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Oh dear. Soren - sorry Silver - as an alchemist? Explosions incoming.
Nooooooooo!
God damn it, make a sequel.
Silver Script as an alchemist? Let's hope she doesn't meet up with Technia (my OC) on a Wednesday. Who knows what would be left of Equestria after that? Probably most of it, but the metaphor still stands.
2006712 Your comment inspired this comment.
silver script x Candy OTP
i need some help... i don't really understand the summery... who is doing what and what??? maybe i ust need some sleep, will read tomorrow
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It's like Pinkie's primary supplier for Party Cannon munitions is being created in the comments section. Candy and explosives? (Yes, I know Candy's actually a nurse. Just go with it.)
What it's coming to an end! Why!
Ah-ha! Alchemy is the answer!
*Alondro draws a complex design around Pound Cake Statue and activates it, transferring Pound's soul into a suit of armor! Alas, he loses an arm and a leg in the process which he must replace with automail* Dang it, now I need to find a Philosopher's Stone.
Over already, and I didn't even laugh. I actually feel a little sad.
If nothing else, I really hope Lyra learned her lesson about dabbling in the Dark Arts and should restrict her summons to less dangerous things. Like muffins. That way if she accidently summons a giant man-eating muffin, she can call over Derpy to, ah, dispose of the monstrous bakery treat. (What's that? A spin-off story? And I wasn't paid for it?! Not even mentioned in the credits? Confound those ponies!)
Sequel! :D
Also, tuna sandwiches are delicious.
if you want to deptrify you need gold needle.
Enjoyed this a lot.
I do wonder if the cast realize there is another family besides the Cakes mourning the loss of a son.
2006932 Its a bit more towards bittersweet. Thankfully the deathspiral arc was averted and cleared up quickly.
2006917 You would need a soul to sacrifice to create one wouldn't you? Maybe Sombra would have a spare stone lying around?
Now that the tragic lessons of power, responsibility, and respecting cross-dementional invasive species have been learned we can move on.
Also glad I was right that Lyra only needs a bottle of Excedrin migraine strength. That and parenting manuals, but that second one she isn't too upset about.
Looking forward to you Epilogue and your Sequel.
Yay, Soren is dead!
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It was bittersweet, the person who he once was in now dead. Dead to himself since the partial erasing and literally dead to all his friends and family from earth.
Though about Pound Cake, I remember a small bit about GLaDOS making some drastic breakthroughs in medical knowledge, as well as traumatizing Fluttershy.
I shiver at the thought of Tulpa. Thanks....
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Don't worry, Silver, explosions fix everything!
Has somepony been on /mlp/ recently?
Also WAIT FUCKING WAIT.
THAT'S THE END?
...wait, no. Epilogue. Good god man, you gave me a start. I shall save any further commentary for the finale, then!
... I always did like alchemy.
A bodily item of the afflicted. The blood of a Cockatrice. A Mother's Tears of Sorrow. Ginger root. I'm sure I'm forgetting something else, probably a mineral or a gem.
On a more story related note: Aww, the story's almost finished. I hope there's a happy ending in store for us!
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Or digging around in Buddhism.
A good ending, nice. Still a mare though.
Well, I do like the "pegasi eat fish" fanon.
And alchemy? Interesting.
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Well, that part was a given seeing as it was either that or being gelded earlier in the story.
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The gelding thing is dumb. As if the gender ratio wasn't already screwed.
2007032 Bah! You just boil up some roots of those screaming plant people things! Easy-peasy! Haven't you read "Harry Potter and the Chamberpot of Secretions"?
Oh
Oh my
Sequel NAO!!!
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Yeah that works too, but in "Final fantasy" series you need gold needle and i think it's easier to find gold needle than (What you called) "roots of those screaming plant people things".
I was going to cry, but then you mentioned a sequel. Soren- er Silver is a character that I love following.
2007810 Although it could be that that very punishment is an underlying, ancient reason for the skewed gender ratio, and nopony ever saw fit to change the laws regarding it.
I don't get the tulpa thing.
I loved this story. but I feel Soren (because that's how I know him and how it will stay for me) accepted everything too easily, I know that you tried to give him some time in the story to let him get used to the idea, but I still think he took it too easy, especially when his family will probably never see him, and he will never be a guy either.
That's too much to absorb, even for him.
Those are my only complaints, but otherwise, I look forward to the future adventures of Soren and Candy.
I cannot wait for the sequel. But may I ask this? How far in the future is the sequel? Are we going to get to see Silver Script during her university days? Or are we going to fast forward in time to when she has completed her studies?
Should I be sad for this story ending and because I need to wait for the sequel.
Or should I be happy that there is a sequel.
Mixed feelings.
Also, I like that story.
*whispers*
Can you read mine, if you don't mind.
"The story isn't over till the protagonist gets his body back" to quote a comment of yours in a previous chapter. Change of plot or just forgot?
Yay update!!!
Aw sad that this story is almost over but it's good to hear that you're planning on a sequel!
2009180 If I remember correctly what the word means, this may help a bit.
Fire shadow places a complex circle around alondro and five starfish, a leg, and an arm "taxa now you have your body parts back."
Quick Soren! Time to find the ingredients of the Mandragora Restorative Draught!
Love the tulpa reference; do we have a hidden tulpamancer among us? Oh, and for anyone interested, this site is really informational, especially the forums: tulpa.info (couldn't hyperlink for some reason)
FUCK YES! FMA!
Hmmm, Just what did Luna do to make her Tulpa take cloud her mind with rage? That is definitely not what's supposed to happen.
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I loved it all so much and can't wait to see what happens next
Haha, I'm actually really glad you threw in the mention of "Tulpas"
I'd had the exact thought when Mind-Lyra was still a thing earlier in the story, and then some of the psychological tidbits when Luna was setting things straight Mentally brought it to mind as well.
Sorry for a suuuuuper late comment, only found this yesterday, love it.
If in you're still even active, and check this stuff, you wouldn't happen to have a Tupper, would you? I certainly don't. Not after nearly a year, anyway, but time-frames, I guess.
kek
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Why must I cry -Youtube vid
I just finished reading this last night, and while I did enjoy most of it, but have one major problem. Lyra and Twilight got off scot free for too many actions. Even ignoring the entire Pound Cake incident and the fact that they hexed Soren without telling him, because Lyra wanted her body to be safe. Everything else they did had no consequences because of a bit of luck. First, Twilight broke Lyra into restricted magic section, and then left her unsupervised. Lyra then, without warning or real consent, or instructions for that matter, uses the body swap spell, and botched it, two days before going into heat, also blowing up Soren's computer. From there, Lyra gets Soren's body not only permanently gender changed (almost getting him gelded, there's justice there, permanently maiming a stolen body, then instead of doing the smart thing and locking up Lyra till the spell wears off (like they did with Soren in a way), they screw with his body without considering the consequences. They were incredibly lucky that the gender change was something Soren was for.
That's without considering the almost personality murder (now instead personality maim). So Lyra not only swapped the bodies without true consent, she botched it, and nearly mind wiped Soren, without giving him any information on her body. Then, apparently it's Soren whose the problem for having a messed up mind after potentially having his life ruined and almost getting mind wiped fully, while still slowly getting mind wiped? Of course his mind is screwed up, an alternate personality literally tried to erase him at once after doing some of it slowly. The obvious solution (one that they were so willing to do to Soren's body) would be to remove Lyra's horn so he doesn't get mind wiped, but that would be reasonable (and unlike Lyra, Soren didn't willing start the mind wipe the same way she willing sexually harassed Octavia). Also, I still have issues with the implications of the sex scene. Soren was already screwed in the head, under medication, and in heat in an unknown body, an experience he's never had before. He got screwed even harder in the head because of it, and in the end, Lyra and Bon Bon not only got off scot free, they also got a child out of it, something that wouldn't have happened otherwise. Also, Twilight didn't immediately go to Luna to see if she could help (which she could've from the start), instead just treating this whole thing like some kind of game.
alchemy...
time to revive your dead mom i see!