a VENGEANCE
Twilight did that poor woman wrong. 😢
Both the original fic and it's sequel are so good! I look forward to more!
Happy Halloween. Applejack needs them all to understand it was Twilight's fault before they die.
RIP Starlight you were a good pony
Just finished reading the first story and oh boy was it a doozy, and I can tell the sequels gonna be an even bigger doozy
AJ's out for revenge and I can already tell who her next victim is gonna be now that shes out *cough Filthy Rich*
Also i wonder how the farms doing now that it's just Big Mac and granny taking over?
I honestly think Pinkie could take Applejack in a fight. If you think about it, Pinkie comes from a family of rock farmers. And, seeing as Maud can turn a rock into dust relatively quickly, I'd say Pinkie is stronger. Then, there's the possibility of Pinkie being related to the apples, which doubles her strength. We also can't forget that Pinkie is as fast as Rainbow on the ground and as unpredictable as Discord—not including her fourth-wall-breaking toon force powers. So, in normal circumstances, Pinkie beats Applejack.
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You made very good points, but sadly. The author doesn't see it that way, and only let Pinkie save one. When she could have easily saved the other twin or even Mr. Carrot Cake if she wasn't holding back her strength.
That's messed up. However, this brings another inquiry to mind—Fluttershy vs Applejack. In normal circumstances, it's always Applejack. One good buck could take Fluttershy out of the fight. But, an enrage Fluttershy - utilizing her stare, strength, and speed. She might put up a decent fight.
Starting to think they're all going insane. Maybe Twilight gave everyone the taste of the sleepless potion? Would explain a lot of their behaviors in part one. I don't know, this is just a theory
Seems like AJ isn't setting out to kill her friends. No, she's setting out to ruin their lives, reputations, and probably even frame them for murders.
Of course, I'm waiting for the twist that all of the girls have actually been accidentally dosed with the Sleepless potion. There are some hints that point towards that being the case.
I think I see what's happening here... and I ain't sayin' a word.
Geez, what a ungrateful brat! Pinkie was trying to save your damn life from the fire. Too bad Mr Cake just decided to give up on life and not help Pinkie save his kids.
It is tragic that his wife died, but you still have your kids to SAVE, geez!!!
Mrs. Cake will be so disappointed in him when they're in the afterlife.
P.S. So you just let poor Pumpkin to die!? I thought she was getting both of them!?
Okay, I am so confused. How and why the hell does Twilight's Sleepy Magic make Applejack "immune" to pain or seems indestructible!!!??
Dude AJ is ruthless, I love it
She is becoming a dark god