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So awkward. This poor guy.
The description alone makes me afraid to read it. It simply doesn't flow well.
Well, this is getting weird.
And I mean that in the best possible way.
1436191 Eh, I won't oblige you to read it. I don't deny that the synopsis could better composed, but like I've expressed after the main synopsis, I'm doing this project more for fun than for any real fame. I've got my serious projects for that. That being said, the idiom 'Don't judge a book by its cover' still applies. Hopefully you'll ignore the godawful synopsis and give it a chance.
I'd like to see Soren training his/her magic and showing everypony how good he/she is at exploding stuff.
Ummmmmm. Pretty awkward there for Soren.
Guess at his expression then
The stocks? Holy shit, Equestria has some even more horrifyingly disproportionate punishments.
Hooray!~
Aww...
Hooray!~
Cutie Mark Crusader Peeping Toms! Oh my god.
Woah, interesting end there. So Lyra wants foals, a daughter specifically, and Bon Bon possibly doesn't like kids?
What the fuck is up with Equestria's punishments?
...Well that's awkward. I mean really awkward.
Sorren just can't seem to win, what with the awkward memories, the mental horror-rooms, etc..
Of second floors, and three curious fillies, ladders, and bedroom times.
That ending, I have centaurs on the brain and it's leading me to thoughts of Sorren remaining in Equestria, him and Lyra regaining their proper bodies, with their correct genders, eventually getting together, and Lyra becoming pregnant with Sorren's child, and about nine months later, a centaur foal, a filly, being born.
A look into Lyra's secret desires.
Great chapter.
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As I begin to wonder how in the hell you manage to get away with a teen rating.
1436553
>So Lyra wants foals, a daughter specifically, and Bon Bon possibly doesn't like kids?
Couldn't be any clearer that Bon-Bon really does not like kids. Maybe she doesn't hate 'em, but really, really, really dislikes them.
1436745 I probably did traipse about the boundary there, but I think I kept it pg-13 enough.
1436752 Whatever image you attempted to link, it failed.
1436765
A woman after my own heart.
1436432 good thing he has magic with that he stands a measly 1% more chance of living
1436784
You described, and I quote, the "Out of this world sensation".
1436838 I also did not directly describe how that sensation was being caused.
1436784 of course you did this isn't a clop not at all! it is still PG-13 legal
1436919 I can't help but feel you're being mildly sarcastic.
Okay... this.. is more than teen...
1436765 I was allowing for the possibility that Soren was misinterpreting her. Considering the ponies in question, she could have just been going for "I hate the CMC" specifically.
1436960
no really not clop
at least from MY point of view it is not clop, though it gets a little raspy don't get me wrong
i might just have to reread it just to make sure the situation at hand
*edit*eh maybe later don't feel like reading it again right now maybe another day
1414217 i agree she seems too willing in that picture/gif someone should change that
and i KNOW it was only made for the awwww thats cute nonsense
you know what? i just no longer care about that picture anymore
1436553
> Cutie Mark Crusader Peeping Toms!
Now why would they want to be boulders? That's not gonna git 'em cutie marks fer sure!
1437341 You never know until you try!
Good story, and no problem with the "mature" content here, but I am becoming increasingly concerned with Equestria's "justice" system. Seriously, try to take over the world and all is forgiven when you get home (1000 years is a time-out for an immortal), mind-control an entire town and get a stern talking-to, but hit on a mare and face gelding and a month in the stocks? There's a story in there, and it doesn't go to nice places....
"We plow your fields, we haul your goods, we defend your borders, we give you foals. We guard you while you sleep. Do not fuck with us."
It made me laugh more than I wanted to.
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1439859 Ayup. Neutering.
The sudden bright red Mature was the only thing I needed to realise this story was about to evolve. Might I just ask, what was with the immediate escalation? Not saying it's bad, just… unexpected.
It's good to finally see some Equestrian action going on here. I look forward to Lyra's discharge and her adventures beyond. Carry on!
1440246 I came to the decision after comments regarding the chapter impressed upon me that I was delving into territory that might land me in hot water if someone chose to report violation while it was flagged as Teen. I felt it would just be easier if I upped the rating and loosened my leash.
1440346 I guess that makes sense. Good luck with the next chapter.
1440346 Bah, sensitive fools.
Can't take a bleeding warning, eh?
Word of advice, mark each individual chapter with it's own rating.
That wait, they won't have any excuse to bitch after the fact.
They got a warning, and they went on reading anyhow.
That way you can mostly keep it to a teen rating.
1441245 On the flip-side, Bon-Bon's at least good enough to make Lyra responsible for him. It can't be all bad though. Lyra wouldn't stay by his side the entire time if she wasn't at least concerned, at any rate.
wow, huge cluster fuck
You didn't just up the rating on this fic to mature for this one chapter, did you? Because seriously, this story is set up perfectly for sexy shenanigans. And Lyra has shown herself to be fairly open-minded.
1441651 Honestly, its for a looser leash type of deal. If I feel the need to write more risque scenes, I don't need to worry about boundaries as much. There probably will be a few more such scenes.
I think the punishment system is actually fairly good. It looks not at punishment, but in terms of long-term impact:
Luna is an exception to the rule as a goddess. Nepotism and being the judge's sister and all that. (Or you can argue it was a death sentence: They murdered Nightmare Moon, however Luna was an accessory to the crime and paid for it with the 1000 years of prison).
Other than that, Want-it-need-it was dispelled and nopony had any long-term issues. Public apology and embarrassment was fine as punishment if you consider that it was an accident. Raping someone cannot be defined as an accident, and sure as Tartarus can cause long-term impacts. Gelding significantly reduces the risk of a repeat offender, and with the high level of magic, confirmation of the crime there is more guaranteed than here (See "Seeing the Pattern", Lickedy Split's court case), and it also can be fixed much easier were it false. A stockade visit as a "warning" if they exhibit dangerous indicator behaviors is reasonable if cause and effect of the stockade visit helping re-integrate is not entirely unfair (it would be were it entirely punitive though. I'd imagine ponies to be big on rehabilitation).
Then again, with the Powers That Be, it would be easiest to simply alter the minds of any high-risk people. There's probably some unwritten rule about brain reprogramming though. They need to learn their life lessons the hard way, or something, unless the danger is immediate.
1449015 I like the way you think.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png
1406131 hahahahaha that comics funny what is it called?
1449449 El Goonish Shive
Yet another story I HAD to read one chapter after the other.
Now, I must wait for the update...
Good work!
(Man, I love this site emoticons and abusing them! )
Why the "Adult Content" flag all of a sudden?
How do u get the emotocons that arent on the right of the screen?
1630602 Just click the one you want.
1630602 they are a downloadable Arron that you have to get
This spells very bad things in my eyes :/
That w was a good chapter I loved it all and it so sweet how Lyra wants a a baby girl
2928568 This is what I think of for her daughter...
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1630729 Hoorah ;P *does a quantum leap in to your house and hugs you* no touchy touchy meh kind.
I sense blackmail