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Well.
Okay then.
It seems like it'd be a bit cruel to leave them as they are, so I assume the minds will get transferred to the respective bodies before things go COMPLETELY to hell?
Yah, get Sorren smashed, that got to fix some problems
Drunk while in heat. Yeeeaaaaaa.....
Enjoying, looking forward to future updates!
1628283 All I have to say on the matter.
This was slightly depressing. Soren (you) never gets a break, just keep piling on the shit. Losing his mind and personality,ostracized by his family, his body is rule 63'ed, and now he may be stuck a pony with somepony else's memories in a partially transformed body. (Would it turn into a pony or some wort of primate?) //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
This will be even MORE interesting.
Comment 700. WILL READ SOON!
1628464 I'm working off the concept that there was no primate evolution in Equestria, and coupling that with the idea that a spell intended for use on ponies would only solidify that the transformation would be into a pony.
1628472 Nope. Fourpony got #700. Better luck next time.
Ya, I can't blame him wanting to get sloshed. Still, realistically he's way to melancholy to consider sleeping with some stallion while drunk. What I imagine? A really pissed off drunk Soren letting out his anger due to the situation, or a super emotionally clingy/weepy Soren lamenting what's happening. Depends on what stage he's at with respect to the impending 'death' acceptance process.
Found a few things worth considering editing wise:
This is a disjointed Sentence, a possible change:
"Then again, I did spend more than a few minutes crying things out with Lyra, so maybe I'm just emotionally drained."
Not sure if by "were by Corckscrew the Eccentric," you meant Corkscrew or not.
1628499 Ooops. I can't believe I made that corkscrew typo. As for the other one, I think I meant to write something along the lines of "I'm probably just emotionally drained."
From what I've heard though, people are pretty pliable on painkillers and alcohol.
The solution is rather obvious: just dump Lyra (while she is in Soren's body) back to Earth. No magical energies, nothing to fuel the transformation. It is a rather obvious step. Of course, Lyra will be in an awkward situation for a while, but she can handle it.
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Or, you know, she would not drink. There is always that option. Especially considering her current mental status, drinking would be a bad idea. And Soren being genre-savy enough to not drink the punch or whatever.
Lyra is kind of a dick.
Comedy... and tragedy tags? Someone didn't read the how to tag your stories post. Oh well, I'll read it anyway.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra2.png
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I personally thrive off schadenfreude and thus find tragedy high-larious. Though for a normal, I wouldn't call this a comedy, it's much more strongly the latter.
1628663 1628798 As I recall, D's post made no mention of the comedy/tragedy tags being used in conjunction.
Besides, there wouldn't be the whole Tragicomedy genre in dramatic literature were Tragedy and Comedy not meant to be blended together. Granted, I might be deluding myself with whether or not there's enough comedy to lighten the mood. I may very well be deluded to the point where I can't recognize that the story becomes progressively less comic and more tragic as it goes on.
Granted, I am also a horrible, horrible person who felt hungry after reading Cupcakes.
well its come down to drinking has it? poor guys gonna have a horrible pony life but things always seem to have a up side to them
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Would the power of a spell determine if the human body starts sprouting a horn or wings? Cause many authors just go no magic human body straight to a no magic earth pony body. That seems slightly racist (specist?) against earth ponies.
Woohoo, 700th post! How is that good? It's just divisible by 2, 4, 5, 7, 10, 20, 25, 35, 50, 100, 175, and 350.
1629226 Magic interacts unpredictably in situations it was not intended for, if you ask me. The effects are as random as tossing a three-sided coin. Yeah, think about that one.
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Be easier just to create an anonlogy with a 6 sided, fair die, 3 of the sides being copied to one other side. Still a 1/3 chance but far easier to make fair. Making a fair 3 sided coin woul... oh, I am thinking too far into this.
1629335 Well... I did say as random as the toss of a three sided coin. Would that in itself not be random?
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Are you beginning to talk in circles with me? Cause I am not following your logic, using as to compare things would imply they are equal. However, if you are using the literal meaning of the 3 sided coin instead of the metaphorical, then yes, the choice would not be random.
1629398 Eh, anyways. What I'm trying to say is that you don't have to worry about it being a case of "Not-magical, Eh? Earth-pony!" I've had a different result on my mind since day zero.
Yes, I referenced the Sorting Hat from Harry Potter. Sue me.
Hey Lyra. You remember when you told Soren to live it up as a girl, and then I told you to be careful about what you tell Soren to do in your body while its in heat?
I like where this is going.
I'm a horrible person.
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I am not J.K Rowling, I have no reason to sue you. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
Well I had my question answered a couple lines back, so continuing on a tangent could possibly be a waste of time for one of both of us.
Yes, I did just reference GLaDOS.
So, not only Soren might become a pony, but he may remain female forever.
Let's hope for the best and have him become a futa black & red alicorn.
1629398 a three sided coin could be compared to a D3 which is a D6 with 1 and 2 being 1, 3 and 4 being 2, and 5 and 6 being 3 (yes i do game too much) or it could be a a pyramid shaped coin with 2 of the corners rounded off
Drunk and in heat? whats the rating agen?
soren you can pull threw this, i know you can, just stay sain in the meantime , when life give you lemons bring them back to life, burn down life's house, WITH THE LEMONS!
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I personally would rather go with a statistical model despite computer random number generators are not truly "random".
1629370 Nah. It happens all the time. Heads, Tails, and Edge.
Why not birdshot? (Gatling gun optional)
1628522
Maybe... but Lyra is in a relationship with Bon Bon and Soren was a male originally, and not a pony originally, so while in Lyra's body and gaining her memories he has two very strong aversions to that kind of situation. This is all on top of his impending doom and all the melancholy emotions attached to it.
A big part of the conceptual difference for us here could also be that aside from mentioning being in heat and the smell it comes with, he hasn't shown any increased sexual desire or tension through these chapters yet so you might be thinking of it being a bigger deal in your mental projection of the setting than has been put to words for us to read. So far, it just seems like a smell that advertises to others and a set of warmer haunches than normal.
Obviously you know the direction of your story and will write it out as you plan, I just find the idea of him going for it while drunk in this situation after that hectic day, as a pretty big stretch.
Well Soren maybe the best you can hope for is getting back in your body. It might be a female pony when all is said and done, but it seems that it won't be getting any better.
1629860 I don't deny that it would be a pretty big stretch considering how he's expressed no desire or and barely any sexual tension. At the same time, if I was in his situation, I'd probably barely pay the slightest attention to my own arousal; heck I'd probably compartmentalize it so that I wasn't even aware how I feel until it's too late [if you can do it with anger or sadness, why not the feelings of an unfamiliar body]. That makes sense in that screwed up 'If I don't pay attention to it, it can't hurt me' logic that usually leads to workplace disasters, right? Who has time to be turned on when you're being embarrassed by somepony else's sex memories, running from Pinkie Pie, visiting the library [twice], going to the spa, and saving a projectile filly, right? I see what you mean though.
Oddly enough, the only tension that's really been present has been his own awkward attraction to the female form of his human body, and even then it's only been hinted at in that same vague way I implied the transformation in the first place. The only avenue I could probably see anything starting in that situation, I think.
Hopefully the Interlude chapter between chapters 21 and 22 will help put some of your concerns at ease, though. I know everyone's been so darn curious about what Soren's been writing in that notebook.
1628497 ... Shite.
1629226
Pfft, 648th post is better.
1629285 Heads, Tails, Edge. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
O ya Soren go get drunk while in another pony's body that has emotional imbalances. Cause that worked great for Lyra the last time she did it
Damn you Fates, damn you. I started reading this when it was a funny story of a human in a pony body. I could handle things when the nightmarish images and stuff started happening and even the initial depression was understandable. But the tragedy tag? Now that I've started reading this I want to know how it ends and I can't stop. I used to be happy every time your story updated, but now I get a feeling of dread. I avoid the tragedy and sad tags most of the time because of my depression. Now I'm on a roller coaster I don't want to be on that's promising a crash over the top of the next rise. Damn it...
1630578 So long story short, I'm evil, right?dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_cry.png
1629285 By "unpredictably" do you mean to imply that it's also possible for the magic to start a transformation, get half-way through, and then effectively say, "Buck it," leaving the transformation incomplete, and the transformed as something like Centaurshy
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or that it could just decide to start a new transformation part-way, leaving part or all of the already transformed body?
Great chapter.
GGNORM
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That's fine Seven Sorens, the first exposure I had to Cupcakes was digital art of a really sexy humanized version of RD in bondage. So naturally, the story then took a somewhat different tone when I did read it. Of course, the answer to "does it taste like rainbows?" Is "No, you forgot the hot sauce again". Getting hungry is fine, it's a mild fic, really, since it is purely visceral and not psychological. Halfway through The Games We Play I was feeling worse than finishing Cupcakes.
However, there is not nearly as much comedy in the recent chapters as before. Ever since Soren's Inscape, comedy has basically been removed from the story, except in schadenfreude senses: "Oh, hah hah, Pinkie wants to throw him a party, and he doesn't want it because he's dying. Hah, loser."
1630641 Oh you and your centaur fetish... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png
1630647 ...I already asked a centaur-related question in a comment on a previous chapter, didn't I?dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_future.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_ooh.png
you sir deserve a mustache another amazing chapter, i really cant wait to find out what happens. and um avian creature= bluejay and human= pony? wow thats awesome?
id tell soren to cheer up that it isnt that bad but he does have family and friends, defintely makes the i dont want to be a pony stance more understandable.... hope it all works out and that this fic continues on for quite a bit longer
>> Seven fates I think the coin will land on its side and he'll become an Alicorn
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But WHY?! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl2.png
No one is giving me any criteria? Would 643, 653, or 691 be better? They are primes!
1631144
I thought we were rating numbers by how many divisors they have. By that standard, primes are actually pretty bad.
I really must've missed the part where Soren's body starts transforming. Where did he get that idea from?
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The first hint was when Lyra was talking about walking barefoot.
The second clue was how relaxed Lyra seemed after just chasing Pinkie and Soren all over Ponyville for a half-hour. It was implied that she's gotten some incredible endurance since the transformation. This stamina again rears its head in chapters 20 and 21, when she seems to have no problem carrying a basket of apples around Ponyville.
The third clue was in Twilight's 'Rape Basement of Science, and again in Rarity's boutique. It was implied that her skin is becoming surprisingly lighter in tone. The 'silver radiance' could very well have been either his body preparing to grow a coat, or it could have simply been him catching sight of a momentary surge in the transformation.
This was then expressed again at Sugarcube corner when her face took on the appearance of having silver dusting it.
The final hint was him noticing how pointed her ears had become.
Get blind drunk and forget everything for a few hours....while in estrus.....No, do not go there. This story already has had enough weird things in it, it does not need Soren having sex in Lyra's body. Not too mention how that might complicate things with Lyra....oh and vice versa.
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Ah, I see. Thanks.
To be honest, I wasn't sure who you were referring to when I first read those parts. After all, Lyra can refer to her body or her mind.
I also never would've jumped to the conclusion that Soren's body must be undergoing a transformation.
That's where my initial confusion stemmed from.