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Merry Christmas!
Merry christmas.
If those locations on Earth you gave match where you actually live, you and I aren't that far apart. That's kind of interesting.
1846324 You live in the HRM too, huh?
1846335 Yep. Lower Sackville, within walking distance of the Sports Stadium.
same to you, merry christmas!
Lloyd Christmas!
Merry Christmas and Happy Hearth Warming everypony!!
I was utterly confused at first.
I love this story, but dream sequences just piss me off, no offense.
1846335 merry christmas fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/219/7/1/mlp___hush_now__mommy____by_danteincognito-d5a6bxq.jpg
and a happy new year!
I love persona 4.
I was like, 'The hell is this?' when I read the first couple of paragraphs of the chapter. And then I was all like, Oh. I like this!
For some reason, 'Surrender' by Cheap Trick popped into my head near the end of the chapter.
1846584 Blew your mind?
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Yes, actually. I was incredibly surprised with the direction you took with the chapter. It was Grade A work, really.
1846598 What in particular about it did you like most?
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The bit where it all started crashing down and all around Soren, and especially when he had a bit of a self-realization tid-bit going on with himself. That's actually about when 'Surrender' wiggled up into my mind.
I, for one, enjoyed the dream. It was a bit confusing, but it became clearer as a dream as things got weirder. Plus the time skip would have been a terrible way to wrap up the last chapter, so I suspected a dream anyways.
Okay, I admit, you got me. I was scared the story was about to take a really dumb turn for a second there. I feel foolish now.
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don't worry, you're not alone there. I had to scroll down for the AN to make sure that I hadn't missed some kind of rewrite or something.
Dream sequence from out of nowhere. Soren acts like a complete moron to Luna. I mean there is his best chance to ask one of the princesses anything and he runs away like an abject moron.
Also could someone remind me just what the fuck Soren is waiting for again? His body is becoming ponified, his mind is in tatters, he's in town arrest, and now he's actively ignoring the Princesses aka the ponies best suited to help him in favor of his paranoia. I mean he's really got nothing to hope for and yet he's trying to get away. Get away from what? A decisive end to the story?
Yay update!!!
Also for the first few paragraphs I thought did I miss something then I figured out it was a dream! Great chapter!
Oh and Merry Christmas!
Merry Christmas!
"Can't sleep, they'll find me. Can't sleep, they'll find me. Can't sleep, they'll find me."
Poor Soren. Actually this whole story has been nothing but poor Soren.
Soren you're so paranoid
Merry Christmas/Happy Hearth Warming!
See, and I was confused there for a second. Thought I'd missed something earlier.
Then, I thought it was some sort of epilogue, for some reason, jumping ahead to finish the loop,
And then I realized it couldn't have been either of those things, and- OH DEAR GOD WAIT YOU'RE DREAMING RUN.
So yeah. Good chapter!
Marry Christmas, Happy Hearths Warming Eve, and Splediferious Holidays to everypony!
Seven, would you like me to mark some things that may need editing. There were a couple instances where synonyms were placed right next to each other.
This confused me greatly at first. Doesn't help that I'm half dead in bed right now, what with brain functions slowly shutting down and getting ready to sleep. I didn't get that it was all a dream until Luna appeared, that's how out of it I am right now.
Confound these ponies, they drive me to sleep depravation.
Merry... what was it again? edible reproductive bunny feces day!
Confusing chapter as it originally was, have a great Christmas yourself. I look forward to the next chapter!
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We just want to be your friend, Soooooreennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn........
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Oh, how I love dream sequences. They allow for easy to write character development, without making the story come to a screeching halt. You pulled it off quite well, in my opinion.
1846430 I'm done.
1847555>>1847581 Terribly sorry about those. They're the kind of thing that GDocs won't pick up on, and since I always publish late at night when my eyes are blurry from dryness, commas and periods look the same, so I don't even notice half the time.
1848394 1848320 I dunno why, but writing dreams comes naturally to me. Maybe it's because I'm always sleeping? Either way, I'd like to think that's why my dream sequences come out so well.
1847872 Sure. Late night postings make for goofy Seven.
1846976 You'll be pleased to hear, then, that this chapter marks the end of Soren running away. You know what that means! Soren's gonna do something stupid!
1848519 At least he'll be getting somewhere. What's the saying in Firefly? Can't do something right, do something stupid?
1848752 Sadly, I've never actually watched Firefly. Only Serenity.
1848772 Funny thing is watch Serenity lead me to seeing Firefly.
Nice dream sequence. Threw me off at first but well written.
Dang, dudey. That last chapter was... skinteresting to say the least. Awesome, though. You can consider me further skinterested in this story.
MegaTen, without a doubt THE BEST RPG series ever. No contest.
That being said, funny enough, FFIX is my favorite RPG of all. PERSONA 3 comes oh so close, but not quite. But as a whole, my true love belongs MegaTen ever since the day P3:FES arrived in my mailbox and I rushed to pop it in my PS2.
Ehhhhhh. Fuck dreams. Their overrated.
yes happy hearth warming eve to you Seven, also here i was about to rant on the fact of you going possibly into the future with out a explanation of it being a dream or giving use prior events leading to it
well shoot you made your self a nice OC huh she knew exactly what kind of pony she was gonna be before her body comply transformed...gotta love thos dreams that tell you the future
1852318 They're (they are)
Sadron.( i don't fuckin know, my ipad wouldnt let me respond to your message)
well um you are right.
Wait were you using your computer or something?
I like it. I started reading your story yesterday after it being in my read later since late october. I read every bit and very pleased with the story.
Finally got off my lazy rear and moved this from my "read it later" to "favorites". (Yes, I can be that lazy sometimes).
1846976Great chapter and again, poor Soren.
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True, but remember, he's not thinking clearly. His paranoia has such a grip on him that he's begun to distrust everyone, even the Princesses. It doesn't help that the ponies, especially Twilight, haven't acted how he expected them to act based on what he knew from the show.
The end of the week and the switch-back?
I'm more curious as to why they didn't send his human body back to Earth, Lyra's mind and all, when it was first discovered that it was changing. True, it may have been too late by then, and the lack of magic on Earth may have since become an issue for Soren's partially transformed body, but any serious damage due to magic deprivation shouldn't occur all that quickly, and it would at least halt any further progression of the transformation. Sending the body back to Earth shouldn't prevent the gender-swap spell from reaching its termination point right?
Speaking of which, shouldn't Soren's body revert to being male after the week elapses? I believe that I remember Twilight saying that the gender-swap spell should wear off by then. Or is it that the gender-swap spell was tuned to Soren's human body, and that when it changed from human to pony, the spell was thrown-off and unable to reach its terminating condition, due to "looking" for a human female to change back into a human male, but finding only a pony female, there-for being unable to make the switch-back? Granted, I know that this was just a dream sequence and weird things happen in dreams that have no need to make sense, but I still thought that I'd include that thought.
Another great chapter by the way.
You're gonna laugh but I had it in my mind that the interview was being conducted by Rick Mercer from the "Mercer Report"; when I think about it that would have actually been fitting.
Ah, that obvious Persona reference. I take it Soren dislikes Shin Megami Tensei?
I loved it all so much but so much Soren is to paranoid and needs to came down and relax and trust people again so they can help him I just hope that they can and merry Christmas to you to
you got me for a moment there I thought you skipped a lot of detail. I like that it was funny
3911469 he got me to sneaky