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Wonderful chapter Seven Fates! This has been a pleasure to read! Brohoof! /)
Wooooo!
1329039 I'm glad you liked it. I hope the grim nightmare didn't detract from the story too much.
Just felt like the right thing to do. It certainly has a sort of a 'meaning' if you look at it the right way.
Wow, demonic dream Lyra, you scary!
Fack. This is getting real.
...so the gelding...
I don't like your version of Equestria anymore.![:raritydespair:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritydespair.png)
Oh, well. Here's to hoping you get stuck in Equestria as a pony forever and ever, cheers!![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
Sweet chapter! Wonder what the purpose of the dream was...
So when you become Lyra on Earth, you should say "Fuck this Gay Earth"
1329080 Mm yes I agree with you. No, no the nightmare hasn't detracted it from the story. Nightmare? Heh. Believe me, I have seen far worst things in my life as an alicorn. I understand how it was needed and how it benefited the story. I guess it adds more to it, you could say.
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Sometimes I wish I could be mortal like everypony else... I have seen countless friends of mine, being taken away from me, by the sands of time. I want to have a family. I want to be loved and stay with my friends. But eventually in due time, they will grow old and wither..and leave me to be alone.
1329223 Hey, I just conquered writers block and wrote 2000 words in one night. Gimme a break.![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
1329237 Well shit, That's damn impressive. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_cake.png
This sounds cool, I'll get to it later.
i just seen it in the BOX and i was like "ALL THE YES" immediately closed my searching for storys tab and went to this![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
well i read it and it is still as good as the first chapter poor guys just going up one of the last hills of the nightmare roller coaster but he still has to take the fall afterwards im going to have to reread this once its done!
I didn't read your comment... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png
Random Comment is Random... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
Wait, isn't the mind a--![:pinkiesick:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesick.png)
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ow my head
Wait what the heck?
Hm.![:trixieshiftright:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trixieshiftright.png)
...
1329578![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
It is explained in later chapters though. I'm on chapter 9 now. Every chapter just gets better, trust me.
I hate to do this, but
I think you'll find that it is a lyre-marked flank, hence the name Lyra. Um... please don't kill me![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
Also, great chapter. It'd be nice if Soren-Lyra got to go to Equestria for a while.
DO WANT MOAR!
1329237![:scootangel:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/scootangel.png)
When people complain about lack of MOAR and/or the presence of cliffhangers, it means they like the story.
You know... for a society that has more mares than stallions... you would think they would taked the whole gelding this a bit lighter... I mean, what is the point of ruining future generations? Maybe this is the reason that Equestria has the 7/3 female to male ratio. I mean, the most males that were shown at one time were in Canterlot or Appleoosa.
I am craving the Equestria chapters now... HURRY IT UP DAMN IT! SO THAT I MAY PROCRASTINATE MORE!
1329237 Just to let you know. i drowned once, The eage of my vison did NOT go black. i just passed out
Me gusta... Me likey!
It's an awesome chapter and I want MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Continue my good friend, continue!
I love this story
I... am really enjoying this fic. Keep up the awesome work!
Well, only one thing to say...
ohgodwhatamidoing...
You are all going to hate me for that.
1329606 It's actually a reference to anther fic featuring Lyra, Harpflank and Sweets.![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
1330217 I think you'll find that compared to Displaced, the 'I'm taking this seriously' factor was purposely left out of this one.![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
Wow. Freaky dream. I hope Everything turns out all right for Soren. If I were in his shoes, I would be demanding my body back as soon as I got to Equestria. The really worrying thing is whether or not head-Lyra will continue to exist in his head after the transferal of minds to their original bodies.
1330576![:raritydespair:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritydespair.png)
Oh, typical. Why must I always be wrong?
Nice job on the dream sequence. Those are always fun to read.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Well, I enjoy it so far. Good read.
Though you'd think, transdimensional travelling in mind, that Celestia or Luna (should your headcanon be that she is more apt in magic) would become more personally involved very quickly, pretty much the instant Twily sent her first letter (likely the day of the switch), if not when the crime/punishment took place.
Also, you broke the forth wall. Shame on you. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Pinkie_Pie_lolface.png
1330549 thank you for that.....informational link. I'm gonna go gauge out my eyes right quick.
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I liked it personally :D. It was kinda hard to follow for a second, but still it was pretty cool to read. Can't wait for the next one![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Oh I get it. Demon-Lyra is like the Lyra personality taking over Sorens personality. The reason why she trys to EAT soren is because its symbolizes Lyras personality taking over Sorens personality. Basically:
Demon-Lyra eats Soren: Soren looses him self and turns into Lyra fully (mentally)
Demon-Lyra DOESN'T eat Soren: Soren DOESN'T loose himself.
Im I right? Do I get cookie?
1334850 Pretty close. If you can explain to the best of your ability what the dream in itself represents on the whole, you get full marks.![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
A bit late because I just read this now, but is it about him breaking the fourth wall? Because I saw what you did there.
You sir earn a mustache.
![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
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Not bad writing, but could be better. Maybe review and edit the older ones some for Grammar errors?
all in all, excellent job
watching and waiting for the next bit.
>>>Now? I’m apparently a confused individual in a strange pentagonal room, trapped in a body that isn’t his, in a place he doesn’t recognize, full of memories that aren’t his...>>
...Leaping from pony to pony and always hoping that the next leap will be the leap home.
I see what you did there.![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
Also, gelding stallion mollesters. And what about all the mare rapists, hmmm? HMMMMM???!?!?!? Don't lie to me MOLESTIA!!! I know about your sexist ways!
*looks down and shifts his toes as he mumbles* Don't even have the decency to molest people who want to be molested by a hot, sexy, magical pony princess... (Alondro is a pervert)![:rainbowwild:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowwild.png)
Son of a bitch! I just finished reading this chapter, and I noticed you added a new one. I specifically remember there being 12 chapters total for the past 9, and now there are 13. Perfect timing.
So, any kind of sexual misconduct ends up with sexual mutilation as punishment, even drunken groping?
That's... a really barbaric and backwards society.
Equestria doesn't sound very fun.
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Take that 4th wall!
Nice Star Wars ref![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
Silent Hill: Lyra Aqua![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
OMFG what was that dream and Lyra what are you doing with his body I can't wait to see what happens next
1329537 WHAT ARE TRYING TO SAY!
![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)