Oh man, this story keeps getting better. Keep up the good work!

Me gusta.

Forget about sleeping, reading this is better.

I need moar!!!

Excellent chapter! I noticed some slight errors, which I can point out in a PM or something.

At any rate, I enjoyed reading it, and look forward to the rest of the story!

1008083 Considering that I've been doing this for fun and not bothered concerning my editors with it, I haven't particularly cared about the small errors. Still, if it's not a trouble to you, I wouldn't say no to what you've found.

Is there a story of Lyra's POV during this body swap week?

When this updated i was all like art.ngfiles.com/images/98/sirreginald_fuck-yeah.jpg

Now if this happened to me, I'd be like,"Um, awk-waaard" and then try to do my best to explain everything.

God this is just hilarious to read lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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though i think she would mind if it was OUR actual kind of pony
now the cartoon eeeer.... anime style pony i would be able to get along with
i meen just look at that face can you say no to that?

EDIT: now that i'm finished ill give a proper comment...
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absolutely delightful cant wait for the next chapter Oh! btw it seems that you are working on multiple story's at ounce seeing how i read all of displaced in a single night i was wondering how you got all your ideas down do you have a pad of paper or tablet?

So yeah... Kind of embarrassing, but I only noticed a formatting issue with Chapter 4 this afternoon while checking over to get prepped to write Chapter 5 turns out that there was a huge damn gap where the received, sender and subject lines should have appeared. I blame the rough nature of the GoogleDocs import script.

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Well shit, that dashed my hopes of seeing Chapter 5 right now.

Oh well, at least you are making a chapter 5 soon, so I'll be waiting

1052455 At least it serves as notice that it's being made. You'll probably see it in about three or four hours, depending.

It will be a dress and it will be pink and the swap back will occur at the most inopportune moment.
I have spoken!

News I say it? MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRDDRDDRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! unless its not OK....

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His dad's going to use him for experiments!

What? It's what I'd do if my son turned into a pony! SCIENCE!!!

Second coolest parents ever.
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Those were the coolest.

1st 3 chaps were great, this one pissed me off for some reason

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I guess it would piss you off that the sheer fact that Lyra loves a human body!

... So does this still count at a self insert then, even though it doesn't suck balls? Or is there a set of rules for something qualifying as a self insert that I'm unaware of?

1750215 Any time anyone writes themselves into a story, it's a self-insert. It's no more reasonable to say that all self-inserts suck than it is to say that all fanfics suck.

[quoteI ]I was going to tell them everything later; they’ve got enough on theirr minds Two R's on their. I could not ignore this. Loving the story, I just wanted to make it better

I loved this I lhapter and the story can't stop reading I Love it so much.

Unicorns are mobile wifi hotspots <-- New Headcanon

Same with my outing myself as a Brony.

Ha! I've been hiding in the closet on this since 2012 and still nobody is the wiser!

First, I would like to say it's nice that you tried to give a reason for the lack of a freakout from anyone. It does seem rather forced, as even a professional paranormal investigator would have a far stronger reaction than this, but the only way to really fix it would be a complete rewrite.

Anyway, the slapstick got more than a few chuckles out of me, and I admire the fact that you aren't going the rout of complete cluelessness as far as locomotion, but also not stumbling around for five minutes and suddenly galloping across mountains and tightropes. You have a nice, realistic middle ground and it's quite refreshing.

P.S. In case you're wondering, the reason I'm not giving actual constructive criticism is because this fic is four years old, and I'm sure most of the faults have already been addressed. I'll start that up when I get caught up.

Did Bon-Bon ever warn her about stairs?

She warned you about stairs, bro. She told you, dogg.

wait so if unicorns are wifi then is twilight a huge wifi source?

😕

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Can see it now.
Twiggles having a friendship crisis. "I figured it out. You aren't friends with me. You're just hanging around near me for the free wi-fi !!!". Rainbow Dash responding "Quit freaking out Egghead and hold still already. You're messing up my streaming of the new Daring Do show."