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Magpiepony


I'm a pegasister who just can't get enough pony magic in her life!

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It's Hearts and Hooves Day and once again Applejack finds herself uninterested in the festivities. This year, however, Applejack is shocked to hear a strange voice "in the sky" that narrates her life and is pressuring her into romantic feelings for Rarity. Applejack is at the mercy of this unknown source as she is pulled to carousel boutique to seal her fate with Rarity in one sweet simple kiss.

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Wow! Really well done. I love the concept and the...well, everything. Great job.

Just caught one issue. Check out the quotation marks in the last paragraph. It seems that something went awry there.

Keep it up!


If anyone were to take advice from me, this is what I would wish it to be.
That it matters not what others may say. What matters most is your passion, day by day.
-Scuba12

Yay! For best ship! The narrator knows what's up.

This reminds me eerily of the Stanley Parable...
Good story, though!

Wow, the Stanley Parable of MLP. This is quite amusing and well written

God damn
I love this whole 'Narrator Interacts with the Characters' concept

Though this is more similar to 'Stranger than Fiction' than 'The Stanley Parable', as the narrator never directly speaks to AppleJack.
Also, if you haven't seen Stranger than Fiction, I would recommend it :twilightsmile:

Holy shit. This is kinda like Death Note with the controlling people, just not with the inevitable death part...I hope

This is the best story ever. :rainbowlaugh:

5519871 I love that movie. :rainbowlaugh: Every pun intended.

Okay, that was hilarious! :rainbowlaugh:
Surely Twilight has some more matchmaking to do now that she's had a taste? After all she does have a LOT of single friends...:rainbowderp:

So Twilight was behind this? not Discord? But it would be SO fitting and make a hole lot more sense if it wear him.
Oh will i'm no comedian nor a good writer so what do i know, the story was good and rather funny.
This fic rating from me is a 8/10 :moustache:
~Tobbem

Yay RariJack :yay:

Next up: TwiDash.

...*eagerly awaits down votes*

At least she's not writing the fics from "twilight sparkles secret shipfic folder" :twilightsheepish::twilightsheepish:

I can't help but read this and think of this video.

Very well done. :twilightsmile:

I read the narrator lines in the voice of the narrator from The Stanley Parable and it made the story twice as funny. Always love a good random story.

5519871
I'm not the only one who thought of the film with the dudebro who suddenly hears the narrator voice of the chick who accidentally writes books about him?

ALSO OP, Carousel Boutique is the name of a place.

Reminds me of that short with Daffy Duck, where the animator does all them nasty stuff to him, and in the end the animator is revealed to be Bugs Bunny. Really nice :twilightsmile:

Wasn't there a TwiDash story like this?

10/10

Should be rated as Grimdark...

A wonderful story. I almost wish we could've learned how much farther it went, whether Applejack would learn that twi was behind it. But, i think this is fine without that. Some things are better left unknown, am i right?

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I was a little put off by the Cheerimac at the start, but I'm glad I stuck it out, because this is hilarious.

I read it in the Stanley Parable narrater voice

This was awkward for me to read. I may ship these two but this literally is first lesbian shipping fanfic I've read......

Best ship fic ever!

Never thought Twilight would play cupid.

Wonderful memories of one of my favorite movies of all time came up while listening to TheLostNarrator's rendition of this. "Stranger Than Fiction" (as has already been mentioned) is a lot like this...only if Harold had been protesting all this time.

The finale with Twilight was a very, very nice touch. ^^

EVIL(-:

5528700 Author. Make this happen please.

Aha! I've bene looking for this story forever since I read it a long time ago and really liked it but lost track of it!

Bookmarked!

At the end i was like 'bruh Twilight being cupid now whats next FlutterdDash or RainbowPie':twilightsheepish:

At the end i was like 'bruh Twilight being cupid now whats next FlutterdDash or RainbowPie':twilightsheepish:

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