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So, is this what y'all were imagining when you asked me to write you some clop?![:fluttershysad:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershysad.png)
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Well, i guess it works.
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Should I feel bad if I liked it?
I need a cold shower.
"Cloptional", what a wonderful word; it tells you everything you need to know about this chapter.
And I went ahead and read it anyway.![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
I'm sure none of them will regret this in the morning
1690977 It's okay, you did your best.![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
That is all I have to say....
"Is people mean by beer muscles?" seems to be missing a few words.
1691398 Fixed.
Mind = blown. Twice.
Nuff said
No Lyra, he was drunk and in heat. There was no way he could give permission in a right state of mind. The aftermath is going ugly. I really hope he can switch bodies before pregnancy sets in.
1691107 MY SIDES OH GOD MY SIDES!!!!
I'm sure I won't regret staying up late for this in the morning![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
1691528 Mmm?
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Well. That just happened. Can't wait for the obligatory shenanigans to ensue.
I'm honestly surprised nobody is calling me out on how bad that was.
Kinda reminds me of when i read Cupcakes. I felt like i was losing my inhebitions, but it didnt make me want to gouge out my eyes. You, sir, have popped my clop cherry
Well... That was fun. I was actually expecting Soren to use his horn on Lyra but... I digress. Also I'm going to go ahead and say for the record that if another pony tasted it they would have agreed with Soren. Sadly Lyra was in a humanoid body at the time and could not appreciate this.
The main truth behind that reasoning being that humans and ponies are completely different on several base levels. One of these being how things taste.
This didn't make me feel nearly as uncomfortable as the "in-depth description of getting penetrated" would normally. That means you win!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Meanwhile, the Mane Six are having a gay orgy in Twilight's Library.![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)
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1691731 Really, I was just working off the principal of "Jesus Christ, you're drunk!" for that part. I personally think Bon-Bon would have agreed with Lyra in this case.
1691742 I honestly can't tell if this is a good thing or a bad thing... 'cause honestly I thought this was awful.![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
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Well you also have to take into account that it's an extremely bad idea for a male to taste their own semen due to it being toxic to the producer. So I doubt Bon-Bon could agree as hir (Hir is the lettering for herm, futa, or genderswaped party.) health would not allow it if she tried.
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I think that most people were rooting for girl-on-girl (or fillies, or mares...) clop. It's incredibly hard for a heterosexual to enjoy reading about taking a dick from a male's perspective, regardless of the body. That said, I believe you did a good job for the circumstances.
Unless you were talking about the other thing. In that case, everypony decided to "enjoy [their] new penises" like Soren said, just because they thought it would be the polite thing to do. Besides, 'orgy' is just another word for 'sex party,' and Pinkie Pie definitely has what it takes to cause six drunken, genderbent 'mares-with-flares' to get in the swing of things.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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You're far too modest!
And now the biggest question on my mind. Is Lyra going to get pregnant?!![:pinkiegasp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiegasp.png)
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I was actually truly surprised by the A/N saying you were a virgin. You're not going to win any smut awards for this chapter, but it was written pretty well.
Lyra's hymen being intact is... odd. The hymen can be damaged by many things that have nothing to do with sex or even penetration; hell, even vigorous masturbation can do it (and I doubt a hoof is going to be gentle when it comes to that sort of thing). For an adult with an active sex life, a fully intact hymen -- while not impossible* -- is improbable.
* Just like there are many things that can break a hymen without sexual penetration, it is possible to leave it completely or nearly intact despite intercourse.
That said, a child's hymen can certainly grow back after being damaged, and the Real World™ has a surgical procedure for restoring the hymen (hymenorrhaphy) as well as prosthetic hymens. Add healing magic (hell, just magic in general) to that and the ambiguous biology of MLP ponies, and who knows?
1692042 Why did the reveal in the A/N surprise you?
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1692058![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
The chapter didn't particularly read like the author was inexperienced with the subject matter.
Oh my...![:fluttershysad:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershysad.png)
But really, I am surprisingly okay with this. Not bad for your first try at clop, not that I'm an expert of course.![:applejackunsure:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/applejackunsure.png)
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Semen is not toxic, whether to its producer or to another individual. (It is, however, possible to be allergic to a specific individual's semen, including your own. It's not common, though.)
1692079 It's what happens when you read a lot of smut.
It's certainly nothing I'm proud of, but such is life. Oddly enough, despite being embarrassed/disgusted by the fact that I actually wrote this [instead of a stereotypical next morning fade-in and continuing] and being slightly disturbed by all the... encouraging comments this chapter has received, the biggest thing concern I have about it all is how well I covered the POV related detailsdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_gasp.png .
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Um. Research is good for the soul?
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Ah it seems my information was a touch off once again. Strange isn't it? How oddly well versed I am in stuff like this yet I have never published a clop chapter?
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Wow, when you write clop, you don't do it half-cocked do you ?![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
1692206 You're telling me. Most clop chapters I see are barely 2000 words, and mine is only 200 or so short of 5000.
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Despite this chapter being optional, will this have... "repercussions" later ?
1692234 dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_smile.png Doctor/Patient confidentiality, my dear.
Tried it. Didn't like it. Not going to hate on it.
Not actually that bad. As a one-shot-clop-fic this would be pretty mediocre, but it has the added satisfaction that we know about and care for these characters in their current incarnations. That adds immensely to the quality, being a part of a larger fic where this was foreshadowed.
That said, Bon-Bon still felt like a bit of penis on four hooves, but the Soren x Lyra emotion-play and mild domination-play from all parties was pretty good.![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
This has got to be one of the weirdest three-ways in ponyfiction ever... Also, looks like Lyra will be getting that foal sooner rather than later. And hey, it's even Bon-Bon's!
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Agreed
Don't usually read clop. I end up laughing too much. Yours was no exception. I skipped most of the stuff involving Bon-Bon and especially the penetration.![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
In short, I read this for the lulz
@Seven Fates:The A/N was kinda weird, but I'll probably be the same for the next 200 years.
OT: I liked this. No major errors to me.
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Yer bustin' ma sides, man! Whats is that second gif from?
I'm hoping this chapter does not start a trend I'd hate to not know how it ends due to not wanting to wade through a sea of clop. That said I'm quite excited about the next chapter although I'm very much wishing I had just skipped this one.
1692808 You don't have to worry; I didn't intend any other sex scenes in When a Pony Calls. Honestly, I think that this chapter will be a one-time thing.
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can't wait for the next chapter
awesome because I'm really hooked