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Hey! Another update! You have my thanks.
Drunk, in heat, and surrounded by stallions. Not a good place to be.
Hmmmmmm
Guy in mares body surrounded by stallions while in heat...sounds like a nightmare. Does the universe just hate this guy or what?
This cannot end well for Soren.
wut
Theres absolutely no way this can go wrong with his body telling him to have sex and Lyra unable to handle male sex urges absolutaly no way this will end poorly
Drunken soren + encouraging Lyra?
Nice one there, with the sex-change.
Can't wait for the next one
Thanks for the punny warning about the next chapter. Even though it's not really my thing, I'll read it anyways.
Soren is bucked.
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Debatable.
...I have a bad feeling about what will happen afterward...
Regarless, still excellent; awaiting further releases.
1661616 -Lyra in Soren's Body- is still a chick so I don't know why you're mentioning male sex urges and her failure to control them.
Got to say, I was sure that -Soren in Lyra's Body- was royally fucked when the sex change popped up! Guess -Soren the Author of This Story- finally decided to cut poor -Soren in Lyra's Body- a break!
(I really enjoy saying that! -LyrainSoren'sBody--SoreninLyra'sBody--LyrainSoren'sBody--SoreninLyra'sBody--LyrainSoren'sBody-!!!)
1661469 Or maybe the BEST place to be!
...no. No. You're right. Not a good place to be.
1661616But it said Lyra didn't change sexes. But "she" is still surrounded by "guys"
1661820I concur.
Very good
haaha oh man YOU just had to take that equstrian magic conversion didn't you i was thinking of using it well whatever first come first serve i guess
Dude, Sorens life is officially fucked up beyond mortal understanding. I'm really starting to get some feels for his situation.
Still funny tho
1661905 Ha, that made me laugh
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Keeping in mind that all those stallions used to be mares.
I'm thinking Bon-Bon is going to be making a move, but that's just me.
Am I the only one worried about the combination of his medicine and the alcohol? You know, since it was kind of mentioned earlier that ne'er the two should mix.
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And here I a dark part of me was hoping for things to turn into one of Bronystories' tales.
And what exactly was Bon-bon looking at Soren with, bedroom eyes?
Well fuck....
Will we have time?
I need to stop doing that.
"A/N: Next chapter is clop-tional. If you don’t like clop, feel free to skip it."
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I can't say I was expecting this. The next chapter is gonna be even crazier than the rest!
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Best place to be
Can't wait for next chapter :3
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Yeah hit me as well, but then the promise of clop came up :D
I need to try that game next week then I turn 18
Thanks for having the fore-sight to mark the mature chapter, dude
Beginning: Soren being a perv with Lyra's body
Middle: Lame old Plot building
Now: Back to pervness :3
1663362 Hey, I know clop ain't everyone's schtick. Heck, it wasn't even mine to begin with.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png
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And yet here you are! Hear that?
*clip-clop-clip-clop*
It's the sound of new converts! We all cheered when this story's rating changed. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png Praise be to the clop god, for Xe has more worshippers!
My view of Bonbon right now: e.deviantart.com/emoticons/moods/love/lust.gif C'mon over "Lyra".
1663643 Really, Bon-Bon doesn't know what to think. At the point you all are in the story, she's probably incredibly conflicted about the whole suddenly being a stallion thing. On the one hoof, she knows that it's not really Lyra in the body of the unicorn she loves. On the other, the physical attraction she holds for Lyra is still there, and it's only skyrocketing because of her new, temporary form and the way the pheromones are hitting her.
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So what you're saying is... Bonbon's gunna get gelded. Good thing its a temporary transformation for her. It's like arresting a prosthetic hand for stabbing someone.
One thing I never got was the "control of hormones" thing. As soon as someone switches genders, they seem to completely lose control of their sexual desires and become slaves to hormones. And it's not just female to male, either direction will do it. Sapient creatures with recreational sexual activities likely have similar desires across the genders if they wound up developing an equal-ish society. Humans basically do. I'd've liked a smart-donkey reply from Pinkie of "you can't resist even the mildest of urges? What kind of friend are you?" (For good hypocritical humour reasons, since she never does.).
It's just weird. Random observation. If work was done to wind them up sexually, sure, I can see them losing it a bit, I've seen that in a few people, but never to the level portrayed in any fiction. Bonus points for real trans folk NOT going stir-crazy if they intake a lot of estrogen/testosterone.
...The only explanation is that the character really felt that way the whole time, and has an excuse to act on it now.
CLOP YES
Just when we all thought Soren was done with being screwed, and was about to die... this.
ΔΓ
Yay update!!!
Really a drinking game they're going to have massive hangovers in the morning!
I declare that this cannot go wrong ! - Thrackerzod
Nice chapter.
A preview for next chapter: Talk about "bucking" yourself.
One small Plot hole, shoud'ent lyras body turn human.
Ok-hay... clop.
And now it gets good...
1668170 Someone needs to go back and read...dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_unsuresweetie_flip.png
Wait so Soren's mind is slowly becoming lyra's. Lyra's mind is staying the same in Soren's body but Soren's body is slowly becoming a pony (female). So when this is done we may have 2 Lyra's one of which is in Soren's ponified body. Fun.
1671112 Potentially, yes, though there's no guarantee that Soren's ponified body would be a unicorn.
Edit: Or that they would leave him with Lyra's personal memories.
The question we have been asking ourselves every chapter: could this possibly get any worse for poor Soren? The answer you have been giving us every chapter: so very much yes.
You're amazing.
Finally got to some time to read this .
I have to say, Soren's got it quite bad, and I can't foretell with precision what the end result will be. However, the latest chapter gave me an inkling thatI he might get his (Lyra's) body pregnant, which I assume will be just one bullet point more in the list of things that has gone horribly awry in his life. Hay, I'm even wondering if he's got it worse or better than my story's protagonist. I mean, Soren's got support and friends in the mane six, and is in Ponyville. That's like getting a wish fufilled, even though as a counter to that, his memories are being overwritten (while his personality remains) and he may have to live as a female pony for the rest of his life regardless of whether he gets his memories back or not. So, yeah... wish fulfilled .
I almost feel like I have to add a few tags to my story, because he's having it really tough as well, and it might get tougher...
When Soren's completely(or maybe not) overwritten mind is returned to his body, his memories would be returned to normal?
1680605 Nope. Unlike unicorns, humans don't have any sort of biomagical memory back-up.
1679664 I don't deny that it could be seen as a form of wish fulfillment, but when you take into account how he got into that situation, it hardly feels like wish fulfillment. Begs the question, is wish-fulfillment still wish-fulfillment if it is forced?
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If the end result is a Soren who has become a Lyra clone with a different personality and maybe a different type of pony body than her, then it means he wont actually be very aware that he may've wanted to be in Ponyivlle and among the mane six. In other words, he won't recall ever wishing to be in Equestria.
1680699 Pretty much.
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You're having so much "fun" with Soren, hah. I'm going to admit something here, and right now. There are times when I actually tear up a little when I'm writing my fic. Yeah, I place myself in his hooves, and darn, does it hurt when I throw the really bad things at him. I know exactly how much he has still to endure, and it's not going to be easy. Soren seems to get several breaks, though, which makes me ponder if his ending will be more sweet than FPV's. I'm not saying anything spoilerworthy . Although, it might be a while before that story concludes, what with the chapters detailing so much about his mind work and having a slow pace . Your fic's moving much faster and contains more action. It got its own unique charm, I think. Alas, as much as I wouldn't want to, I often compare it to FPV and vice versa as I read and think about both, even though there are several differences and they have only a few aspects in common.
Anyhow, to speculate a bit: if Soren's personality remains intact despite Lyra's memories overwriting his, he will not become Lyra V2 in behavior. The result might be interesting though, as we'd then have two Lyras (appearance notwithstanding) who act and speak uniquely. I'd hope to see some kind of juxtaposing being done for contrast.