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Seven Fates


That girl that writes things you may or may not read. TG stuff, probably. Avatar of my batpony Evening Script by baladeAdvent.

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OK, I am thoroughly amused. I'm liking the fact that you're having 'realistic' problems for both comedy and believability.

988043 Do you find I'm dealing with 'conveniences' decently enough, through bad things following soon after or other?

Yeah, you've got to be able to have fun with magic as a unicorn, but of course you've never been trained. 'Crawling' to walk was an excellent idea, and I think it's the first time I've seen that used as an explanation for how a human can suddenly walk (more or less) as a pony. None of the good-then-bad seems contrived either, so that works. I'm somewhat surprised at how well your parents took things, but we can chalk that up to shock or something. I'm sure it'll hit the fan now that they're back home again. :trollestia:

988508 My real folks are pretty laid back. My father and I have watched enough Science Fiction together to not be surprised by much of anything, and I think my mother would secretly be thrilled that if I suddenly turned into a pony, even if it was one of a colorful and magical variety. Always used to talk about how much she loved working in a stable back when she was young.

Still going to have some ground-rules in the house.:rainbowlaugh: The family reunion hasn't even started yet, either.

Wet

This Is Why I Love You Dude..
So Amazing..

989083 I'm glad you like it. Out of curiosity, what do you enjoy about this particular venture?:unsuresweetie:

Wet

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I Really Can't Explain It... Just Know That It Brings A Smile To My Face...

Awesome! Love this new story, I'm super excited about it! Another human/pony fanfics from you? BRING IT ON! :rainbowlaugh: But...
"I look at Dom just as she is moving to join Dad."
Dom? :facehoof:
Other than that, awesome job. :pinkiehappy: And first comment, woohoo! :rainbowlaugh:

:derpyderp2::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:<-- (Sign your a new pony and naturally liking the icons) Okay when I started to read I was captivated and now It's just really good :3 hehe I'm loving it. :pinkiesmile:

I agree that the parents seemed to be taking it a bit lightly, but that's okay. :rainbowlaugh: I like how you explain everything really clearly, it's all really easy to understand. great job! There was something else I wanted to say, but I forgot. :twilightoops: Oh, well! :rainbowlaugh: i'll tell you if I remember. :unsuresweetie:

:3
THIS IS THE. BEST. POSSIBLE. THING!

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Dom from Gears 3 decided to stop in for a sentence.

993927 That would explain my desktop exploding.

I was wondering how long it would be before that happened. :trollestia: Should I start giving everyone mental images of what Lyra is probably up to, or can you handle that on your own? I mean, fannon doesn't exactly peg her as a shrinking violet.

994053 Oh believe me, 'I'm' in for a surprise when 'I' get 'my' body back. :ajsmug:

"Wait, horn? Fuck, that’s right! I’m a motherfucking unicorn! I can magic that fucker to do what I want!"

“You can’t go doubting now. I’m a goddamn unicorn after all.”

“I wasn’t just laying there playing with myself while you were gone.”

*claps*

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Lyra Becomes a Human Male for a Week and Bones Ponyville? :trixieshiftright:

Wet

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Stop Guessing His Next Works..

Very nice, looking forward to next chapter!

Also curious as to how things would be for Lyra

999884 May very well hear from her soon enough.

I gotta read this as soon as I am affected by writer's block :derpytongue2:.

1003205 I'll go ahead and say now that I would be lying to say you hadn't been an inspiration in this. :pinkiecrazy:

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Maybe my story was the inspiration for that EqD post? :pinkiegasp:
Nah. That'd be giving me too much credit without actually giving it :rainbowlaugh:.
Anyway, I gotta look into this story soon. :pinkiesmile: Just have to, um, fabricate myself some writer's block first :rainbowwild:.

Well, I read it :pinkiesmile:, liked it :twilightsmile:, and will take notes of how you explore this fascinating concept :ajsmug:

1005181 Keep an eye out later this evening. Chapter 4 should be up soon.:pinkiehappy:

Oh, and I'm thrilled that you like it. :raritystarry:

Oh man, this story keeps getting better. Keep up the good work!

Me gusta.

Forget about sleeping, reading this is better.

I need moar!!!

Excellent chapter! I noticed some slight errors, which I can point out in a PM or something.

At any rate, I enjoyed reading it, and look forward to the rest of the story!

1008083 Considering that I've been doing this for fun and not bothered concerning my editors with it, I haven't particularly cared about the small errors. Still, if it's not a trouble to you, I wouldn't say no to what you've found.

Is there a story of Lyra's POV during this body swap week?

A voice calls from the other side of the bathroom door. “Soren, don't forget we're going into town today. We need to pick up groceries for this afternoon.”

SOREN!??! What the hell!? I want that for a name :fluttercry: !!!

Now if this happened to me, I'd be like,"Um, awk-waaard" and then try to do my best to explain everything.

God this is just hilarious to read lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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though i think she would mind if it was OUR actual kind of pony
now the cartoon eeeer.... anime style pony i would be able to get along with
i meen just look at that face can you say no to that? :rainbowkiss:

EDIT: now that i'm finished ill give a proper comment...
MMMMMMMMMMMMAAAAAAAAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRR :yay:

absolutely delightful cant wait for the next chapter Oh! btw it seems that you are working on multiple story's at ounce seeing how i read all of displaced in a single night i was wondering how you got all your ideas down do you have a pad of paper or tablet?

can you imagine going to TROT CON or another pony convention with that body you would be like
:rainbowderp: i better get some bodyguards and watch my own back, i cant even fathem what would happen but i would do it anyway just to see the looks on there faces :rainbowdetermined2:

So yeah... Kind of embarrassing, but I only noticed a formatting issue with Chapter 4 this afternoon while checking over to get prepped to write Chapter 5 turns out that there was a huge damn gap where the received, sender and subject lines should have appeared. I blame the rough nature of the GoogleDocs import script.

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Well shit, that dashed my hopes of seeing Chapter 5 right now. :raritydespair:

Oh well, at least you are making a chapter 5 soon, so I'll be waiting :twilightsmile:

1052455 At least it serves as notice that it's being made. :pinkiehappy: You'll probably see it in about three or four hours, depending.

i feel sorry for him i'd freak out if my cousin saw me as a pony :twilightoops:

You really gotta write some clop into this, succumbing to the curiosity! The sexual tension is palpable.

Or at least mine is, if you know what I mean.

This story is really funny :rainbowlaugh:
I feel bad for him but still....

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Don't worry man,
You're not alone!

If I had a female pony's body for a week... I'd feel bad for the real owner of that body.

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And lyra(Male human body)+Bonbon.

OH GOD CLIFFHANGER :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: !!!

Can't wait for the next chapter :twilightsmile:

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I can always try, but I'll tell you all now. I have no idea what I'm doing.

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Don't we all with our first time~

Oh well, don't force yourself if you don't want to, it's important to just have fun, yanno.

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Meh, you don't have to. But if you do, read up on some other clop stories; such as TAW's stories or Crowley's - They're good.

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I'll say right now that if I do follow through with this ludicrous idea, I am not at all going to take it seriously. Maybe people will like it, considering how seriously I'm taking this [and how well that's working out].

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Maybe writing pony smut is your special talent?!?! :scootangel::applecry::unsuresweetie:

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