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Seven Fates


That girl that writes things you may or may not read. TG stuff, probably. Avatar of my batpony Evening Script by baladeAdvent.

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Yaaaaayyy~!:pinkiehappy:

One of the best endings IMO :D

That was quick

5368380

Felt like you were gonna sit on writing/uploading this story from your blog post.

5368391 Nah, I'm pretty sure when I made the 'Mini-update' blog post, I was already done. I only had to get it edited.

5368399

So uh, hows that new chapter of ABU coming along....

5368404 As of last night at 6:27 pm [it is now 12:50 am on Thursday the 11th], it's sitting at 3k with one scene left to finish.

5368410

Hype is real, cant wait lol

5368604 My goodness! The obviousness detector just exploded! Whatever could have caused it?:raritywink:

Always nice to have a bit more m/m around, and even though I'm not a big fan of pony X human sex, that was pretty hot.

Seven, I love you. I need more of this, NAO!

Saw the summary, had to post this.

BAD END

GOOD END

BEST END

5370082 I agree. Adora Belle is better off this way.

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I enjoy stories like this from a Devil's Advocate point of view. Mind control and transformation and forced happiness are almost universally portrayed as negative... and to be fair, there's a lot of sense in that. But one underlying theme in those kind of stories is that the 'real' personality is suppressed, trapped, stifled - their outward qualities are only outward, and on the inside they're suffering.

But what happens when that's not the case? When the transformation is real, and complete? Who's to say the new you has any less right to exist than the old you? What if your happiness isn't just faked, but genuine? What if your original life wasn't all that great?

Is a cheerful, optimistic new existence as a cute, attractive, desirable, happy young mare who gets laid regularly really all that bad?

There are a couple aspects of the story I'm not wild about - in particular I'd have preferred less of the darker implications. Less the idea that the ponies are conducting the transformations for their own sake, and more because they legitimately think the humans will be happier and better off that way - twisted, domineering love like that is always a concept that fascinates me. But yeah, I quite enjoyed this.

And plus a million points for pony fluids having transformative effects. Kinda reminds me of an old favorite of mine, Heat and Desire.

Heh, just remembered an old comment of yours:

Fun fact: I generally don't read M/M stuff because the thought alone of me being with another man as I am makes me uncomfortable, and reading about two men doing it feels even more awkward.

I can just imagine Celestia singing, you've come such a long long way. :derpytongue2:

5370456 Yep. I'm pretty sure My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic made me bisexual.

I'm not sure I would classify this as an extreme fetish, but I'm a pretty weird person.

5370884 I know that for some the size thing is extreme, and the mind thing is another iffy bit. then there is the cum cocoon... Better safe than sorry.

When Prince Dusk Shine discovered the human world, he saw a great possibility. The human people were so easily manipulated, and there were certain undesirables that he was certain nopony would miss. The prince realized that he could solve two problems at once; rid that world of the undesirables, and increase the population of mares in ours.

rid that world of the undesirables,

undesirables

Hmm, this sound kind of familiar....wait.

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5371059 I never actually drew that parallel when I wrote it, and while I can see how one might see that comparison, it doesn't quite come to equal footing. Hitler's solution was to exterminate them by the millions and to ensure they didn't breed. Prince Dusk's solution was to import them to his world, brainwash them, change their species [and sex, if necessary] to ensure that they did breed.

"Why boner ?" Indeed.

5370923 I did mention being a strange person. Now that I have my computer back, I'll be able to get to work on an idea that's been percolating in the back of my mind. It involves a concept that basically redefines extreme fetish transformations.

5371499 it has returned with a vengeance!!!

I think this is the first Stallion on Human Male fic I've ever been able to find.

5371082 So... give or take the same thing, 'cept for an army, it's 'specified few' via Gestapo tactics.

Why would anyone want an idiot for a mate?

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Well, with enough babies, and some "reprogramming", maybe you could breed out the idiot...

Also, when the alternative is taking a horsecock up the butt yourself, with no possibility of having children, the "idiot" option looks just a tad more desireable. It's like choosing between having the ditsy blond as a mate or giving yourself a vasectomy.

5371881 5373500 If either of you enjoyed it, make sure you tell your friends about it. Maybe we can start a thing.

5373614
Holy crap I'd love to. All I need is an "editor" (I use that term loosely, I don't really make spelling/grammatical errors), and some help posting stories and BAM!

My profile pic would actually mean something.

5373614 Please do. M/M stuff is basically all pony on pony. Searching anything with a guy always has the pony as the bottom.:ajsleepy:

Well I google'd blue Mary, Bad Dragon, and well...um, yeah I think I know what's on my Xmas list. :rainbowwild:

Is tang still around?
I haven't had it in years.

Ok... this is a very odd and off thing for me... This fic had everything I liked; M/M, Transformation, Gender swapped ponies... and yet... I don't like it, this isn't an insult the writing was amazing and it was a very well done story and I was liking it all, and then the ending... The ending is what killed it for me, starting from the word re-education is where it died instantly. I find it unsettling when someones mind and personality are stripped from them with out there consent, I found the ending that the speaker simply lost his mind and became a ditsy mare, if he would have kept his own personality and not been changed rather form, of course , the race and gender and a little of the mind, then it wouldn't have caused the massive pit in my gut that this fic caused. In conclusion, as a critic I find nothing wrong with the writing its self, hell even the story was great, but if that ending was changed ever so slightly, so he kept his memories and personality (with some changes here and there to make the fit) rather than the complete change of character into a completely different one, this this fic would have gone over a whole lot better in my opinion.

7.8-10

Dat ending tho

BIZZARE !!!!

The ending was cute. The story was kinda twisted but fun.

It was my understanding that everyone had heard

Fuckin' fantastic!

Well done.

:pinkiehappy: Hmm not bad... :moustache:

This is a nice Twight Zone-like story. Rod Sterling and I approve.

V8

The thumbnail looks weird af

Me when i enter this Equestria instead of canon Equestria.

You know, for a clopfic I really put too much thought into this.

And you came up with a unique and enjoyable story. Hell of a twist.

Honestly, this is a classic and you really should be proud of it. Is creative as hell.

The Monk
“and brought her muzzle to his ear. “If you so much as hurt one little hair on her head, I’ll feed you to my cock,” she hissed.” -Some Leech

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