When Joe finds himself in a new world, he has to adapt... and dose... in a rather unusual way. Time to brush up on his magic studies and pony history! And by brush up... I mean start. Not to mention the causal stuff. Learning about social hierarchy is a magic trick of it's own!
may god have mercy on Mercy on my soul for creating this abomination...
Hey....not bad...this story really good.
But this story need really longer words and line.
its a good story
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Thank's for the feed back. But... do the WORDS need to be longer, or the CHAPTERS?
5351703 About look like this. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/99485/arnold-schwarzenegger-a-mishap-in-equestria
But that ok. you line is fine (Emotion line) expect...Look line.
5351703 both my friend
I thought the title to the chapter was a little cliched givin the situation. but no matter I Ike this story so far
*Crater
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Three words: First, story, ever.
Literally.
My first story.
THE FIRST.
Written... 4 years ago, so... 2012 for earth.