Page generated in 0.027 seconds
Total duration
956 users online
1,185,938 hits today, 1,915,590 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
1635563 Well, good sir. I think this calls for ANOTHER!![:pinkiegasp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiegasp.png)
So, instead of a big weekly chapter, we get smaller chapters that update more quickly?
I'm okay with that!![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
"I just hope I don't do anything I'll regret."![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
Oh, Soren, I hope you will!
1635866 The updates have been doubled!
Forgive me.
Oh poor, poor Sorin.
I still have a few guesses as to how this will end, and no matter if I am right or wrong, I think I'll be happy. This is a really fun fic after all.![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
I think that chapter was cute, funny, and slightly sexy rolled into one.
...slightly more sexy than I was expecting or was prepared for.![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
1635917 More to the point, I update it in relatively short, scene oriented chapters in order to make writing easier while still allowing for the story to flow. It isn't so much based on week or anything like that so much as how in the mood I am to write, and how easily it is flowing in my head at the time. For example, Responsibility, Responsibility II, Spiral, and the Interlude were all completed in only a week because I'm really getting into the flow lately. Heck, you can probably expect to see another chapter by Tuesday if my output keeps up.
1635978 I felt it a relevant time to reflect on all the things he didn't openly reflect on. Sorry if it was too saucy. Was it a bad thing for you though?dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_gasp.png
Thank you sir, many we have another?
1636030 I'm starting on the 'official' chapter 22 Tomorrow, so don't worry.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png
Wow these letters were really sad and heartwarming at the same time. I really like the mandoloruan fraze. My friend and I are really into Mandalorian stuff. It also reminded me if how close me and my best friend are. Love the fic! Please update soon!
Lyra was able to connect to the other side with a computer. He should be able to do the same with his parents.
is it over? please dont be over
1636037 OK then ![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
kad is best jedii ![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
![:rainbowdetermined2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowdetermined2.png)
hay ner vode mandolorians are awesome!!!!!!
Ordo is better than Chief (Serra 117)
1636104 Of course it ain't over. Things ain't over till the protagonist gets his body back.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
And thus we see Soren the Vulnerable Human.
Damn, that was an empathy-generating chapter. Really well done, especially in the way Soren communicates with his parents and best friend. I mean, DAMN.
Although now I feel like it may be conducive to rework the beginnings with more clearly-angry reactions rather than what feels a bit like slapstick.
Yay another update!!!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
(I really need to start thinking about typing something else in my comments!)
1636193 Easy there, Corkscrew.![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
Has nopony thought to, you know, maybe do a mind-meld with him and try to magically back-up his human memory?
Or am I the only one of brilliant super-genius higher-evolved mental power to pull such an amazingly great and powerful spell off?![:trixieshiftright:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trixieshiftright.png)
Argh! I wanna read more!
1636114 Oh stop your lying! We all know he's going to just end up dying alone on top of a hill, thinking everything is beautiful and wishing he could write a song.
(Alondro is going to be making "Background Pony" jokes for days, now that he's latched onto the idea. Then he'll suddenly decide he's bored and stop. It's how his damaged brain works. He had a very high fever as a child, which caused severe damage to his recall memory centers as well as fracturing his conscious mind. Quite a shame, really! He's still quite smart now, but before the infection he was almost beyond brilliant. I would have to say he'd lost a good 30 IQ points at least. Oh, who am I? Heh, one of the fractures, you might say.
)
MOAR!!!!
please?![:fluttershysad:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershysad.png)
Heh... since you were hinting at the drunken escapades ending in... *crude noises* ... and a horrified Soren in the morning, and he's in Lyra's body, that leaves me wondering if Lyra will be getting her Foal this night as a result. "Love finds a way" after all.
Oh damn, I don't think I have ever wanted to give a story so many likes! Yet I am limited to giving only 1... That is so cruel!![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
Really, I can feel my pulse increasing as I read this story, I love it! Please, do not make it end anytime soon!![:rainbowwild:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowwild.png)
Also 1636203![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
Where did you get those awesome Lyra smilies?
Oh god... Calling it now, Soren's gonna turn into a foal.
What with no cutie mark, no idea what pony he will be, and no memories, it's just something that's screaming 'this is how it will end!' to me.
You know, I honestly don't care if I'm right or wrong, but please tell me the story ends nicely for all respective parties involved.![:fluttershysad:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershysad.png)
So wait, is Soren in his old body waiting for the inevitable transformation or is he still in Lyra's waiting for the inevitable memory loss? Because
implies that he is back into his old body only to be transformed to a different pony. (I don't know whether Twilight successfully swapped Soren into his female version of his body and Lyra's in hers or not)
TL;DR
Who is Soren in now, his female version of his body or Lyra's body?
You really hate the Soren you wrote for this story, don't you?
1636114
Bringing up Mandalorian, makes me curious. Did you ever play KOTOR or KOTOR II ?
1639304 You'll note that twice Soren's stopped to write. That being said, everything you saw written in Interlude - Letters in the Notebook is implied to have been written during Spiral. So everything written there was while he was still in Lyra's body.
1639381 I don't hate him. I just find it fun to torture him. Could be I'm both a sadist and masochist.![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
1639485 Yup. Own both in one form or another.
1639081 As far as being a foal after the transformation is concerned, there's absolutely no way that he's becoming a foal. Already did the grown-man-becomes-a-foal schtick in another fic. Nicely is dependent on how you look at things.![:rainbowwild:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowwild.png)
1639659
In any case, this is one of the more hardball stories I've seen on this website in terms of character abuse.
Keep it coming.
1639659Wait, you have another story like that? Huh, I thought Oh To Be Old Again was the only one on this site.
1639684 Check out Displaced.
1639718Yeah I saw. Currently have it open in another tab.
Hey seven fates, sorry about that emotionally charged comment on your last chapter. Sometimes I get moody during my depressive swings and I tend to lash out. I'm not going to take back what I said though. I meant it.
It's your story so, I guess the only thing I can do is sit and hope for a happy ending. (or at least a not so tragic one).
Best wishes.
I was honestly expecting a will. This sort of is, but I feel it is missing something.
Soren is acting ambassador for humanity, by default... though it seems pretty clear that any attempt to keep up relations between worlds would be near impossible.
ΔΓ
1641902 Given that he hinted at some real anger in that letter to Lyra [a certain desire to slit someone open from stem to stern and dance in their entrails], do you really reckon him taking on an ambassadorial role makes much sense?
Especially given that it was essentially Equestria's ambassador that he expressed this to... ![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
1641942
I suppose that makes sense. I was hoping he would appeal to the Princesses to fuck off entirely, or to tightly monitor travellers. Now that is all unnecessary, and it didn't fit terribly well with the characters, but it's something I would've done.
ΔΓ
1637570
FiMFiction Enchancements for Greasemonkey
//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra2.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_cry.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_ooh.png
Not like he will remember it for long!
This definitely needs more, and then some more
You have made one of the best fics I've had the pleasure to read. I wish I could write this well.![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
And then... He got hit by a train. Tragic, I know. Instantly fatal. At least there was no existential trauma.
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png
1643354 Thanks a lot! Now I can wait in peace! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png
1635866 You have set this story up in a way that you could really crush a readers heart with this, if you dare to try it.
I hope you don't. That would be the second Lyra story that crushed me in recent times (The other being Background Pony).
1655894 I keep hearing about Background Pony, but I never quite got into it. I guess I'll have to try and cobble together my own epub format and read it on my eReader tablet... I just don't trust the site's export feature because of bad tagging on things.
As far as the ending... I'm aiming for 'bittersweet', hence the acceptance in Letters in the Notebook and the attitude he's taking in this next chapter. If it becomes crushing, I don't think there's a lot I can do. Either way, that's the way the Soren crumbles.
I just wanna say that anyone who thinks Soren's already flipped his shit and set fire to it is sorely mistaken.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
1655938 If your going to read Background pony, prepare to be sitting there FOREVER.
An average chapter is like 30k words.
Also, bittersweet endings still make me sad sometimes.... it didnt turn out TERRIBLE for them.... but it definitely could have been better for them... makes me sad
If this wasn't about ponies it wouldn't make me sad really, ponies just bring out my softer side somehow.
1655965 Eh, it's still shorter than Fallout Equestria.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Trixie_lolface_1.png
1657616 The science of stereotypes!![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
This fic needs moar clop!![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
Seriously though, really like it so far, started reading it yesterday and ...yeah it was added as a fave for a reason.
PS: You really like making Sorens life a living hell dont you?
PPS: I really meant the moar clop thing![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
Sounds a lot like Autogynephilia on Soren's part![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
Well, this was miserable.
... I have no words. Hope is something no genre-savvy character should have, least Merphy's Law comes and wrecks their shit.
1723432 ...honestly...that law is my favorite.
This letter was so sad and sweet you could really see and feel where it was coming from I can't wait to see what happens next![:pinkiesad2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesad2.png)
![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)