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I laughed too hard at that.
And poor Soren.
Poor guy.![:applecry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/applecry.png)
Rarity you're being mean to the poor guy.
You're making me feel increasingly worse for Soren.
Hahah. When is'he' going to get back into'his body?
FULLSTOP.
We need to see what the hell happened in the Rape Basement of Science (which is the best name ever, btw). PLEASE, for the love of all that is holy, show us what happened in the Rape Basement of Science.
so soren's a herm?
WTF this make no sence
Not sure if sarcastic, or just trying to be helpful. (Probably sarcastic.)![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Dat Library.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png
Dat skirt-flip.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png
wow i am so pleased with this story so far! oh and yay for ponies in panties! (socks are a bit mich and i guess i dont get it)
1525482 Where did you get hermaphrodite from anything in that?
Soren likes women. That being said, he would also rather he were a woman [hence gender dysphoria]. Being a woman does not necessitate liking men however.
Lyra's body [with Soren in it] has entered estrus. As such, her body is prepared to receive a stallion's seed. Because of the hormones associated with the aforementioned cycle, and Soren's inexperience coping with said hormones in high concentration, he is experiencing 'desires'.
I thought the highlighted portion of text was rather straightforward.
Go into rape basement. Remember nothing.
Someone better draw a picture.
If that's okay with you...![:fluttershysad:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershysad.png)
If only the memory and personality backup just inserted memories into the already existing ones, Soren's life would be so much easier.
1525825 Blank comment. Try again?![:unsuresweetie:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/unsuresweetie.png)
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sorry it was suppose to say, MOAR MOAR MOAR!!!!!!
"Dude" needs to just sit back and relax. You're a mare for now Soren, you might as well enjoy it while it lasts...
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"Being a woman does not necessitate liking men however." Yeah, I think that's stretching the bounds of reality there. I would put it differently and suggest that the mixture of the two means that his preference is overriding the natural tendency of his current body and the heat is providing the drive as it were. At least that's the way I'd read the circumstances.
1525916 And now I'm the one who can't read straightforward concepts. My brain is a bit broken at the moment, could you please elaborate a bit? Do you mean put it differently in the story, or how I worded it to radiation_pony?
If it's the former, I'd chalk it up to a case of "'Soren' cannot properly articulate his own introspection."![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
1525638 sorry i dont have a dictionary on me heterosexual sounded too simuler herma-whachma call it?
mind clarifying it just a bit more?
First: I still enjoy your story. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png
Next: You would think if Lyra were truly concerned, the moment she realized Soren was of normal mind again she would have explained things without needing the skirt-flip prompt.
Also, I'm uncertain on your undergarment line of logic. Rarity has a number of materials, they are not all the hyper-thin polycotton blends here, she likely has winter fabrics. The only reason women's clothes are cold here is planned weakness: If a shirt is pathetic, they need an overshirt or/and undershirt as well, selling more product. If you feel the fabrics, you can tell it isn't just "women get cold easier": the fabrics are thin! Men's clothes are much thicker, warmer. I can't imagine Rarity, fashonista as she is, would make an outfit unsuited to the client in order to gain higher sales, especially if doing it gratis. A full-length dress made from proper materials would be plenty warm without undergarments (Scotsmen managed it with even shorter kilts that were thick cotton!), especially with Rarity's propensity to add unnecessary secondary frills and patches. The only reason I could see would be a human's propensity for recreational sex causing an issue: Fabric rubbing as you walk causing issues to one unused to a perpetual mating cycle. But not for the reasons stated.
But I'm being nitpicky. It means I like the story, since I'm clearly thinking too much on it.
1525993 A heterosexual individual is one who is attracted to the opposite sex. A heterosexual man is attracted to women and vice versa. Conversely, a homosexual individual is one who is attracted to the same sex.
A hermaphrodite is an organism that bears both sex organs required for reproduction.
1526025 I guess I'm making Lyra seem like an easily distracted sort of pony, aren't I? I wonder if she ever got around to telling Twilight about the show? See chapter 10.
As far as the undergarment line of logic, it was my thought that she might wish thermal protection of her delicates should she need to remove the dress for any reason [say, having to change], or for a bit of privacy [as she doesn't have a tail and her now up-right posture results in her genitals being partially visible]. Sorry if I'm not making as much sense right now. Almost 2AM and my brain is a potato.
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Yup...
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1526077 Your brain is a potato?
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1526026 oh sorry about that misunderstanding feel free to delete relative comments
Another entertaining chapter as always!
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I'll buy it on the decency angle, since she surfs human internet and so knows a bit on their customs. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Derpy_Hooves_lolface.png
Madre de Dios...
I want to enjoy this, I really do, but if Soren is bound to lose his memory I will be mad, nothing personal but i just dislike that sort of ending.![:raritycry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritycry.png)
Wow, Rarity and Lyra are being fucking cruel. Dude is effectively undergoing selective mind rape because of Lyra's bullshit.
Ok, this can only be said so many times before it would wear thin. Soren needs to stop being a freaking door mat so much and put his hoof down. No frilly ass dresses, his mental problems and gender confusion is bad enough as is courtesy of a certain idiotic pony who is now actively trying to make things worse. Seriously, Lyra needs to be put back into her body so Soren can kick her flank all the way from Canterlot and back. That or have him smack her and tell her to stop acting weepy, mare up and take some actual responsibility.
So that was intentional. (It was pretty blatant, but you'd be surprised what sneaks in with some writers.) Curiosity about that was pretty much why I've kept reading even though I thought it was getting way too morbidly fixated on Soren's fucked-uppedness and weird sexual stuff. It makes a bit more sense for Soren to be so messed up if they're dealing with gender dysphoria (and it seems like a good helping of denial) as well as the Lyra-caused problems, but it's still pretty unpleasant to read.
Though, you don't see very many stories with transgendered characters, and pretty much none in stories that aren't fundamentally about being trans. So, props for that, even though I'm not sure if this will end up doing more harm than good.
Some unnecessary repetition there, Seven.
Also, you used bothering three times in these paragraphs. Consider synonyms.
Otherwise, good chapter. I sense Soren's resistance slowly diminishing.
Twilight Sparkle's Rape Basement of Science.
Best. Name. Ever. Why does Soren constantly see her as some sort of pedophile though?
1526929 You're probably right on the synonym part. It's amazing how much things make sense when you're freshly awake. Gone in and fixed those things. Thanks.
He doesn't see her as some sort of pedophile [darned if I haven't imagined that as a result of Psycho Twi], just accentuating the point that he can't read Equestrian.
1527223 He did just go flipping her skirt, don't forget. He kinda deserves that much.
1527619![:trixieshiftright:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trixieshiftright.png)
Well, makes sense there. Here I was thinking he was insecure for… why, no reason at all...
“Don’t be silly, Soren! You’re a girl now!” Lyra cheers, clapping her hands. “Live it up a little!”
Lyra... You really should be more careful of the things you tell Soren to do in your body while it's in heat!
1525237 might i add that i absolutely love your profile picture, now don't eat to much potassium or you could die
have you ever experienced insanity? not a lot of people you know can tell they were once insane. the feeling is hard to explain. Its like not knowing who you are or what you are doing. every thing you think goes away. you wanna talk but you have way of talking. no idea whats up or down. is that person your enemy or your friend. When i was insane, crazy, or whatever you want to call it, reality became a nightmare. Ask if you wanna know how i became psychotic a two years ago or wanna know how i became sane once more.
He actually admitted he had gender dysphoria?![:rainbowderp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowderp.png)
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![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
*slow claps*
"Props bro, props."
Honestly, I have to admit to it too. I mean, everyone is probably curious at some point in there life what it would be like to be the opposite gender than what they were born, right? Right?
...
Yeah. Right.
--
I imagined this in Bill Nye's voice. Complete with the trumpets at the end.
I'm probably going to Hell now, but it's TOTALLY WORTH IT.![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
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Really ? I was thinking GlaDOS.
I'm pretty sure in this case it's a crime of behalf of fashion.
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Bill Nye must have worked with GLaDOS once.
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The thought comes up when I read fics from the female perspective.
1529580
Sure. Insanity is an interesting topic. I'm trying to use it as a plot device, and don't really know what I'm doing.
1525941
I guess the story wording, sort of. Mostly, though, I was simply commenting that for a female to like males (and vice versa) is what I'd call perfectly normal. (although we are talking about Lyra here, so...). I was proposing a rational conclusion for Soren's apparent interest in Lyra, despite the general likelihood of physical desire tending towards Stallions. By way of rational conjecture, he's doubly twisted here, since it seems implied that Lyra likes mares and Soren likes women. So, he's got that attraction going on both ends in this case.
Why would Twilight be getting embarrassed about sexy times if she's in her Rape Basement of Science?
Pedophilia and You? Lesson Zero, anyone?
Also, unadvoidable memory wipe? No wonder he gained Woobie status.
1530348
Yep.
Where should I start?![:duck:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/duck.png)
![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)
First off, I'd like to see those panties Rarity designed.
Secondly, "SHIT! FUCK! HALP!" comes to mind.
Thirdly,
seemed to be a bit of foreshadowing. And I love your dress.![:raritystarry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritystarry.png)
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The insanity bit. Has anyone, specifically with the first name of Vaas, ever told you the definition of it?
2196785![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
Yea, he told me it, so I killed him. Stabbed him 38 times in the chest and ate his hands.
2691743*cough*37*cough*
OMFG somebody's has to help him![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
![:pinkiegasp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiegasp.png)
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1530683 dude. That might be the funniest comment I've ever seen. I'm saving this forever. Took a screenshot.
2691743 Can I have the ears? If you deep fry 'em and cover 'em in powdered sugar it's a bit like elephant ears.