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...He got raped? I skipped the mature chapter![:rainbowhuh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowhuh.png)
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"What gives me the right to wish the past changed, knowing that I’d be condemning a foal to death?"
Species loyalty
Does teleporting back to the library mean that Soren is bound to Ponyville by the spell that Lyra cast? Or is it somehow part of her punishment for the incident with Octavia?
Wait... Lyra is bound to the center of Ponyville by some strange magic...![:rainbowderp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowderp.png)
Why does that sound familiar?![:rainbowhuh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowhuh.png)
1747257 Are you familiar with the concept of informed consent? Intoxicated Soren 'consented' to some naughty fun with Lyra, and then stupidly allowed Bon-Bon to get involved. Because he was intoxicated, however, he couldn't make sound judgement.
1747273 Species loyalty has little to do with the realm of thinking he was involved in. He was dwelling more on the events starting after his arrival in Equestria.
1747329 You'll hear the reasoning why he's back at the library in the next chapter. Just note that the Purple-white light should have told you it was Twilight's-not Lyra's-spell.
Yes, Lyra being bound to town does sound familiar. Someone may or may not be reading Background Pony in his spare time.
1747273 I would say that at this point, Soren doesn't even have a species. His current vessel is a pony, his mind is that of a human's slowly being overwritten by a pony, and his currently pony-occupied human body is slowly becoming a pony as well. Truly, Soren is right in the middle of an existential and taxonomical clusterfuck.
1747329
Time to break out the grey hoodies!
1747407 Then it's time to break out into song!
And then become nothing!!![:raritycry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritycry.png)
1747366
Makes sense. A little ironic, considering if this had been under better circumstances he probably would have been all over riding the tricycle with two other chicks. Or maybe not? These are technically ponies, and I probably would hate myself for that but-
Dammit since when is getting laid for dudes ever this complicated
:?!
1747366 Wasn't I the one who suggested Background Pony to you? I remember recommending it to some author....![:rainbowwild:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowwild.png)
Even if not, how are you enjoying it?
You know what is scary about all of this -- despite everything that has happened in this fic, if Lyra were to ask me if I would go along with a week in Equestria, I would still do it and hope for better than the way this went.
*sigh*
Clusterfuck of clusterfucks, what the hell is happening.
Not in the sense of "I has a confuz", but rather "everything is going to hell, goddamit".
1747465 Many have suggested Background Pony. It's been on my 'to read' list for a long while now, however. It's only recently that I managed to compile an epub file for me to read it on my e-reader.
1747476 With the coming events of the next chapter, it felt unnecessary to be too hard on him.
1747504 Nothing good for his sanity, that's for certain.![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
omg, so i'm guessing that Twilight put a spell on Soren that brings him back to the Library to prevent him from running away if he got so far away from Ponyville.
However if he was chasing a foal when the spell went off what's gonna happen to the foal![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
1000th COMMENTS!
Well done Seven, you've reached a rare milestone and i would like to congratulate you on getting this far. It has been a pleasure working with you for these past few months, be it on the fics you've wrote or on the chatrooms we help run.
This is a brilliant fic (which I still need to catch up on), and deserves the praise it gets
I'm surprised that these ponies are not supervising the alien gender switched pony better. He was obviously not prepared for his bodies urges. They all goofed.
Poor Pound Cake!
Well, that's a wonderful sign of trust right there; nothing says "we trust you :D" like uninformed limits to travel.
1747859 Would you really want some confused, brain-addled hung-over humanicorn wandering off in an ultimately unfamiliar world?
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No, but is that a good enough reason to not tell said humanicorn that they're are limited to the town and close surroundings?
1747574 maybe he secretly enjoyed the entire ordeal.
This should probably be: "In here," I whisper sheepishly.
Wonderful writing as always. Although I did catch a single thing that bugs me a bit...
May I suggest either an ellipsis, comma or rewording be taken to this particular section?
1748510 Ooops, nope. That's a case of not being 100% mentally there while writing and not noticing it before. Thanks for that though.![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
1747944 Especially after Twilight herself recommended he go to this park that was so close to this leash line. I'm now wondering about the inattentive park goers that would not assist in a foal headed towards Everfree.
Poor Twilight's gunna get a panic attack.
Poor Pinkie's gunna get in trouble for letting cakes wander off.
Poor Lyra, gunna get a court hearing just because Lyra was as drunk as Soren.
Poor Soren's... still Soren.
1747441 Bon Bon was a dude at the time... and Lyra's body was a virgin...
I got this horrible feeling that the foal got caught in the teleportation field and got smashed into the library wall, instantly killing the little fucker.
Next on When a Pony Calls:
Soaren and Twilight is the prime suspects of Foalcide!
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Does not bode well at all for poor Soaren.
love this story btw i get 30% happier every time i see it on my "Unread story updates" list, it on the top of my to read list![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
1749681![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
That doesn't help my brain pain at all
1750285 You're thinking of the Torah, I believe. Sodom and Gomorrah were biblical cities mentioned in the Christian Bible, the Torah, and the Qu'ran.
I was just about to rage about Background Pony but i just found a let read it YouTube. i cant read it. its interesting but every time i try to read it i get so sleepy i pass out. That happened with many different stories. there was one a very good book call White Fang. When i got close to the end i couldn't continue reading it. I stopped reading White Fang for a couple days and tried to read it again. couldn't.
EDIT: i cant TAKE it! The lets read is fucking ANNOYING! If you HAVE read it COULD you please EXPLAIN the story?! go to MY page and PLEASE explain! now if YOU do not MIND i have TO get some REST!
1748283No, deep down he loved it. And who says the author won't do it, hm? I'd say leave it to Seven Fates to decide.
1750068Then you'd love the fact that Soren in Lyra's body gave a then male Bon Bon deepthroat, and nearly suffocated when Bon Bon orgasmed. Then proceeded to beg for Bon Bon to rut him/her and eat out Lyra in his now female body.![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
Hehe, I'm such a jerk.
1750701![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
Actually the way you described that just made it seem hilarious
1751736Honestly, it does. Seriously though, that is really what happened in a nutshell. Only Soren was drunk, and he realised too late that Lyra was a virgin. Seconds before Bon Bon penetrated to be precise. But yeeeeah, they had a 3 way orgy.
Oh, and Soren said Bon Bon's cum tasted like marshmallow fluff. I laughed when Lyra tried to taste it.![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
1751754 GAH FUCK I TAKE IT BACK![:raritydespair:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritydespair.png)
![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
...clever brony. Blindsided me at the end there
1751777Hehehehe.![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
Mental imageing ftw.
This was interesting, seemed to handle the knowledge of having an orgy slightly different from what I imagine most guys think (I have never found myself in an analogous situation). Example:
chzmemebase.files.wordpress.com/2011/11/internet-memes-sir-akon-had-a-most-valid-point.jpg
Wonder if the mind-fuckery has changed who he is already, or she is... I don't know anymore!
Dun.![:pinkiegasp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiegasp.png)
Dun.
DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN.
Shit gets real. er. Realer. This is kinda turning into a downward spiraling shitstorm.
1747257 Yeah, it was a pretty awesome orgy.
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So, Soren's consent would have been invalid due to intoxication; meaning yes, he/she* was raped.
At this point I'm seriously regretting following this story; but I feel like I can't look away.
*Not sure what pronoun to use because of Soren's preexisting gender issues.
1747257 Let's just put it this way...
That was awesome I loved it all and he is going through the morning after feeling but you know the most shocking is that he loved it and he knows it
I teleported home last night
With Ron and Sue and Meg
Ron stole Meggie’s heart away
And I got Susie’s leg
DA
I never understood that concept about "you are at fault when I'm drunk and want you to fuck me and you do it". When you are not yourself when you drink then just don't do it.